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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
thank you for the pm... just completed reading both parts... in the midst of tense situations, trust arnav and khushi to find havens where they can indulge in their desire for each other -- first the hut, and now the cupboard...knew arnav would make full use of the conditions: good remedy for an unwanted sneeze! 😳 😃 what a punchline: "Mission accomplished."
can understand khushi's hesitation and arnav's determination to prove his love...aww khushi, don't you know you've no control over your feelings or desire when it comes to arnav? 😍
now that is what I would term a confession, and a beautiful one at that: "I have more love in my heart for you than I ever thought was possible..."

now they've truly become soulmates in every sense of the word!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
heya

awesome os.

read both parts..

very well written..

really loved it..

thanks for the pm..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Just read both parts... Very nice!!!
disha7 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
no no not the end!
the hot part is yet to come 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
read both de parts...
i lyk de detective khushi...
n hw both of dem needed each oder!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U r really UNBELIEVABLE
"the end?" what's this suppose to mean?????
Anyways awesomeee awesomeee updates =) =)
I don't know whether you r going to continue this or not but as usual i would like if you continue this one along with your other stories =) =) =)
Superb update dear =D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
you R such a tease, U can't leave us there! Continuee!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
That was... yummy... But, like all yummy things, it came to an end, and I had to run it off... Continue or not? This one is up to you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
I too would like to feel his one day old stubble 😍
Great part!!! Atleast let them complete the night in your story 😉
The serial has goons n Anji!! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
luved it
wonderful update especially the kiss to stop the sneeze and they always seem to find a way to have romance in the most choatic scenes.
wonderful os

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