FF: ASR Junior's SECRET DIARY! Part 18, Page 130 UPDATED! - Page 104

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Posted: 12 years ago
that was just superb...part 17 and 18 both were too good...
Loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
updates m comment on page 135🤣

sorry for being late. exams were on
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Alinaa-

Loved the update. It was hilarious as always.

I am new reader of ur FF. I would like you to continue. Ya I agree, there are certain repetitive topics like Rabba ve interruption, Ashar's comments on his dressing, Mami's make up or Anjali's pooja habit; but your way of presentation is different each time.
In my opinion, you should focus on siblings interaction in next updates. It would be fun to watch three different types of personalities interacting(childishly).



Thank you sooo much Alina for sharing your thoughts with me 😳 Yep, everything you pointed out... I totally agree with them all 😛 Actually I've already made fun of everything so there's not much left 😉 I'll see what I can do... Thank you so much hun 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow just enjoyed it...very different & funny...Thank U...Congratz 👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: claireDD

oh gosh u hate white...nahiii !!!!!
i tell u one thing honey..if u want us to drool over u never ban white..
its ur dads hotness booster after all😆...

i cant quote the lines which made me go hahahahaha like a maniac.
its kinda impossible..seriously hon ,,my sides are aching..
u r an angel...purifying my blood early morning..
i guess i shud save ur updates for the morning read instead of a magazine or something..
a good laugh keeps me chilled all day long...

DON'T YOU DARE STOP THIS ALL OF A SUDDEN..
im not prepared to let go of this..not yet😭😭
i want some diwali too...please pretty please...

i lub u🤗

and happy birthday Zehra and Zana !!!!🥳






Hahaha! Ashar's not really allergic to white, he's more allergic to the white kurta 😉 and I totally agree! Arnav is the definition of hotness in white 😛 I'm thinking of dragging it to part 20 and then ending it or maybe taking a looonnnggg break until I start watching the serial again and get some source of inspiration 😉 so don't worry! And thank youuu hun!! Love youuu! I'm sure you're getting sick and tired of me declaring my love to you practically every day 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: darkrose3

Hilarious update 😃
Poor Ashar. . How much he has to endure?!
I love this ff,so pls don't even think of discontinuing but I do feel like the funny stuff is kinda loosing its charm.you know, earlier each sentence would crack me up & even after reading i think about it & laugh again.but now its like you're forced to make the jokes which does not create the same effect..i hope you get what I'm trying to say. .but don't even think of discontinuing,k



Thank you hun for sharing your thoughts 😳 I totally agree! Even I don't get the same sort of happiness after writing the updates as I used to before... Maybe cos I haven't been watching the serial for over the month now and I've lost the source of inspiration 😔 😛 I'll see what I'll do about the continuing bit 😉 Thanks 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: divyaarnavsr

Tats simply hilarious. . 🤣 insisted to wear diapers. . Trafic signal. .killing dadi( m happy abt ts part) touching hs cheeks. . Nand kishore . .lost huge puppy. . Giggling like teenagers. . 🤣 ufff m tired of laughing. . Wt an update yaar. . N wait seriously r u kidding. . Asking whetr to continue r not. . No baby tats too bad . . V r here crazy at ur updates so pls do update . . N thanks a lot fo d pm. . I njoyd ths update. . !! 👏



Awww I sooo loved your comment cos it made me grin like a fool 😛 I'm sooo happy you enjoy this FF so much 😳 I'll at least take this to 20 parts 😛 anyway, Thanksss 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Holi looked a little more colorful and hilarious with this guy around. You know what, I like the subtle and obvious things which you bring in every update. The guy is smart, still wears diapers indicating he is still small. Dadi, the traffic police, never changing. Maami and her "love and hate" for colors. As usual the Raizada brothers are still lattu over the Gupta sisters. Everything is so funny!!!😊Oh! By the way, where is Mama, you too seem to forget him here(similar to the show)😛.



Ohhh I'll add Mama in the next update then 🤣 I didn't mention him cos the show seem to have forgotten him too! 🤣 anyways, thanks for your lovely comment 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_47

<font color="#FF0000"><font color="#0000FF">Resv !! Need to give a long hilarous comment !!</font>

<font color="#0000FF">you updated *runs around in circles* *happy*</font>
<font color="#0000FF">*grins and rofls at laptopt making ppl think she is mad*</font>
*I longed for my brightly colored clothes. White made
me feel miserable.

Dad can be
so stupid sometimes especially around Asmara.



mean, it's just Mum and Dad! Not anyone special like Gopi
Bahu and Ahem Dikra! Dad probably only got the privilege of getting touched by
Mum each year at Holi! Poor guy! 🤣🤣
Dadi came and raised her hand as if she was
stopping traffic 🤣

throwing Maami's eye shadows at each other <font color="#0000FF">(if it would have been lyk that means if ppl were throwing mamis eye shadowds den her reaction wld be sumthing lyk this )
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Dad probably only got the privilege of getting touched by
Mum each year at Holi! Poor guy! 🤣 <font color="#0000FF">(if this would b true then baby ashar n asmara woudnt be there would dey? 🤣)
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her IQ had
nosedived to such a level that I was thinking of moving her to the poolside so
that Dad could water her along with other plants.
🤣🤣🤣


<font color="#0000FF">you updates are hilarious. they leave me all laughin or teary . But baby ashar is one of the best things ever.

