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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Chapter 4 was intresting, with Rey;s entry and the Swaron bonding, it makes u think more though! Also, still the dark side.

I am catching up chap 5 and wow, u posted 6 too!

Not resing!

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Kankshita, that was a nice chapter.

You updated after a long time..

Why is Swayam behaving in a different manner with Sharon? Why is he all so silent?

And it was good that Sharon partied with Rey, who is a good friend and an amazing dancer. At least, that made her feel human.

But, she kissed him and he kissed her back? Well, that was unexpected!

Like always, very well penned!

Eagerly waiting for the next part..

thanks for the pm

update asap!

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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Chapter 5:

Well as my college too is there, I will give u short comments to the point,as your note says! Yes I will genuinely give them, and well said, IF is kinda distraction. Its good, u cleared up.

Alright, chapter 5, the dance was beautifully described, apt. One of the best dance descriptions u gave, guess you are a dancer. I could visualise it, and every minute detail was wow! Well break free, was good, one can relate to the dance, enough said!

Chapter 6:

Now honestly, I am bit confused of what Swayam was for Sharon, she can't refuse his orders. The impact he played on her wow..great!

He affects her so much, was he so sad cos of Rey or his personal life? Still confused, cos once u feel, Swayam is a good friend, next time I feel maybe they are much more...confusion is on!

Abt Sharon and Rey dance, alright so Sharon got drunk and kissed him and both did, and then she was sad..she felt guilty.

Its kinda heavy, but not fully unexpected.

This is why Sharon is as she is..or I guess, it has a more deeper secret..

Edited by Madhura.. - 13 years ago

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Kanks as ususal an awesome update. But i dont know what to make of this chapter. Sharon kissing rey🤔 Why do i have a feeling that swayam is pushing sharon towards rey and he has got some thing planned for her. O gosh when i think of the the outcome i cant bear it. Amazing update ever.

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Dear little Kay-Dee.

At the risk of sounding whiny, your updates are becoming smaller and smaller by the day. Though your writing is becoming better and better. There is a certain clarity which I observed is establishing itself in your work. Like you know what you're doing, now more than ever. I don't think I'm making much sense here.

The performance was well written. You have a way with words especially when you're giving a dance description. Somehow they aren't just words. They have certain sentiments attached to it.

Their relationship remains as mysterious as ever and to tell you the truth they don't feel like SwaRon to me anymore. They seemed to have developed into different versions of themselves.

Which brings me to the last part. I wasn't kidding when I told you that I read this FF not because of SwaRon but because of its story. Which is why I didn't mind the Rey-Sharon kiss. It seemed quite natural even though she does regret it.

On that abrupt note, I take your leave.

Love,

En.

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

awesome update kanks !!

i still dont understand swayam and sharons behaviour , sometimes they act very differently towards each other .😕

it was good to see sharon going for the party with rey but they kissing each other was unexpected .

sharon taking the initiative to kiss first was a complete shocker .😲

eager to see how this effects SwaRons relationship.

will be waiting for the next part, update soon...

thanks for the pm.

Edited by tanukaswaron - 13 years ago

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

awesome update kanishtha...i am really confused with swayam n sharon's behaviour n their relationship...sharey kissing each other was a shock n it was totally unexpected...n what to say about ur writing...as always its amazing...u have beautifully written it...will be waiting for the next update...update soon...

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-.Nisha.-

@-.Nisha.-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

realy nice update...wid evry new chaptr ur ff is becomin realy interestin..cant wait to read more..plz update fast ..n PM me..n thanx for d PM..^-^

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

I somehow knew that you were leading to this !!! I was just waiting for the moment when Sharon and Rey will share an intimate moment and it finally happened !!! I can't really blame Sharon cause I feel there's a lot more to the story as we haven't really gotten Swayam's part of this FF yet !!! I'll never tolerate cheating no matter what the reason may be but I have faith that you're heading somewhere good with this !!!