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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Superb Story.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it.
I am so happy Arnav didn't give up on KHushi when Akash came back.
So happy that he told her the truth behind the marriage.
Looking forward to the next update.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Naddiya my sweetu, itz superb dear... outstanding concept nd perfectly written, god job dear...


i like this Arnav very much... sometimes i feel really sorry to him, but no pro... khushi hai na arnav ke saath... datz it...
ARNAV nd KHUSHI... Awww...image


im in love with your story, honestly dear... i love this story very very muchhh... update fast... 😍
nd thanks dear, for this wonderful story... love ya... 🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Awesome update...Amazing concept
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
awesome update
omg akash is such a greedy b*****d
he wants to marry khushi for property
good that arnav punched him
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

oohh myGod di..

I want to cry...
this is vute but hurt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
👏 ..hats off 2 u,Nadz👏 ...u always come up with brilliant n unique ideas...i m going 2 read d last part of MOOL(MY FAVOURITE!!!)...LW HAS ATTRACTED MY ATTENTION😛 ...DEAR,u always have one or another awesome fiction 4 ur ardent readers😃...keep it up!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
😊update soon...wow..wonderful👏 ..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
superb!!!
i'm liking it sooo much..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

ignore mistakes sorry

Arnav was staring at her for last 1 hour, where as she was peacefully asleep in his arms ." she is really mine "he just caress her cheek gently .she just open her eyes "oh sorry i woke you "

Khushi:" why you are still awake what is time?

Arnav: 3

Khushi:"sleep" placed her hand on his eyes, felt his eyes was wet" you can see me for rest of your life,you will get fed up of me, trust me " she felt he tighten his grip on her bare waist .

Arnav" i am scared if i will close my eyes this dream will end "

Khushi:has already being bold with him and close to him, she move upwards placed her head on his chest "no you sleep ,i will not go any where" she just run her fingers in his hairs , she look at him after 5 mins ,he was asleep ." how can be world so disgusting" she kissed his neck hold him tight and slept


it was 6 when she heard knock at the door ,she look at him he as fast a sleep holding her tight , resting his head on her "Arnav" she softly touch his shoulder but he didnot response. she just slider her self out . covered him properly with the comforter kissed his forehead . wore her night gown and walk to the door " who is it?" she didnot open

Akash" bhai "

Khushi: just look at him" he is sleeping"

Akash can you wake him?

Khushi: "sorry he is not feeling well he just slept ". she grind her teeth

Akash ok you listen to me

Khushi:" see you at breakfast " she walk back to bed as she saw him moving "what does he think of him self ?he ditched me on my wedding day now he want to talk to me? she kissed his forehead , she was about to rest back next to him , she saw her wedding dress not around " my clothes "she just jump out of bed , she open the closet saw her dress hanging next to his , all the jeweler lying in . she look at his wardrobe , only few shirts and few suits hanging " he is a business tycoon" she look back at him and at her neck" he got this for me" smiled


walk to him

Akash" why she didnot talk to me?" he was walking in his room "maa bhai married her just to save family from embarrassment " he just took sip of his wine "bhai is so simple ,i ma sure she is scared to wake him, he must be sleeping on floor " he just fallen on him bed .



Arnav: woke up as she pinch him" ouch"

Khushi: shhh placed her hand on his lips " your sis is out side ,should i open door"

Arnav:are you mad ?

Khushi: why ?she naughtily smiled

Arnav: just kissed her quickly " my family romance bhi nahi karna data "

Khushi: it is 8 dear fixed his hairs

Arnav "so what , is the way to wake a newly wedded couple " he just quickly stole another kiss

Khushi : just blushed

Arnav: "who is it?"

Anjali" bhai breakfast is ready"

Arnav: ok we are coming

Anjali: is bhabi awake

Arnav didnot reply as he as was busy with khushi

Khushi : sense that something is fishy , as no one knock like that . she just didnot stopped him . as she was too scared what will happen out side the bedroom .




