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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 5 : Who IS SHE ?
PART 2
"What's your name?" Arnav asked, his interest highly peaked.
"hmm..." the girl was tapping her chin and seemed to be in deep thought...and then out of the blue she said,"Hey...WILL YOU SLEEP WITH ME...you know...as in HAVE SEX...?".
Disappointed, Arnav leaned back onto the wall and said in a businesslike tone, " Hmm...yeah. How much do you charge?"
The puzzled Girl in question replied,"Excuse me?...How much? ...*and then the penny dropped as the implication behind his words hit her * ...What the hell? FYI, I am not a prostitute!!"
And he responded equally curtly,"hmm...yeah ...whatever?" as he unlocked the door to his suite.
"Well?...", asked the girl, getting highly impatient at Arnav's callous demeanor.
"Well What?" came the nonchalent reply.
"Well...!!! Are you gona ask me in or not?" She said, just on the verge of loosing her cool.
"Yeah, sure...why not? The more the merrier...," he said, with a wolfish grin.
She gaped, and thought, "what does he mean by "the more the merrier".????
She inched her way into his suite, peeping over his shoulder, to see if there were scores of nudists doing orgies!
Arnav smirked, he knew perfectly well what implication his words had on the vibrantly sexy vixen of a girl.
Well, maybe I will scare her a little bit more, for daring to talk to me like that, he thought, doing his best to hold-in his chuckles. He quickly texted to Aman, telling him to arrange for his "night entertainment" and then elegantly, tucked his phone away!
He didn't like orgies or threesomes. But ofcourse, the girl didn't need to know that! He was going to teach her a lesson!!
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Several doors down the hallway, Shyam sat in his chair, swirling his drink. The contract lay on the table near-by.
Painstakingly, he had gone over every minute detail of his Plan. Not once, not twice but hundreds of times. It was a marvelous plan! He was so proud of himself.
He had had to change his plans recently, at which he had been highly irritated, but he had to do it just because of her!!! Because of her raving beauty. It was her snow white skin, her rose petal lips that haunted his dreams these days. But for her, he would have to wait a little longer.
So sure of his plan he was. So proud of himself he had become! And, as it has been witnessed countless times that "Pride hath fall", and so Shyam was about to have his. There was just one, yes, just one but very slight incorrect information that Shyam held.
There was a knock at the door. Shyam lazily, gets up to answer it.
"Aaee ye Khushi ji," said Shyam.
It was that, that the girl with whom he had fallen head over heals in love, was named Khushi and not Payal!
That Payal was infact standing right infront of him and was just about to forge Khushi's signature.
That the real Khushi, was at that very moment thinking really hard as to how to change Arnav's mind regarding threesomes and orgies...
And that her mind had been made up for her to spend the night with the very first man she bumped into...and she will do that...not because she chose to, but cos that is what Payal had chosen for her...
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Ta-daaa...for those who didnot guess it...Khushi has been hypnotised...mind-control...
my research has shown that a person under hypnosis can even commit murder, if that is what they are instructed to do that is...
As for why and how Khushi got into this...well that part of the story is quite sometime away...
I hope you all like it...AND ONLY if the current direction of the story is liked by you alls, then I shall continue...or I can end it...It does seem to be a bit boring...what do you think?
And a very hearty thanks to all who took their time out to read this story and comment on it...Thank you and Hats Off to you all... :)
Edited by s-576 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaay...First to comment

it was an amazing update...I didn't knw tht Shyam is like this...
nd thts why Khushi can't remember Arnav...I think they will do it nd after tht she'll get pregnant nd she will think or someone will say it to her tht she got raped..

loved the update plz continue nd plz pm me 4 ur further updates
Edited by MyAnastasia18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was super late... waiting for the next one... n u need to compensate by making it long 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update thanks for finally continuing it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally...U updated...Pheww...
Nice update...
I thought Shyam was a nice guy in this story...Bt nope...
So Khushi was drunk..Thats y she ddnt recogniz Arnav...
Anyway cntinue soon...
Waitng 4 d nxt part...

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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome come back so khushi was hypnotize thats why she does not remember asr love it as long as snake kept his hands of her awesome update thanks for the pm
Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
woohoo you are back
yipeee so happy about that
thought you might have given up on this but didnt
interesting wouldnt see this coming man
so she has been hypnotised to do this
oh dear not good not good at all
which would explain why she didnt recognise him again
and arnie has no idea does he
well how would he right
i would love to continue with this please
wait so did payal pretend to be khushi
but didnt shyam know what khushi looked like
uggghhh khud toh marr gaya aur khushi ko bhi marwayega yeh
really arnie she wont even know what she is doing so it wont make a difference to her mate
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
she was hypnotize
thanks for the pm
Edited by drunkiiebabe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
man this is getting interesting.. for a while i had thought u'd never update and there was no chance of knowing where this story lead
thanks a million for continuing
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


Just read this in one go 😃

Awesome FF 😊

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