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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

awesome update kanishtha...thank god that kiss between sharon n rey didn't create any problem between swayam n sharon...and i love her for sharing it with swayam...but his reaction was strange...he forgive her so easily...still now i m confused about their relationship...with every update the curiosity is increasing...n the way u have described the dance is just mind blowing...its awesomeness...totally loved this chapter...will be waiting for tomorrow for ur next update...

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Awesome update Kanks. Well, this was nice. It turned out to be very simple and cool. I had expected something explosive, but woman, you turned out to be 10 times better than anything I could imagine. I really liked the way you handled the situation.
And the SwaRon part that came after that was really nice and soothing. I really liked short dance too. Really nice update.

Thank you for the PM and I would definitely be interested if you started replying. :)

Edited by Srishti_SwaRon - 13 years ago

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Well... ShaRey response was kinda expected I thought...but Swayam's response best describes title of this chapter - openended...was there sumthing behind that visit to the RH for that little dance then...waiting for tomorrow's update 😊

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Gargi

@gargicool

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Loved It. Just love the way you describe her dance moves.

" The rhythm was my air and the every move I made, my lungs." I especially loved this line in the previous chapter. I need to say that your writing skills are surely getting better and better with every passing day.

Eeep! You updating tomorrow!! Thats great 😉

Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...😛

And this update is surely a special one...there goes my HUNDREDTH post on IF!!

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

You know this FF is messing with my head more than u can think . Each update confuses me more but still i enjoy them. Now coming to this update. Rey and Sharon psot kiss reaction was amusing specialy the 'kissing the baby sitter' refrence. Innovative but still amusing. Swayam and SHaron's equation is still unclear to me. Infact the whole character of Swayam is syill a mystery to me. So i wouldn't comment on it. But one thing which stands out is the way Sharon asked for appology. That was beautifully done. And the description of dance is again done in fantastic manner. Waiting for the nxt update with hope that it may throw some more lights on Swayam.

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NinaArief

@NinaArief

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

as usual the update was cool, but i have a feeling things are going to go more downhill from now on so im just going to wait for your update instead of wrecking my head.

btw no it does not matter that you dont reply to comments but it does matter whether you read them or not, bcs obviously we comment to show appreciation so if we see its taken i think its enough.

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

A really interesting chapter Kanks! :)

I was relieved when the kiss issue was resolved for it was really disturbing me.

It was good that Sharon discussed this issue with Swayam and of course he can't forget that so easily but still he forgave her at least. That's nice.

The dance at the end was well described and it was quite picturesque! :)

Good job!

thanks for the pm

update asap!

PS- I would really want you to reply to all the comments if that's possible.

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Go, you devil woman!😛

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/61412836

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom
Go, you devil woman!😛

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/61412836

Me.

@You and all: I am sorry about being able to come around with the update tonight but I most certainly will write and update at least twice next week, maybe tomorrow itself. And keep it long. I couldn't set the right mood for writing today, I am so sorry. 😳

-K

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Trushna

@swaronland

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Posted: 13 years ago

#190

sorry 4 not commenting to previous update 😳
but both the update was awesome.
Thankfully swayam forgive her & didn't make issue of it which was quite unexpected. The swaron dance u described very well. Loved it
continue soon & thanks 4 pm.

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