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Anila

@-Anila-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

API...

Awesome update...

Beautifully written...⭐️

loved it to d coreee

bt u made me sad...

pata hain iss update ko parh kar toh mera Dil hi beith gaya...Sigh!😔

it was sooo Emotional part...😒

Mayank ki halat dekh kar mujhe bhttt bura laga...

n d way he was angry...Sigh!😔

i hope ke iss bar woh Nupur aur apne beech kisi aur ko ane nhi dega...

as after reading today's part...cleared my doubts pretty well...😔

kuch haad tak now i know ke kya hau hoga...Sigh!!!!!

bt jo bhi hua woh bhttt hi bura hua dats for sure...

ab plzzz i jst want dat Disgusting woman to learn a BIG lesson...arhhh ab toh mujhe aur gussa a raha hain uss aurat par...kitni gayi guzri hain woh...hmph!😡

plzzz jaldi se Nupur ko dikhado ke uska Mayank wapas a gaya hain...n rahi baat iddat ki toh i dont know kuch bhi karo MayUr basss sath mein hone chahiye datsss it!!!!

loved it lodss😳

will be dying to read d next part...

so iss bar i want u to update early i know iss bar bhi bhttt jaldi kiya apne bt isse bhi jaldi like "MY" mein jese kiya thaaa plzzz wanra humey chainn nhi milega...

loved it lodsss

love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

beautiful part fiza ..

it was very emotional .feeling bad for mayank ..
use khayal bhi nahi k idat k time pura ho gaya .
i hope ye janne k bad wo tut na jaye n uska determination of not leting any1 come between him n nupur bhi thik rahe .

nupur needs him ,his care ...

i wanna know the reason of this circumstances but pat hai 20 update tak ye susppance jhelna parega 😕

Edited by kheya-mayur - 13 years ago

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Nice update

do continue soon

P.S...very complicated story Fiza,please make it bit easy to understand for us,i still cant get what relation they share.Not getting the stroy a bit😕..

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

Fiza di aapke charan (foot) kahan hain..

it was beyond the limitations of pain, emotion , love

every possible feeling exist on this earth...

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#305

kinda gotta hint of the story now!
i hope mayank cures nupur soon~

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

ufff har line mein ek mystrey hain humein janna hainnn kya hova tha pleesh api hain na pleesh bta dein na :(

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

amazing. ope mayank can handle nupur's mom

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Interesting chapter. Kuch bataya aur kuch chupaya. I guess we're all clueless as Mayank.

The past is as always very nice. This was actually the first time I actually shivered when Nupur got scolded. It was a terrifying moment, I don't know why she is like that. Because her father seems like a nice man, then why is she like that being a mother..

The present is confusing and painful both at the same time. I'm waiting for the mystery to slowly unfold. Right now the suspense is at its peak, and each chapter is a pleasure to read.

Continue soon. :))

.SilentPrincess

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: -Anila-
API...
Awesome update...
Beautifully written...⭐️
loved it to d coreee
bt u made me sad...
pata hain iss update ko parh kar toh mera Dil hi beith gaya...Sigh!😔
it was sooo Emotional part...😒
Mayank ki halat dekh kar mujhe bhttt bura laga...
n d way he was angry...Sigh!😔
i hope ke iss bar woh Nupur aur apne beech kisi aur ko ane nhi dega...
as after reading today's part...cleared my doubts pretty well...😔
kuch haad tak now i know ke kya hau hoga...Sigh!!!!!
bt jo bhi hua woh bhttt hi bura hua dats for sure...

thanks dear alot...i am sorry but tum sab ko mayank k reaction read kerna tha for sure.. tu i have to make it more elaborated...
aray wah i am liking the fact tht u people are geting sum hints from this part... but i wonder how..
tht asure u too k kuch tu bora hua hai
ab plzzz i jst want dat Disgusting woman to learn a BIG lesson...arhhh ab toh mujhe aur gussa a raha hain uss aurat par...kitni gayi guzri hain woh...hmph!😡
plzzz jaldi se Nupur ko dikhado ke uska Mayank wapas a gaya hain...n rahi baat iddat ki toh i dont know kuch bhi karo MayUr basss sath mein hone chahiye datsss it!!!!
loved it lodss😳

oye..woh end mein tum loog jo kaho mein wohi kero gi us woman k sath dont worry abt th... nupur k itni jaldi utha doo... thora sa wait kero... woh uth jay gi.. han alteast dekh tu pay gi hi...
hain yeah kya baat hoi bhi... love is feeling doesnt neccesarily means to be always there with each other.. Ardhgnini k matlab yeah thori hota hai k hamesha sath rhao..bulky sath na rah ker bhi sath nibhoo... kya thought hai wah... 😉
will be dying to read d next part...
so iss bar i want u to update early i know iss bar bhi bhttt jaldi kiya apne bt isse bhi jaldi like "MY" mein jese kiya thaaa plzzz wanra humey chainn nhi milega...
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

MY ko compraise maat kero as usk next quick update bhi ajay ga... probly kal ya parsoo... is k i cant promise... try kerti hoon... hogaya tu i wil... saturaday tak try kerti hoo if i can thik hai
lov ya too

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: Maria.
Nice update
do continue soon

P.S...very complicated story Fiza,please make it bit easy to understand for us,i still cant get what relation they share.Not getting the stroy a bit😕..

thnks a lot dear

hay mera bacha... im so sorry... per chasy hi mystery unfold hogi tum ko sab samhj aay ga.. ek dam se... like a open book... plus next few updates past zayda hai...tu prsent tension nhi day ga... but i will try to make it less complicated..