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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Now i guess i am back to Sharon being schizophrenic theory . That has been the case for me. With each update i am swinging between theory of Swayam being real or Sharon being schizophrenic theory. After this update i think Swayam is dead or have left her and the Swayam in this FF has so far has been figment of Shron's imagination. I am getting more and more confused .
Btw awesome writing. Description of the dance was awesome and the analogy of lungs and air was awesome. Scene at te pub was also beautifully written. Waiting for the next update.

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Even with the gradual increase in clarity in each of the updates, u seem to b swinging the pendulum from one end to the other as far as Swaron relationship is concerned...okay the Sharey kiss appeared a culmination (or is it initiation????) of a set of moments that they shared and enjoyed...still confused what u hav in store for us now😳

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Whatever clarity your last two updates had given this update swung them off. I am going back to my first option that Swayam indeed is a manifestation of Sharon's mind. The update started with a beautiful ShaRey dance and how happy it made her doing a duet. Their meet in pub and their kiss felt odd knowing she didn't even want to meet him in the first place. But she sure was high wasn't she. Looking forward to your next update and this FF is got so interesting that i am thinking about various scenarios on how this would go further.

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

first of all i am very sorry for reading it late...i had myshare of works so responding it late...

but comming back to the update it was really good...now i can sense the story is moving forward and sharon is somehow realising the wired behaviour of swayam...and soon she will discover what the issue is i hope...

and swayam i am really not able to understand the cold behaviour of swayam and more in all this updates there is no certain clue that can lead us to a conclusion about swayam's behaviour...

and than this dinner party with rey where sharon is just loosing control over herself...this seems shacky now...you have really left me all puzzled up now i have no clue about next update...

thanx for PM...and do update soon...cannot stay in this puzzled state of mind for long...

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Shalini

@lyfisbeautiful

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Kanks... wonderful..!

Now this wasnt entirely unexpected... and i didn't mind it much.. cos something is definitely wrong between swaron, something sure lacks in thr relationship and it is quite natural for sharon to try n look for it elsewhere.. bt to giv her the benefit of doubt, i think its mr of a subconscious effort on her part.. no wonder swayam dsnt allow her to drink! may b he knows wat it mite do to her.. and yet he forced her into meeting rey... mks me wonder if he has found a support eslewhr too.. thrs so much mr to swayam than what meets the eye bt alas.. we wont know till sharon knows or rather she chooses to tell us!:P

Thrs something abt the way u wrote the kiss.. it came across as a natural flow of things.. i wasnt alarmd or surprised in any way.. gt the knew-it-all-along kind of feelin.. m dreading the future update though.. seems like she is gonna b too hard on herself. cant wait to read on!

This update does full justice to the preface u hd givn to this ff. And if this ws to giv us idea abt the future storyline all i can say that m vry glad i signd up fr this!

Love the way this is going.. pls try n update sooner nxt time..

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366774

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Wonderful update,can't wait for the next part:D

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swaron19

@swaron19

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Hey kankshita,

You really are a miraculous writer👏 I really get engrossed reading the updates..And i'll not be tiered of saying this again with your next update cause I really like the way you write..

The most beautiful part is always the way you describe the dance and feelings.. I feel connected to it the most..Really lovely description of dance..😊

The relationship between swayam and sharon is really confusing.. Well I haven't said something new..But really it's confusing and mysterious..😕 In there relationship swayam seems to be too perfect in everything and sharon just the opposite of him...Really I'm confused a lot..

And the last part rey sharon kissing..😲 I don't know what to say about it ... Will speak after the next update.. So eagerly waiting for the next part..😊

-Shruti

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Umm, an unexpected, yet awesome, update. I liked the beginning part where you described Sharon's love for dance. Well written, that part. And then the little Part with Swayam in it was also really nice.
Okay, so that was uncalled for. I don't know what to say. So I'll just shut up and wait for te next update to see how this turns out.

Thank you for the PM and update soon

Edited by Srishti_SwaRon - 13 years ago

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Ritu

@.Comics_Music.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Kankshita...can I call u Kanks??? 😳
Coming back to your FF...WOW!!
Best of the D3 SwaRon related stories I have read so far...each & every chapter amazingly written with elegance!!
Would love to read more!!

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shweta211

@shweta211

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#170

This was my favourite update so far, the best, because you made me feel more through this than any before. Firstly the way you described her fellings realating to dance were dreamy, the way she feels about the nuances, the lifts, the way she wants to fly, break free. And then the fear was tangible, like that of impending doom. Swayam's pushing her, maybe a sign for things to come, and maybe deliberate. Even after being what he is to her, she messes up, something just wasn't enough, and the failure as a human being, like she couldn't even keep honour. Eager to read more.

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