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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#521

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#522

Res for comment :D

Sorry for the late comment, Rae but I fell asleep with my tab in my hands. I think I even dreamed of Armaan and Nisha (Yep she is still Jennifer Winget in my head!)

The chapter

Can pain be graded? Can one ever really say one pain is greater than the other?

Yet I constantly wonder who is suffering the most in this story.

Khushi who loves her Arnavji so much that she built herself a life where she would be no more than a memory to him

Arnav who has handed every possible aspect of his life to others and yet pines away for the only woman who has any real control over his heart

Nisha who is struggling with betrayal and broken promises of a forever that never happened

or Sharman who loves her to death but for some reason couldn't live up to her expectations. Was it really his fault? I don't know. Maybe it was, maybe it wasn't

It clutches at your heart this story. But if there is one thing I can say with confidence it is that you are doing an excellent job with it!

A brother, an estranged wife, a forced fiancee, a guilty spouse...characters that jump out of the words that you write so beautifully!

You are a gem, Rae! And this chapter was beyond brilliant.

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#523

-MINE 😉-

The title, so beautiful:)

And then the song, pure bliss :D

Needless to say I love the insight to Aakash's thoughts on Khushi being bought there, and I admire that man for his...what do I say, the way he thinks, or perceives things. And the amount of levelheadedness, sheer understanding, intelligence when he wants Khushi and Arnav to talk, is wonderful.

And I could literally imagine the winds blowing, and that familiar sensation coursing through them, when Arnav felt her presence. But all that, if it was a show 😆

And the Nisha Sharman scene, beautiful Rae. Too good, steals the limelight from Khushi /Arnav effortlessly. The underlying longing, sadness, perfectly described. I could almost feel being right there inside your story while reading that part. A girl can wish, right ? 😆

It was beautiful from the first word, from the first touch of Sharman's hand to the But, I love you, I literally feel like crying. That scene was so powerful, effortlessly written.

You shouldn't have left it there, and I bet you know that. But still, it makes the wait more thrilling. The end has me wondering now, great chapter Rae !:)

TOF helped, really? Wonder how though.

Loved the chapter, 🤗

Edited by mistyrains - 13 years ago

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#524

Ooh la la! For once! Thank ya, Devi Maiya!

RES!

*EDIT* After reading thrice! :P

So Nisha's visit to Mumbai is an escape of sorts.. Sighh.. What is with this beautiful girl's plight that my heart always goes out to her? I guess, the character is just so.. mysterious, and beautiful..

And Khushi is at last in Delhi. And I still say the same thing, I don't know if I want them to meet.. Why, you ask? If they meet, there'll be accusations thrown, explanations given, tears triggered and rolled, heartbreak to both of them, and wounds reopened.. I don't know if I want this for them, Rae.. Yes, I am selfish, maybe! (:P) But that is how I feel.

And Nisha-Sharman meet. Even they are like that, and see what happened. Exactly what I said above.. What did Sharman do? He left without protecting her -- from whom? from what?

And what's that last part? Who are they? i thought all secrets were revealed! Raee.. Don't do this, come on! Okay.. At least update soon, yeah? It's 2 am, and I have to sleep... Not happening! Hmph! :P

Oh, Edit again:

I realized I missed this important part..

She said he didn't fight.. Fight whom?? Fight what? And now she can't fight? Whom? What?? Tell!!

Maybe I'm drunk..

Edited by appy_12 - 13 years ago

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#525

res
*you need to bring it on sooon*

Am already dreaming about them !!

*EDITED*

Are you like the same person I met so many months ago ?? No you're not !! You're so much more a writer now, that when I read this, I was just thinking if Im reading one of the upcoming Interntational Bestsellers or something !!

Like seriously, what the bloody hell in the world was this update all about ??

Nisha-Sharman !! I love these two !! I dont know what happened between them that has left them where they are, but one thing is sure... There story is something Im gonna love reading ! It seemed to be full of promises and hopes only to end with not even the power to fight !!

And Finally !! Nisha !! Im so happy she let it out !! Probably this might make her feel a little light-headed !! And Sharman !! He just intruiged me so much, Im gonna be troubling you with my book and pen like a detective on a mission !! What is this guy made of ?? He didnt fight for her, and he seems to have a reason, or no reason ?? And I dont know !! I cant put him under any category !! He's not the lover boy, but he's not hard and arrogant too it seems , then what is he ?!! Arghh !!
Rae Im telling you, Im gonna get all weird mixed up dreams about ShaSha now !! (another new name yippee 😃)

And their convo woman !! I love that song from Mausam, and then my lappy seemed too sober todat that it decided to play songs according to your update !! I guess My lappy's been bewitched by you now😉😆 !! And that whole thing !! with your own analogues added !! I was liek I need a tissue box right now, or my house might just end up getting flooded !!

