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Posted: 12 years ago

Knock knock!!!

Look who's here to grace ur FF 😆 !!!!!

Someone whom you seem to have forgotten😡

Anyways why waste time talking to you?😉 I have my ASR jr to talk to...


I sent fervent prayers up to the heavens above as she started dressing me while singing, 'Aaye Meri Zuhra Jabeen' for some weird reason and giggling like crazy. ?????Aaye meri Zuhra Jabeen for holi? Seems like your mum momentarily lost the track of time n thought its Valentine's day To think I'm the kid of the guy who runs a Fashion House! Ur dad dint even protest when ur mum wore ridiculous outfits during their 2nd wedding whats he gonna do now??He was only worried about your mum's "laal naak"...oopsss! Did I just say 2nd wedding?...You may scratch that😆


We went downstairs and saw everyone in white and I wondered vaguely who would be dying today. I hoped it wouldn't be someone from our family. You know people wear white when someone dies but dunno they wear it even during holi?...My baby is so innocent! 😳😆

Anjali Bua wasn't there to do the job but then I remembered the countless requests I had received from all those lovely chicks from the IF organization after my New Year Resolutions to not interrupt Mum and Dad's Rabba Ve cos somehow they found them very Hot! What the?? WHICH LOVELY CHICKS FROM IF????? YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO KNOW ONLY MEEE!!!!

Anyways, at that precise moment Dadi came and raised her hand as if she was stopping traffic when in fact she was trying to stop Mum and Dad's Rabba Ve moment. Kabab mein safed n golden haddi with specs n no sense of right n wrong...humpf!!! Dad looked furious and I thought it would be a good time for him to kill Dadi off as we were all dressed in white anyways. Oohh lala!!! Me joining!!!!! Lets kill dadi off...I have many weapons with me...Ask Fari!!! 😉

To my utter disappointment he didn't and picking up Asmara and me, he strode out. That's one of the advantages of him catching and carrying Mum around! He has become so powerful that he can hold both Asmara and me together in one arm each. I love it when he does that! Hayyyeee! Wish I was there to witness that scene...Ask ur mum if he looked better than Salman Khan...he got to!!! *busy imagining n drooling over that scene*

Ohhh the scene that greeted my eyes outside was blissful! Everyone was running around throwing Maami's eye shadows at each other that were piled up in huge thaals. Maami's eyeshadows? 🤣 I din know they come in such variety...hotpink included 🤣


Dad kept touching his cheek with a goofy grin where Mum had applied the red color and I realized that Dad probably only got the privilege of getting touched by Mum each year at Holi! Poor guy! Ahem...Oh well forget it...If I comment on this, Fari will ban me from commenting on her fics ever 🤣

I quickly took a mental note: Don't drink Bhang (Ha - A chance would be a fine thing) Ah haan? Naughty naughty babua! You'll drink it for Sarah? Bolo bolo? Or a mini chamkeeli whose yet to exist?(If Fari allows that)


NK Chacho scratched his head furiously thinking hard before asking with a frown, 'What was that film called in which Shahrukh Khan gets married to Kajol?'

'Kuch Kuch Hota Hai' Dad answered promptly looking at Mum with a cheesy expression. Hell is going to freeze over!!! Your dad knows about movies? Esp romantic ones??? Hayye main mar jawaan!!!

'Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Ghum?' Dad answered doubtly. The world is definitely ending this year...



I LOOOVED the update!!!!!
Though I'm not talking to you...but anyways...I just finished my phase 1 exams today...have phase 2 next month
Pray for me...pleeejjj!!!!
Love you!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Knock knock!!!

Look who's here to grace ur FF 😆 !!!!!

Someone whom you seem to have forgotten😡

Anyways why waste time talking to you?😉 I have my ASR jr to talk to...


I sent fervent prayers up to the heavens above as she started dressing me while
singing, 'Aaye Meri Zuhra Jabeen' for some weird reason and giggling like
crazy. ?????Aaye meri Zuhra Jabeen for holi? Seems like your mum momentarily lost the track of time n thought its Valentine's day To think
I'm the kid of the guy who runs a Fashion House! Ur dad dint even protest when ur mum wore ridiculous outfits during their 2nd wedding whats he gonna do now??He was only worried about your mum's "laal naak"...oopsss! Did I just say 2nd wedding?...You may scratch that😆


We went downstairs and saw everyone in white and I wondered vaguely who would
be dying today. I hoped it wouldn't be someone from our family. You know people wear white when someone dies but dunno they wear it even during holi?...My baby is so innocent! 😳😆

Anjali Bua wasn't there to do the job but then I remembered the
countless requests I had received from all those lovely chicks from the IF
organization after my New Year Resolutions to not interrupt Mum and Dad's Rabba
Ve cos somehow they found them very Hot! What the?? WHICH LOVELY CHICKS FROM IF????? YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO KNOW ONLY MEEE!!!!



