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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chinnu-

Okay this is just a great update.

I loved the convo between nisha and her grandmother
How she was fighting back with her putting her views.
Then came the emotional blackmail
Nisha was actually married to Sharman?
I didn't know that thought they were just engaged didn't get to married.
She walked out on him interesting.
What is this?
Arnav said sorry ooh thats interesting
Khushi is coming to delhi when Nisha is not there
Looking forward to the update Rae!


Thank You so much! :)

And yes, Nisha was married to Sharman...I think I have told that enough times! LOL!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jameelah52

Poor Nisha.. That girl has lost enough! First the so called life that her family has given , then her father and now they are getting her married to redeem their son? To see her Poppi happy?! Thats just plain torture! Aur idhar Naniji demanding stuff from her and arnav bitwa.. Awww.. Its all too much to take in by one person, no wonder she has become indifferent.. I admire her courage to keep on going. Broken yet going?
Arnav apologizing to Nisha and to stand up like that for her is a huge step. That bit I smiled :).. I loved it when she wanted to giggle at his apology but then just nodded.
The part about his silence and her not being khushi kumari gupta and him not being Sharman singhania was amazingly put into words!

Khushi coming to delhi, eh? Thats going to interesting. My heart says Nisha will meet Khushi first somehow, somwhere! Will be waiting for the next update. Do PM me. Thanks :)


Thank You so much! :)

Lets see what happens.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ndevi

Interesting update, so we know y Nisha agreed for the marriage with Arnav feel terrible 4 her even tough I m not her fan in this FF not that I hate her but I just can't digest her coming in between ArHi. (Pls don't bash me this is my point of view bcoz I m an ArHi lover 4ever)


"What The" Arnav saying sorry 2 her 😲 I just pray their relation doesn't exceed beyond friendship & now that Khushi is coming 2 Delhi I hope that poor girl doesn't see them 2gether or she will be totally broken. I will be happy if Akash can open his mouth & tell Khushi the actual reason for Arnav's silence when she was thrown away from RM.


Thank You so much! :)

And I get it that you dont like Nisha because she may come in between ArHi...well I think NiAr make a fantastic couple - both strong, passionate in their anger...lets see. ;) :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42

Hell, Yes!! Arnav can still scare people!! :D

And the convo between Arnav and Nisha and the convo between Payal and Khushi was. . . . . interesting and kinda sad respectively. . . ..

Nisha's lil flashback?? :'(
Feeling too bad for her too. . . .

What a mess, Rae!!

When is you cleaning all this up?! :D

And don't tell me either of these answers:
1. This is uncleanable type of mess.
2. My lips are sealed!! ;) :P


My lips are sealed about this mess.

Thats fine? ;) :D

Thank You, Harshu! And yep, they were supposed to be sad in a way...

But mess is going to get a little cleaned up soon but...lets see. ;) :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shruti_P

oh my

first of all thank u Rae thank u
you dont know i was searching for this MJ's song since two months
and now i got it 😃
gahh m so stupid i only remembered the song music and not lyrics😆

yikes going to download after commenting 😊

coming to update 😉

oh wow it was great👏 absolutely amazing and its so long moi loves it😉

At least something was going right in his life - he could still scare off people.

arnav grow up please only being angry is no solution plzz someone smack him😡 okay let him be no one hits my ASR😆
aww he is so lonely without khushi😭

oh the flashback of nisha was so emotional😭
love these lines

She married Sharman, compromising on her views, and got burned.


She was marrying Arnav, compromising her independence - the call of which had made her leave Sharman in the first place, and she knew a crash awaited her.


plzz dont make arnav fall for nisha
he is admiring her??😲
oh i dont know what will happen to khushi she is still so broken
is arnav really moving forward in life??
but have to say i really like NiAr convo so sweet

loved these lines again

And he actually felt sorry. It was not as if he was blind to the fact at how she was treated in his house by the members of his family. For Nani, she was the scapegoat, for Di just another person but for Maamiji, Mamaji, Akash and Payal - she was the enemy.

wow amazing work rae
m officially your pankhii now
great work just A.W.E.S.O.M.E👏


Awww! Thank You so much! :)

And I think NiAr are pretty good together...interesting couple, really. ;) :D

Glad you liked the chapter! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Japonica

Great uodate, AT. I like the way you have brought about the reluctant and unsought after beginnings of a truce between ASR and Nisha.

