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Is waiting...
cause its been longgg since i saw a PM in my dabba telling me abt an updat for this one...

So yaa here you go here starts the bribing




And this one too, just in case you take too much of a bribe😆

My net is alluring me into tricks today... wait wait.. I already have ur fav list... so I'll indulge you for Finally and for RT and maybe even for a guttery OS that Im gonna make you write !!😈

Originally posted by: insanelycrazy

wat's CG?? 😕 i saw them neeche.. jahan mera chandler naach rahan hain na? there! but on ur post! did u make them?

And thank you, and be assured i'll leave a comment :P but i can only read after my eyes get a bit better.. i really DON'T want chashmas! :P

Originally posted by: -Shobhu21-

Is waiting...
cause its been longgg since i saw a PM in my dabba telling me abt an updat for this one...

So yaa here you go here starts the bribing


Cut the Naina and think of it as Rae😉



And this one too, just in case you take too much of a bribe😆

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Oh you mean my sig box! Thank You! :)

I made the ArHi kiss AVI...one of the first AVIs I ever made, the rest is by other people.

CG is creation gallery and the one I was referring to is the IPKKND forum's CG where all of us post our creations on IPKKND where I have posted some of my stuff these days. I have a creation shop too but havent updated it in a long time. :)

And no worries! Take care of your eyes! :)

Originally posted by: mistyrains

RES

-YAYYA, you upadted, will be back in a jiffy and comment :D-😆

You are on a roll with amazing MJ songs, good good 😃

A day of tribute to him - 25th June. :)

At least something was going right in his life - he could still scare off people...This line makes me oddly sad, don't know why though:/

It was supposed to. Sorry. :)

And Nisha is as much a scapegoat as Arnav is , though Nisha's story, about the Boarding school, is touching.

"I left him. He DIDN'T leave me. Get it?!" This lines are heart-breaking though my favorite was the para that followed later he first truth, the first selfish truth of the night from the girl... brilliantly executed, perfect words :) Nisha's father, god, my heart breaks for her, I don't think anything more worse could happen with her, can it? And I'll say this again and again , you are a terrific writer and this chapter was exceptional, and so were the following lines-

She married Sharman, compromising on her views, and got burned.

She was marrying Arnav, compromising her independence - the call of which had made her leave Sharman in the first place, and she knew a crash awaited her.

Bloody amazing, *salutes*

Uff, Rae, I should have just quoted the whole chapter, every line is so perfect *sighs* I hope you don't mind me quoting out half the lines from the chapter 😆

Here goes-

But he was Arnav Singh Raizada, he didn't say these things and she wasn't Khushi Kumari Gupta who would pry to get them out.

And she was Nisha Francia Oberoi, she didn't understand his silence because he wasn't Sharman Singhania.

I like how you have built an easy or at least a comfortable understanding between them:)

You have quotes some of the lines I really like writing so I am glad they touched the way I hoped they would. :)

And I confess, I am a little, just a teensy bit excited, that Khushi is coming to Delhi 😉

Are you? Interesting... ;) :D

But, but, great, great, exceptional chapter :D

*Bows*

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

This is wrong! Completely wrong. Somehow you've managed to show the face of society here. Its no different in the elite class white people in americas or every next person in subcontinent!

Nisha's condition is more clear now! I feel for her! And Arnav! I could almost feel his anguish and burning pain!

Brilliant update! I love the payal and khushi equation!

Originally posted by: Jameelah52

Thanks to dillmillgaye(member) who mentioned this Amazing FF in her must read list. she sure as hell was right!! This definately is a must read..

You've done a fabulous job! This FF is probably one the best I've ever read!

Awww! Thank You so much! :)

You find me truly humbled and very read.

She is very sweet to have added this in her list. :)

When I started reading it I had soo many questions.. by part 2 was I was like who the hell is Arnav getting married to?!!

They way you've described Nisha, her image burns in my retina. *Bows* Thats one of the best compliments ever. Thank You so much! :)

Questions like why wouldnt Arnav try to bring her back? why did he just let khushi go? Why in the hell is he getting married?! it had been 5 years and yet it seems like it was yesterday..

All my questions are getting answers in your update. Everytime I came to next update I was praying to God, please let this not be the last update.. please let there be more! and I successfully read 14 parts in one go!

Hahahahahaha! And Arnav and Khushi's divorce happened 3 years back, not 5. :) Just like Nisha and Sharman's divorce.

There are soo many lines that reached my heart and it skipped a beat! I wonder how someone can portray emotions so beautifully!! Every update is so descriptive that I had it all playing in my mind.

*Blush Blush*

part 7 is my favorite till now.. I read and re- read. The conflict of emotions that Khushi is going through in that update is just fantastic!! The pain she got from falling in love with Arnav Singh Raizada- A man who had her soul in his hands and yet he managed to tear it apart not realizing, he was killing himself too.

