Arshi FF: Love Outlawed [Ch5 Pg 14]

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Hello Amazing People,
I Have an Idea for a story for Arnav and Khushi. I am writing a short description of the story here, and if I receive a really good response THEN ONLY will I write this story. Okay, here is the beginning of the story.
Prologue
There HE stood, gazing down at the rise and fall of the valleys below. Even though he wasn't standing alone, it still was impossible to miss his imposing figure. Lean, hard muscles sculpted his beautiful body. Hair so dark and yet it looked softer than the clouds on which he stood. The sun-kissed bronze look was complimented by the chocolate brown eyes, which sparkled with mischief and wisdom.
"Arnav!!!", Aakash called.
The One called Arnav, continued to let himself get enchanted with whoever was holding his attention captive down below.
"Arnav!!!", Aakash called impatiently.
"Yes?" He asked, nonchalently.
For a moment, it almost looked like that he had forgotten about Aakash already, but then he turned around and spread his wings. The white, feather light wings spread wide and flapped, creating a gentle breeze. Arnav's bronzed torso reflected the light of the rising sun.
"GOD has been asking for his favourite Angel, now can you please go before I get in trouble for you not reaching HIM on time?" , Aakash complained.
Arnav chuckled, "Why Aakash, what new problems have you created this time that I have to take responsibility for?".
Saying that, Arnav vanished into thin air, which made it pointless for Aakash to answer that question since he too had to race off to GOD. Arnav would be there already, since he was the fastest of all the Angels. But Aakash was not jealous. He respected Arnav a lot and he knew if it wasn't for Arnav then he wouldn't have won his love.
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"Get Out!!! Get Out!!! screamed the Landlord at his tenant. "Get Out, NOW!!!"
"But where will I go, Uncle ji? My father just passed away yesterday, and I haven't even cremated his body yet, where will I go?" asked the 19year old girl with a beauty equivalent to Snow White.
"I Don't care Khushi where you go!!! Take your dead fathers body with you! If you can't pay rent, then you can not stay here. And I have tenants lined up for this house already. Look, they have even paid me advance on the rent!!! So get out!!!", screamed the lunatic, greedy landlord.
Khushi's eyes brimmed with burning tears. She had lost her mother when she was born and her father had taken care of her since then. She didn't have any other family, since her parens had been orphans themselves. Now, with her fathers death, she too had become an orphan. Where can she go? And she had heard that people in the surrounding villages had gone missing at night. She was scared. She didn't want to become a meal to those blood thirsty creatures that roamed the cold streets at night.
She looked at her fathers dead body. Maybe she can find a shelter before the sun sets. But how? She still had to cremate her fathers body and she didn't have any money?
"C'mon Khushi, move, just give it a try, afterall, if worse comes to worst, then I will be eaten by those vampires, atleast I will finally be with my parents", mumbled Khushi to herself.
With that sad thought, the 19 year old girl tried to drag her dead fathers body out of the house. Her eyes were searching for help, but non came to her aid. She was alone. The passers by ignored her and carried on with their daily activity. The ones which were looking at her were filled with lust for the unprotected beauty. Yes, Khushi was all alone.
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Arnav is an Angel. He looks out for the people living on earth, the angels are allowed to guide them, just a little bit, when the human spirit is surrounded by problems.
And Yes, there are vampires in my story. Does Khushi end up becoming one? How can Arnav protect her without interfering? Will he go against GOD? If he does then what will God do to him? But then, if Khushi becomes a vampire, then how can Arnav be with his love. One is the protector of Man kind, whereas, the other feeds on Mankind!!!
Now thats my storyline. I don't know which way the story is headed. This story idea just popped up in my head, and I wanted to know your opinions.
Please do post your views.
If I get a really good response then I shall start this story off. Otherwise, this would end up being the first and last post.
So, Please comment and post your opinions. Thank you in Advance.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please people, don't forget to post your views...comments mean I start this FF...no comments or very few comments mean this story is not interesting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting story line. I hope Khushi won't become a vampire. Please continue the story. And please add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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intersting but little confusion..plz update fast nd add me in pm list.. Plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waah kya baat hai ek baat batayiye aise acche acche ideas aate kaise hain aap sab ke dimaag mein wah ji
loving this story already hope you do continue but dont make her a vampire that will be sad
hope somebody can help poor khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds interesting ... would love to read more ... update soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The tittle is vry nyc n thoughtful...as per the titl m xpcting a lot so plz luk into it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow...loved it...Arnav already has the greek-god complex...and now you have made him into Angel!!!...its sad to see Khushi has no help :(
But i loved what I read...I love vampire stories...and with Arhi the romance is superb...so one Angel and one human...or is it One angel and one vampires story?...would be interesting...please do continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i can't say about others but i really want u to continue... it sounds interesting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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different idea and diffrent story line.
liked the way you started your story and feels like it would be one of the best FF.
you should continue your idea.
thanks for the update and PM.

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