Anyways, at that precise moment Dadi came and raised her hand as if she was
stopping traffic when in fact she was trying to stop Mum and Dad's Rabba Ve
moment. Kabab mein safed n golden haddi with specs n no sense of right n wrong...humpf!!! Dad looked furious and I thought it would be a good time for him to
kill Dadi off as we were all dressed in white anyways. Oohh lala!!! Me joining!!!!! Lets kill dadi off...I have many weapons with me...Ask Fari!!! 😉



To my utter disappointment he didn't and picking up Asmara
and me, he strode out. That's one of the advantages of him catching and
carrying Mum around! He has become so powerful that he can hold both Asmara
and me together in one arm each. I love it when he does that! Hayyyeee! Wish I was there to witness that scene...Ask ur mum if he looked better than Salman Khan...he got to!!! *busy imagining n drooling over that scene*



Ohhh the scene that greeted my eyes outside was blissful! Everyone was running
around throwing Maami's eye shadows at each other that were piled up in huge
thaals. Maami's eyeshadows? 🤣 I din know they come in such variety...hotpink included 🤣


Dad kept touching his cheek with a goofy grin where Mum had applied the red color
and I realized that Dad probably only got the privilege of getting touched by
Mum each year at Holi! Poor guy! Ahem...Oh well forget it...If I comment on this, Fari will ban me from commenting on her fics ever 🤣

I quickly took a
mental note: Don't drink Bhang (Ha - A chance would be a fine thing) Ah haan? Naughty naughty babua! You'll drink it for Sarah? Bolo bolo? Or a mini chamkeeli whose yet to exist?(If Fari allows that)




NK Chacho scratched his head furiously thinking hard before asking with a
frown, 'What was that film called in which Shahrukh Khan gets married to
Kajol?'



'Kuch Kuch Hota Hai' Dad answered promptly looking at Mum with a cheesy
expression. [B]Hell is going to freeze over!!! Your dad knows about movies?



OMG!! Am I seeing right?? *rubs her eyes and opens them again to confirm what she's seeing* Yes, Its Ashum!! 🥳

Now Where had you disappeared off to?? You never even replied to my PM, never tried to contact me! I thought you had left IF for good *glares at Ashum with narrowed eyes* How do you explain your behaviour missy?? And even right now I know you're here for Ashar and not for me! 🤣 *sob sob*

So have you been reading this FF secretly all the while?? 😲 😳

How are your studies going? Di missed you alot too! She isn't as active as before either 😔 and neither am I! I update once every week or so! But It feels sooo good to see you back here!! 🤗

Khushi is wearing ridiculous outfits?? I haven't been watching the drama since Ramadan! Can you believe it?? 😲 I Just couldn't 😔

Anyways, you have no idea how happy you made me by popping back on this thread and leaving behind one of your absolutely wonderful comments! 😳 I missed them sooo much! 😔 But can't really blame you cos you had studies to do! Not everyone is an idiot like me who ignores her study for IF 😛

Anyways Its sooo good to see you back! Hope your exams went great!! Will definitely pray for you Insha'Allah 😳 Love Youuu ❤️ and I missed youuu! More than you probably know!! and Yes, I mean it too!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Knock knock!!!

Look who's here to grace ur FF 😆 !!!!!

Someone whom you seem to have forgotten😡

Anyways why waste time talking to you?😉 I have my ASR jr to talk to...


I sent fervent prayers up to the heavens above as she started dressing me while
singing, 'Aaye Meri Zuhra Jabeen' for some weird reason and giggling like
crazy. ?????Aaye meri Zuhra Jabeen for holi? Seems like your mum momentarily lost the track of time n thought its Valentine's day To think
I'm the kid of the guy who runs a Fashion House! Ur dad dint even protest when ur mum wore ridiculous outfits during their 2nd wedding whats he gonna do now??He was only worried about your mum's "laal naak"...oopsss! Did I just say 2nd wedding?...You may scratch that😆


We went downstairs and saw everyone in white and I wondered vaguely who would
be dying today. I hoped it wouldn't be someone from our family. You know people wear white when someone dies but dunno they wear it even during holi?...My baby is so innocent! 😳😆

Anjali Bua wasn't there to do the job but then I remembered the
countless requests I had received from all those lovely chicks from the IF
organization after my New Year Resolutions to not interrupt Mum and Dad's Rabba
Ve cos somehow they found them very Hot! What the?? WHICH LOVELY CHICKS FROM IF????? YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO KNOW ONLY MEEE!!!!