That was one of the most difficult things I have ever written because the mood in that chapter is just something you dont get out of easily...so I am really humbled by the response to it. Thank You so much.

And Arnav always knew the bargain he had made. He was hurting her and himself and he has always been aware of it. The question is why did he go ahead with it?

And think about this - Isnt he hurting himself more (if we go just by his POV) because unlike Khushi, he knows why he did it...he knows the reasons but he cant share it with anyone...

I am sorry...I just like to play the devil's advocate for each of the characters here...because as I said in the prologue - 'None of them were wrong yet nothing was right.'

Part 8 - when Akash yelled at Payal- tum nahi jaanti ke bhai ko- and he stopped, just like my heart!! Inside I was screaming why did you stop?! but then you soon cleared that up in the next few updates . that he was quite because of Nani.

Yep, Arnav is quiet because of Nani and Akash is quiet because of Arnav. I have really messed up characters! Lol! ;) :D

I have been rattling about Arnav and khushi alot.

coming to Nisha and sharman-

Sharman seems like a good guy. He promised to stay with Nisha forever, what happened huh? Forever over so soon? ( not that I am judging either of the character)

Nisha is though. She is judging Sharman on precisely what you said - Forever over so soon?

I am liking Nisha too... when the scene with HP happened I saw the similarity between her and Khushi.. they are similar when it to comes to considering others emotions and yet somehow they are so different!!

Yep, that scene was meant to bring out the parallels in Nisha and Khushi's character.

Arnav trying to hold on to every memory of Khushi. not letting Nisha come anywhere near his Khushi's memories, well thats all he's got!

The whole Nisha and Sharman thing is very intriguing. We know what happened with Arnav and Khushi, or do we?! :S

*Whistles*

I dont know.

But maybe you will get to know soon... ;) :D

Armaan- Nisha- According to me , losing a friend hurts much more than losing a loved one. You need to have someone to fall back on. And the whole thing with Nisha she desperately need a friend that will stand by her, hold her hand!

Though Nisha is at fault for cutting of all ties with 'Her person' , Armaan should forgive her now. She needs him badly. I agree she wasnt there when he needed her but cant they let go. They shouldnt let go of everything they had so easily. Come on, fight for it.

(I am emotional because I cant see two best friends falling apart no matter what the reason might be!)

I agree but Armaan is right in his place. She did leave him, not bothering to look back and see whether he needed her or not and that was a selfish thing to do.

But now Nisha has apologized and maybe Armaan should let bygones be bygones...

Devil's advocate for each character, didnt I tell you? Lol! ;) :D

I am in love with this FF!I am sorry for rattling like a maniac ;)

The words in my mind for your work are just jumbling up, so please excuse any typos :)

Could you please PM me with further updates. I'll buddy the account you've mentioned :)

*edit*

I just saw that you've updated Part 15. Thank you. Will be right back :)

Originally posted by: tata_tata

Wow... sooo much has happened since I last came here.. I wish I had come earlier, but I am here now.. and here to stay :):)

Hi AT.. long time.. sincere regrets on the absence, but office year end pressures...baby visitor's at home.. baby 1st birthday celebrations all took me away.. it was awesome fun!!

Coming to your baby - YNTOO!!

I love Arnav and Nisha now.. I love how he tries to look for his khushi in her every action and word.. compares and contrasts and concludes that Khushi is one of her kind.. I miss Khushi almost as much as he misses her, but more about Khushi later.. ArNi (is that right??).. I love their non-existent conversations.. i love their fights.. gives me the faith that Khushi is the one for him.. not some Nisha.. i love how he stands up for her.. and I love how she stands up TO him.. muah!! The scene in the car was rather cute :)

Its NiAr but I dont know about them not being for each other...I think they suit each other rather well...both dont like talking much, both are strong personalities, both have a past they cannot forget...they could connect on various levels if they wanted to... ;) :D

Nisha and Armaan.. whats the deal there..I dont agree with Armaan at all.. best friends dont get soo upset over the disappearing act.. best friends dont let you disappear.. and if they do, they know you will come back.. because lets face it.. everyone needs that shoulder some day or the other.. but let me wait and see.. i am sure now that she has come back, he wont be angry with her for long.. lets see...

She left Armaan high and dry with not so much as a note, without ever replying to any of his tries and never looking back to see whether he needed her around or not...Armaan's hurt, for me, is justified but she has apologized and maybe Armaan should let bygones be bygones but who knows...

Nisha and Sharman.. do me a favor.. and I dont usually talk about what i want the story to do.. but i really am impatient now.. tell me more about what drives Sharman.. i dont like him one bit right now.. spineless.. wierd.. ditcher.. i dont like people who can be described by the above words.. give me some good words.. didnt he have friends.. didnt he have a family.. whats his story.. let me like him plsss..i'll wait for him to come... Because he may be all that I wrote, but Nisha still defends him in front of her grandma.. he must have done something right..