And Khushi-Aakash !! Aakash's behaviour was more of that of an elder brother than that of a Jija, but somehow that idea seems to be better to me now... I understand all about Payal wanting to bring Khushi out of her shell... But forcing it upon Khushi, isnt gonna help her !!

And Aakash !! I love this guy !! Subtle and yet he puts his stance in such a way that you cant help but consider it with utter importance, and his points may seriously make or break a lot of things !! Arnav sure would be proud of him !! And as for Khushi meeting Arnav, well I dont think you're gonna make them meet right now , are you ??!! So if I would ask you, you wouldnt so Im ready to wait !! ( you know sometimes you are evil 😈 😛 )

And if you're gonna make them meet., Just let Khushi be prepared for whatever, cause somehow I have a feeling she might just meet Nisha before Arnav, and I dont know how she might take it !! And yaa pl do something about Armaan and Nisha !! These two haunt my dreams to get united and so Im gonna trouble you for solving their differences and getting back together.. cause they both know they need each other not to survive but to LIVE !!

Another fantabulous update by Rae *bows down girl* !!
You're amazing !! Love Ya🤗

PS: Btw, I notice Im writing longer and longer comments with each passing update !! 😆 So I want a guttery OS !! Come on guys, I need support on mission guttery OS from Rae !! Can we get it ??!!😉

Edited by -Shobhu21- - 13 years ago

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#526

oii terri!!

you're updating??!! Jumps in joy!!

RES!! :D

he could feel it he could feel it!! as in her.. 😳 awww the khushi-akash parts were sooo cute!! i always thought of akash as the elder brother for khushi and kind of like a match maker between her and arnav.

i love how you describe Nisha and her emotions, and distinguish her from being just a really gorgeous woman, who is kind of broken inside and wants to be healed but again is scared because she doesn't trust sharman anymore. the way you differentiated the emotions of Nisha and Nisha Francia oberio was sooo emotional. and his apology was beautiful, the best part was instead of telling him to go to hell, she asked for explanations and indirectly why he left her at the first place, and OMG their contradicting emotions!!😭 i was like nooo!!

his love and her denial, his apology and her anger for not fighting for them! I feel so bad for poor nisha, even though Sharman promised to be the stronger one in the relationship and be there for her, in the end it was her who had to be strong, and that's wat kind of broke them? its amazing how the barriers all broke today, after talking(or rather confessing) it out, even though it was out because of the frustration, the underlying emotions which were so prominent, are gone for abhi, because they spoke it out instead of keeping it inside them. you've got this awesome way with words, and i wanna keep writing more and more but i just don't know wat to say!

and you left it there!?!?!! RIGHT THERE?!!?!!?!! hawww you meanie!! i really really wish they sorted it out and Nisha finally get's the happiness she truly deserves!(thoughi'm guessing right now the problems will still be there) btw i have this inkling after the couples sort out their stuff, its gonna be the older people and anjali and payal who will be a big problem for all these 4 ppl? (yep another theory :P )

every update of yours is soo much more emotional and better than the last, so i'm gonna stop saying this one is my favourite, cus i'm sure the next one will be better and i will end up saying the same thing again😛 this was brilliant, emotional and totally awesome! and i love reading dialogues!( i have a feeling next will be arnav-khushi, with khushi beating him up😳)

loved this happy happy update!(even though it was kind of happy but still :) Nisha got there after 3 years of sadness :D :D EEEP!!!!!!! loved this update SOOO much!

Edited by insanelycrazy - 13 years ago

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Jammy-

@Jammy-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#527

You know the pain, the anguish that you have portrayed when Nisha and Sharman are talking- it left a dull ache in my heart! I just dont know what to say. How could he forget that she let her guard down to let him reside in her heart. I still dont know what went wrong or how did this happen? but i'll hold on to it.

Akash playing the cupid. About time he did something for Bhai. I liked how he tried to talk Khushi into meeting Arnav.

brilliant update. waiting for the next one already.

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#528

Beautiful!!!

really luved it...

liked nisha sharman scene...

continue soon

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689471

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#529

Rae I'm shocked😲!! That was a surprise? OMG, I'm speechless for the first time since reading this FF. Nisha and Sharman, OMG, OMG!! How will she go ahead with the wedding now? It quite obvious that she loves him deeply...They've actually poured their hearts out to each other. Everything in the dark has come to light. He said sorry, hope she accepted it. They're going to sleep together init?

I loved Khushi and Akaash conversation, he trying his best to help resolve the situation. He want Khushi to give things a last try. I just hope her and Arnav can have a conversation like Nisha and Sharman. That was a breakthrough update...things are definitely speeding up! Loved it...still shocked, thoughts still scattered.

"I am ready for love
Why are you hiding from me
I'd quickly give my freedom
To be held in your captivity

I am ready for love
If you'll take me in your hands
I will learn what you teach
And do the best that I can
I am ready for love" India Arie