Originally posted by: Krani
Oh, that was absolutely, absolutely, totally beautiful!
I think the start and the end of it was so dynamic, and so amazing that I actually let out a sigh, put a hand to my chest and tried containing my emotions. Yeah I had a total girly, girl moment.
Hahahahahahaha! Thank You so much! :)
Anyway, getting to the update,
This line really got to me:
I got f**king engaged, Nisha, and you, my best friend, wasn't there?!
I swear, I would be so upset, so angry, so everything if my best friend is not there for my engagement. Family is definitely needed at events like these, but it's friends that make it so much more, so much...more memorable, fun, amazing, special.
Especially best friends, because they know you so well, sometimes they know you better than you think you know yourself, and if they aren't there at such an event, it can feel like something important is missing.
And no doubt, for Arnav, he would have felt that. To have his "twin" not there...it would be heartbreaking!
You mean Armaan. :)
And yep, thats what I wanted to portray, specially if you remember how Armaan was during Nisha's engagement to Sharman...he was denied all that without so much as a farewell note. Sigh.
Sharman and Nisha intrigue me. In fact your last reply to my comment about how it could be Nisha's lack of stubbornness that got her where she is...could it be that the fact that she wasn't stubborn enough to resist Sharman's proposal? I wonder what it is...but I am excited for you to unveil everything slowly :)
@Bold - Exactly but I should leave it for the update(s) which are to come hopefully. :)
The last line was beautiful!
Every romantic movie she had seen had just been proved wrong.
Omg dude, that is...I don't know small lines and words like these really manage to create a feel, deliver something that thousands of words cannot.
And for me, this line said it all.
Khushi, a girl who lived in her fantasies, dreamt like almost all girls do, believed that there was that one person out there for her - it all came tumbling down, it all shattered.
And considering that you know, I've grown up watching all these movies, reading fairytales, books, romances, everything, you do end up slightly, if not totally, believing that there might be someone out there, there might be some sort of a special romance out there - and to have that hope, dream, belief taken away can be crushing.
Same here! I am a romantic and a Bollywood romantic at that. And this line came to me as that person only. Glad you liked it.
I really felt for Khushi and Armaan in this update.
I like how you did the whole "precise and neat" of Nisha and compared it with her being a neurosurgeon. It added a nice effect.
Overall, I really enjoyed reading this part :)
~K
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