Hahahahahaha! Nisha thinks the same! Lol!

You really want to like Sharman? Are you sure?

Dont say I didnt warn you. And thats all I am saying.

And she wasnt defending him. She was defending herself in front of her Grandma. She doesnt believe for one second that Sharman wasnt wrong and thats why her Grandma's suggestion that he might be less to blame than what Nisha thinks incensed her.

Nisha.. obv she doesnt want to get married.. but boy was she rude to grandma.. what happened.. what has grandma's son done??? why does he need redemption.. why doesnt grandma think he has done some wrong..

Because she is a mother, I would think and if love is blind, than a mother's love is just...no words. But who knows. And yes, she was rude but her Grandma aint any angel. Lol!

Arnav and Akaash.. great scene between them.. unsaid words.. unsaid consolation.. but pls tell me what has made Arnav hide the truth from Nani... pls tell me its more than she is my Mother's mother.. why cant ppl just say what went wrong.. clearly the damned "MU" has found its way here as well...Arnav, dont be a prick.. tell Nani Khushi is awesome :):) but i am sure that calls for a dramatic scene later.. i will wait :):)

Maybe he has told her Khushi is awesome and maybe she told him to stuff it. Lol!

Lets see what happens. Glad you liked Arnav and Akash. :)

My fav for the end.. Payal and Khushi.. have I told you i love this Payal... her hatred for the Raizada clan is inspiring.. sisterly loyalty huh.. awesome.. how can ppl not believe her as well.. how can they let their son (Akaash) leave his home.. how can they not see that such defiance has to be backed by the truth.. we need some answers here.. and Payal is bringing them to us.. Khushi on her way to Delhi.. yay!!!! finally we shall meet..

Hmmm... :)

All in all.. I am glad to be a part of this journey till thread 2 and beyond.. Congratulations on that btw.. happyyy for you and you cute friends who got you here in the last few pages.. hilarious!! I will definitely be here till the end :):)

Awww! Thank You! :)

And yes, the 'Spamming Brigade'...they are hilarious. And relentless. :p

Hugs!!

*Hugs back*

Originally posted by: april2003

Rae I am so in love with this story and I think it's my most favorite from your collection. You've revealed alot today and the story has definitely progressed a lot. Nisha is truly a broken girl and she did not know how to be one with her husband. I take that from her statement where she said she left him because she could not be independent with him but she is about to marry into a family where her wings will be literally clipped by nani. The way she defended Sharman tells me she desperately loves him just as Arnav loves Khushi. them are free. They're both in bondage of the heart and bounded by family loyalty. She left and he did not stop her, Khushi left and Arnav did not stop her. Sharman and Arnav believed that their love were better off without them, but instead both these women are trapped within themselves none of. I really felt sad for Nisha with the way her grandparents blackmailed her. The fact that they locked her away in a prison of a boarding school and then had the audacity to call in a favor from her was just disgusting. A favor for a father who seem to have not been a dad at all but just a sperm donor. He as well had has a part to play in her cold demeanor. This girl has been unloved all her life until she meet Sharman. She's like some people; when you love them they become un-attracted to you.

Arnav is definitely no longer ASR as before saying sorry was a big thing for him. Atleast there is some progress and remorse on his part and I think that is a step in the right direction. Nani is truly pushing her luck and authority. I am glad Nisha and Arnav has started behaving civilized with each other. I don't think they have a choice in that really. That is a good start because now they will maybe start learning more about each other. Even if they will never love each other at least they can be friends. Rae I really think the surface has been scratched as the anger is slowly ebbing away and they can now start focusing on other things than being at each other's throat.

Why do I sense Khushi going to Delhi will lead to some home truths being exposed. I am longing for an ArHi confrontation...I know I am holding onto a thin thread here, but what the heck, a girl can wish...Can't she?😉 Khushi seem to be more emotionally damaged that Nisha. The girl is locked in a major state of depression. I really want here to get over her hurt and start being bubbly again...Arnav is living rent free in her head and heart, that she has no room for anything else.

Another brilliant update 🤗 Congrats on the New Thread

"I want to break free
I want to break free
I want to break free from your lies
You're so self satisfied I don't need you
I've got to break free
God knows, God knows I want to break free"

Originally posted by: --Siva--

This is amazing. A bit much clear insight on Nisha now. She was forced into the relationship is what I knew till this long. There also its her grandmother?? The old ladies with experience are thinking that are making the right move.

Ah I loved Nisha nd Devyani's conversation. Nisha, go on lady! Show some cold shoulder to her. She cant live with the same rules that she equated pretty much earlier in her life and force the same on others.

Arnav asked a sorry? He came down of his egoistic walls? What made him do that?

Kushi is coming to Delhi.. For one day or a month is not a matter, she is coming. SO could I hope they will meet up?

Thanks for the pm