He is like him so cool </font>
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<font color="#0000FF">and the way he describs the RABBA VE moments... </font>
</font><font color="#FF0000">🤣</font><font color="#FF0000">🤣 </font><font color="#FF0000">🤣 <font color="#0000FF">hilarious </font></font><font color="#FF0000">🤣</font>

<font color="#9900FF">Baby askhar rocks. and honey u write fablous.

and about continueation is considered in my opnion *HELL YES*

1.cause its give a break from the show or the actualy intesn things.

2..cause i <3 baby ashar i have a crush on him *there is said it*
*blushes* *giggles*


but u see everything has to come to an end. i knw u wil wana end it one day.
and if u feel it has to end den it has to. but promis me u wil come up with new ideas on baby ashar n asmara.


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(red u rest of colours me)</font></font>
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(since the update was holi special i borrowed sum colours from baby ashar and used it in my comment</font></font>
<font color="#FF0000">🤣 </font><font color="#FF0000">🤣 </font><font color="#FF0000">🤣 </font><font color="#9900FF"><font color="#CC0066">)
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Mansi, I've fallen in love with your comments! They make me sooo happy 😆 You have a crush on Ashar 😲 *shocked, mouth hanging open* 😆 Well, you'll have to wait in line cos there are a lot of chicks on this forum waiting for him 🤣

Anyways, I'm thinking of continuing this at least to 20 parts 😳 So 2 more updates!! Yayyy 😉

Thank you sooo much Mansi 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tash10

Reserved with a sulking face because I am six pages away from your update. But it's okie - I am giving a chance to others to be among the first 🤣</font>[/DIV]

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Fari, you updated!! I was eagerly waiting for the Holi special update!!</font></font>[/P]

Whenever I read your updates now, I have a checklist that I need to consider Secondly, that I am sitting on a very solid chair so that I don't fall off ROFLing!!! And thirdly, I shouldn't be eating or drinking!!! Now, that it's done, am off to read the update!!!</font></font>


Ashar has got a crazy Mom, isn't it? And good question about the angels!!!</font></font>


Hahaha thank you so much Fari for sending the message to Ashar not to disturb his parents' Rabba Ve moments!!! Me so happy!!! *squeals* Loved how you said the IF organisation – feels so important like FBI or CIA!!!Did I just read Ahem and Gopi? ROFL!!!Too good!!!ROFL Ashar wanting Dadi to be dead? And they are all in white!! Seriously, Ashar you are a genius!!! And Fari doubly genius!!!</font></font><font color="#660033" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font>



<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">Awwn, Arnav picking both Ashar and Asmara in one hand seems so soothing!!! He's the BESTEST dad ever!!! And even Ashar knows that!!</font></font>


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">Holi colours = Mami's eye shadows!!! Perfect equation!! True it woudn't make any difference even if Mami got Holi on her face!!! And aww Arnav touching his cheek!!! So romantic!!! Hayye!!! ROFL Garima calling Khushi Kooshi should have rung a bell that she is not her mom!!!</font></font>


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">Ashar is seeing the Bhang effect!! Poor thing must have been traumatised seeing such a crazy family!! Right from Mami – ROFL Ashar thinking she would be better as a plant to be watered!!! Drunk Khushi and drunk Arnav are a treat to watch though!!!</font></font>


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">Haha and I loved the movie guessing game by NK!!! Did Arnav say Kuch Kuch Hota Hai to Khushi? Faints!!!








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<div>Your update made me reminisce the Holi episodes in the show which were so so awesome!!! I truly loved it Fari and never ever do I get bored reading this SS!!! Love you!!! </font></font><font color="#660033" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">PS: You already know my answer to whether you should continue or not!!! </font></font>

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Tashu, just when I thought your comments couldn't have gotten better 🤣 I loved this one sooo much dammit!! The pics were sooo cute!! 🤣

And of course the only reason you didn't res first was to give others a chance. How thoughtful Tashu 🤣

Your checklist made me ROFL, dramaqueen! 😆

I know you're such a sweetheart, you'd never want me to end this FF but I'm thinking of continuing this till 20 parts and then ending it... Or maybe taking a looonnnggg break for a couple of months and then coming back 🤣 Actually till i start watching the serial again and get some inspiration 🤣 Will try updating the next part tomorrow Insha'Allah on a new thread! How exciting 🥳

Thank You hun! I love youuu!! Even more than Arnav loves Khushi 😆 🤗

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