SS : Control Vs. Chaos Part 8 (Conclusion)

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Oh man I loved how you made Arnav so romantically involved instead of just going for the kiss! It was plain awesome!

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arnavluva

@arnavluva

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

That was so beautifully & very intimately written !!!!!
Hats of to you, you have described there passionate kiss so sensitively.
Great job loved it shame your not carrying on with it as a FF.
Thanks for PM 😊 😊 😊 X x

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Beautiful ...👏 , But please don't end it there , continue if possible .👍🏼

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

That's really awesome ...
So much resistance but yet giving away without knowledge... Arnav and Khusi really has something which they don't even know ever..
Loved it completely. Thnx for the PM.

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

hey dont tell me ths is the end.. the story has just started.. how will they search for Shyam? and what do they intend to do after that?? or was this intended to be a one off OS and not a short story??

nice update!