Anyways, at that precise moment Dadi came and raised her hand as if she was
stopping traffic when in fact she was trying to stop Mum and Dad's Rabba Ve
moment. Kabab mein safed n golden haddi with specs n no sense of right n wrong...humpf!!! Dad looked furious and I thought it would be a good time for him to
kill Dadi off as we were all dressed in white anyways. Oohh lala!!! Me joining!!!!! Lets kill dadi off...I have many weapons with me...Ask Fari!!! 😉



To my utter disappointment he didn't and picking up Asmara
and me, he strode out. That's one of the advantages of him catching and
carrying Mum around! He has become so powerful that he can hold both Asmara
and me together in one arm each. I love it when he does that! Hayyyeee! Wish I was there to witness that scene...Ask ur mum if he looked better than Salman Khan...he got to!!! *busy imagining n drooling over that scene*



Ohhh the scene that greeted my eyes outside was blissful! Everyone was running
around throwing Maami's eye shadows at each other that were piled up in huge
thaals. Maami's eyeshadows? 🤣 I din know they come in such variety...hotpink included 🤣


Dad kept touching his cheek with a goofy grin where Mum had applied the red color
and I realized that Dad probably only got the privilege of getting touched by
Mum each year at Holi! Poor guy! Ahem...Oh well forget it...If I comment on this, Fari will ban me from commenting on her fics ever 🤣

I quickly took a
mental note: Don't drink Bhang (Ha - A chance would be a fine thing) Ah haan? Naughty naughty babua! You'll drink it for Sarah? Bolo bolo? Or a mini chamkeeli whose yet to exist?(If Fari allows that)




NK Chacho scratched his head furiously thinking hard before asking with a
frown, 'What was that film called in which Shahrukh Khan gets married to
Kajol?'



'Kuch Kuch Hota Hai' Dad answered promptly looking at Mum with a cheesy
expression. Hell is going to freeze over!!! Your dad knows about movies? Esp romantic ones??? Hayye main mar jawaan!!!



'Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Ghum?' Dad answered doubtly. The world is definitely ending this year...




I LOOOVED the update!!!!!
Though I'm not talking to you...but anyways...I just finished my phase 1 exams today...have phase 2 next month
Pray for me...pleeejjj!!!!
Love you!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SmileyStar



OMG!! Am I seeing right?? *rubs her eyes and opens them again to confirm what she's seeing* Yes, Its Ashum!! 🥳

Now Where had you disappeared off to?? You never even replied to my PM, never tried to contact me! I thought you had left IF for good *glares at Ashum with narrowed eyes* How do you explain your behaviour missy?? And even right now I know you're here for Ashar and not for me! 🤣 *sob sob*

So have you been reading this FF secretly all the while?? 😲 😳

How are your studies going? Di missed you alot too! She isn't as active as before either 😔 and neither am I! I update once every week or so! But It feels sooo good to see you back here!! 🤗

Khushi is wearing ridiculous outfits?? I haven't been watching the drama since Ramadan! Can you believe it?? 😲 I Just couldn't 😔

Anyways, you have no idea how happy you made me by popping back on this thread and leaving behind one of your absolutely wonderful comments! 😳 I missed them sooo much! 😔 But can't really blame you cos you had studies to do! Not everyone is an idiot like me who ignores her study for IF 😛

Anyways Its sooo good to see you back! Hope your exams went great!! Will definitely pray for you Insha'Allah 😳 Love Youuu ❤️ and I missed youuu! More than you probably know!! and Yes, I mean it too!! 🤗



OMG!!! Which PM???? Gotta check the dabba!!!
I missed you all sooo much!! You have no idea
I missed di, iqra zehra aapi, tashu...shld i include you in the list as well?😉
Of course I missed you loads!!!
N You made me cry a lot during your SS :Its hard to let you go
I'm not going to forgive you fo that
I cldnt comment n m not sure if I can even now coz my mum's screaming at me to make dinner which m in no mood of
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh loveddd it completely...!!! plzzz pm me wen u update next...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavandkhushi1

Res

Okay back.

I LOVED this update. It was just plain hilarious!!! A big hug to you for completing 18 parts 🤗
Thank you so much for the PM! I love getting PMs from you! Now, to the issue of continuing or not, I would say CONTINUE! Please give us more of Ashars adventures and his sis Asmara.



Aww Thanks hun!! *hugs back* 🤗 My decision is made about continuing or not 😉 I'll just continue with one or two more parts! Sorry 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Risha.J

We went downstairs and saw everyone in white and I wondered vaguely who would be dying today.


You had me at 'dying' :D

Honest opinion? I still love this FF from the bottom of my heart but I do believe you should know when to leave the party. (By which I mean that end it at it's zenith.) I dont think your writing style has died at all! This is amongst the best FF's in this forum. But I think you should atleast finish the holi track.