If Nisha has to be strong she has got to acknowledge the hurt she has caused Sharman, their relationship and herself by having challenged both him and their relationship to prove her insecurities right and for not trusting anything to work.
Khushi needs to relaise that love ocmes but once and she needs to make the move to get it back before she loses it. ASR needs to open himself to both Khushi and Nisha as he is the only oine with any power in this situation.
Must admit the update left me feeling a bit low for everyone involved!


Awww! Thank You so much! :)

Those are nice things to realize but will they actually engage in anything like that?

Sigh.

And I am sorry it made you feel low...but that was the intention...but this IS an angst fic, so cant help it...sorry.


Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ehi toh hum bhi poochat rahe hain
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen


Thank You so much! :)

And I get it that you dont like Nisha because she may come in between ArHi...well I think NiAr make a fantastic couple - both strong, passionate in their anger...lets see. ;) :D

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Thanx for the reply but yes its true I don't like Nisha a lot u see even when u say NiAr it doesn't sound romantic like ArHi hahaha😃
Edited by ndevi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30


Ehi toh hum bhi poochat rahe hain


Milega milega! Lol!

BUT WHAT AN EPI! Aaa! *Runs around*
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Krani

Oh, that was absolutely, absolutely, totally beautiful!


I think the start and the end of it was so dynamic, and so amazing that I actually let out a sigh, put a hand to my chest and tried containing my emotions. Yeah I had a total girly, girl moment.

Hahahahahahaha! Thank You so much! :)

Anyway, getting to the update,

This line really got to me:

I got f**king engaged, Nisha, and you, my best friend, wasn't there?!


I swear, I would be so upset, so angry, so everything if my best friend is not there for my engagement. Family is definitely needed at events like these, but it's friends that make it so much more, so much...more memorable, fun, amazing, special.
Especially best friends, because they know you so well, sometimes they know you better than you think you know yourself, and if they aren't there at such an event, it can feel like something important is missing.
And no doubt, for Arnav, he would have felt that. To have his "twin" not there...it would be heartbreaking!

You mean Armaan. :)

And yep, thats what I wanted to portray, specially if you remember how Armaan was during Nisha's engagement to Sharman...he was denied all that without so much as a farewell note. Sigh.

Sharman and Nisha intrigue me. In fact your last reply to my comment about how it could be Nisha's lack of stubbornness that got her where she is...could it be that the fact that she wasn't stubborn enough to resist Sharman's proposal? I wonder what it is...but I am excited for you to unveil everything slowly :)

@Bold - Exactly but I should leave it for the update(s) which are to come hopefully. :)


The last line was beautiful!

Every romantic movie she had seen had just been proved wrong.

Omg dude, that is...I don't know small lines and words like these really manage to create a feel, deliver something that thousands of words cannot.
And for me, this line said it all.
Khushi, a girl who lived in her fantasies, dreamt like almost all girls do, believed that there was that one person out there for her - it all came tumbling down, it all shattered.
And considering that you know, I've grown up watching all these movies, reading fairytales, books, romances, everything, you do end up slightly, if not totally, believing that there might be someone out there, there might be some sort of a special romance out there - and to have that hope, dream, belief taken away can be crushing.

Same here! I am a romantic and a Bollywood romantic at that. And this line came to me as that person only. Glad you liked it.

I really felt for Khushi and Armaan in this update.
I like how you did the whole "precise and neat" of Nisha and compared it with her being a neurosurgeon. It added a nice effect.

Overall, I really enjoyed reading this part :)

~K


Thank You! :)

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