They both walk down

Khushi was very nervous she was walking behind him

Mami:" have you seen the time it is 9 :30"

Arnav: mami i slept back

Mami: all the guest left

Arnav hmmm he pull chair for her next to him

Mami that is Anjali's

Arnav : just left the seat and sat on other side made her sit next to him

Nani: just made face, there was a pin drop silence

Mami: Arnav you divorce her ?


Arnav who was passing her the bread just drop it in her plate"what?"

Mami: divorce her right now ,Akash will marry her , he did came back , but some one had kidnapped him

Arnav: just felt her hand on his thighs he just hold her hand tight" mami it is not my rubber or pencil that give to Akash"

Mami: what you said? as she was shocked at his reply

Arnav: khushi you go up stairs

Khushi : no it is about me i will stay here

Arnav: took a deep breath" i said she is my wife , i married her to be with her for rest of my life "

Mami: saaso ma see he is changed , some one said so correct ," a son is a son till he takes a wife " see how he talked to me , if he was my blood he had never said like that"

Khushi: " what do you think , if he divorced me i will marry Akash?"

Mami: you have to other wise the property, she paused "oh i see you are not giving her divorce because of her property right"

Arnav: hold her hand more tight ,

Mami: to nani " i use to say to you to throw him out of RM but you never listen me, i dont know who were his parents "

Khushi look at him as he left her hand

Arnav "what you said mami?"

Nani"Manorama"

Mami: let me say today saaso ma,may be then khushi leave him, someone left you in the lawn of our old home,

Arnav just felt land moved beneath his feet .

Mami " you are someone unwanted child " she smiled

Arnav just got up and ran upstairs , khushi ran behind him"Arnav listen to me " he lock hims self in wash room before she could reached upstairs "Arnav open door "


Arnav was all lost he just sat on the floor , he was looking in air ,he felt it was suddenly very dark around him

Khushi: open door she was banging at the door but he was not replying .it being over 45 mins ,she got scared

she ran down "can someone break the door please ?"

Nani: ramu give her keys

Ramu kaka " come with me beta "he open the door

Khushi ran in he was sitting next to the wall "Arnav "she kneel down cupped his face , he was having high temperature ,he gave her a blank look ,she just hug him tight " i love you " she felt he sob in her arms "get up " she pull him up to stand but he collapse and fainted .

Khushi: "Arnav" she placed his head in her lap pat his face "anybody there help me"

Nani: "beta "

Khushi:dekha yeh kya hogaya ha in ko ,she was crying badly

Nani: ramu bring his medicine . glucose too

Khushi: medicine she rub his hand palms

Nani: he is Diabetic

Khushi look at his pale face, as if no life in him ,her heart cried for him.

ramu kaka gave her glass he just open his mouth she made him drink ,he was not taking in all the liquid was coming out ,she kept on trying with shaky hands ,he at last drank as she felt his adam apple moved ,she gently caress his face . with the help of Ramu kaka and Nani she made him rest on bed


Mami"so you will still like to be a sick person wife"

Khushi: who was fixing his pillow , just look at her ,she saw venom for Arnav in her eyes

Nani "go from here Manorama"

Mami"Akash will give you papers you sign that "

Khushi : she sat next to him and hug him"i will give you my share as charity for his health and safety (Sadaqah or khairat ) now leave us alone"she was resting her cheek on his forehead praying silently caressing his cheek and hairs

Nani: just look at her in shock as her eyes was closed and tears were flowing down her eyes .


Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
WHAT THE *** 😡

chee... i hate Mami nd Akash... shameless bit****** 😡

nd khushi, u r not a bachari brainless bahu, you are KKGSR, our lioness... so fight...👍🏼 fight for ur Love...😍 he really need your hand...🤗 nd not give any share to that fuc*** family... 😡

Grrr... 😡
Edited by ssnair - 13 years ago

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