You know what? I loved your advice the most!! Will continue with the holi track and then finish 😳 For some reason, I want to end it with the 20th part 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aaah ah .. so damn hilarious ... ROLFMAO .

i would seriously pay good money for this story to be adapted to TV..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Fari.🤗

You know what was going on around with me, so wont apologize again and kill of a very extended work limit already.😆 When I opened the page, I am was like strolling down to check how long was it, and OMG I am like Dude this long, must be the longest update she has given so far. 🤣And after you wrote the same thing in the end, i coudnt help but grin like a lunatic🤣

So to the update, first question first, I dont mean to be a pin pointer at all, but at some places you actually wrote 'Diwali' instead of 'Holi', even in your note in the end, so that was kinda of a little disturbing, but just wanted to tell you, not complaining really, little things dont matter.😳 On a honest note ASR should just open up some clown sale instead of a multi tasking Fashion house.🤣 Seriously with the kind of dressing Khushi does, and his not so very impressive dressing as well, I literally wonder about the customers who take his clothes, or so I think he makes good clothes only for them, and himself tries to keep him and his family, specially his wife just like a maid (the stopwa that his Dadi is mistook her for one anyway.🤣🤢)

like 'an Angel'. I thought he didn't believe in God, so were did angels come from? Maybe he thinks they can be manufactured at hospitals too - at his order, of course. Dad can be so stupid sometimes especially around Asmara.

This particular one send me to another world of laughter.🤣 Seriously when a atheist says that someone looks like a Angel I am like man no God, but Angels hain? Chalun ab bataoo Devil kaun hain tum?🤣

I mean, it's just Mum and Dad! Not anyone special like Gopi Bahu and Ahem Dikra!

Gopi Bahu and Ahem Dikra are the stars that do not exist on the sky Ashar baby, at least your dead grandparents can be stars, the poor guys even got kicked off from the sky, they didnt deserve it really.🤣

Dad kept touching his cheek with a goofy grin where Mum had applied the red color and I realized that Dad probably only got the privilege of getting touched by Mum each year at Holi! Poor guy!

The guy has so much connection with her eyes, he doesn't need the liberty to touch or get touched.🤣

My Mum's family was there too. And do you know what I found out recently? Garima Naani isn't my Mum's real mother! I should have guessed that earlier! I mean, she calls my mum Kooshi! What kinda mum pronounces her own daughter's name wrong?!

Okay so this one cracked me up equally.🤣 Like seriously when she was Koosi Koosi I was like kyaa hainn yeaah? Yeaah Khushii ka Koossi bananein ki permission kis ne dein hain usein? And besides typical Lucknowies they never even pronounce like that for God sake, that is the Beharri style.

If I had thought Manorma Daadi was stupid before, then after drinking Bhang, her IQ had nosedived to such a level that I was thinking of moving her to the poolside so that Dad could water her along with other plants.

Another one that simply made me go rolling on the ground.🤣Well waise bhi after a stupid chapter of World History when Whatever would have madee me grin.🤣 But this was just a lot more beyond it.🤣 If she can use your crayons baby, what other level of IQ were you even expecting? Besides, the plants would be fascinated by her faked beauty, who wants your Dad's garden wilting away in seconds? 🤣 I dont! Mere Rabba Va ki tou aise ki taise hojae gey phir tou.🤣


I think she had thought he would still be running around in his diapers even after his marriage.

If a fully grown Arnav can be called Chotte for no reason, him wearing and running in diapers should be no big surprise either.
🤣🤣

And btw that Payal and Aakash scene took me back to the Holi episode. Thought yeah the use of 'JI' has completely vanished from Aakash's life, Khushi is now only Khushi, Payal is now only Payal, thankGod Bhai is still Bhai warna he would be Arnav too.😳 The only stupid 'ji' that doesnt disappear is from 'Arnav's name Khushi says it, when is it going too go? 🤢


Since when did Arnav become a pro at KJO's movies.🤣 Woh bhi Hindi, whatever happened of all that MBA from Harvard thing? 🤣


Just as a die heard fan of Ashar, and a crazy fan girl of him I would really never want to have a end of his adventures, but on an honest note I think the bets judge of your own work is you and not us. You would when the things going stale and nobody would want it anymore. When a thing goes over and over in roundabouts that when it becomes boring. Your FF never goes like that so it doesn't make it boring.

Besides I think you could maybe pull it of to the 20th or 25th update would be a nice number to end at.😉😉

Overall, just absolutely loved loved loved the updattee.🤗

Thankyou so much for the Pm.

Love,

Batool😳






Edited by nav_bat - 12 years ago

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