MN.NEW..PARICHEY...CHP24 LTH#2 at Index Pg 1 - Page 30

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Firstly really sorry for not commenting to the prevous 2 chapters. I think there were chapters..

Anyhow coming to the update it was beautiful. From the past to present.

The past, it was very light and total contrast to the present. Something that's really nice, balance ho jata hain poora chapter.
Nupur ka khauf aur Mayank ki pareshaani dono he bohat he achchi tarah say samne aya hain. Very well written, it was good to read. I just love it when these types of things happen to Nupur, kyunke woh Mayank ko usske kareeb laati hain.

The present... uff rula diya aap ne.. Itni gehraiy say unke jazbaton ka izhaar kiya hain.. ek baar main parhne nahi hua. Woh kuch bhi na keh kar bohat kuch keh gaya. Usska dard, dukh, majboori... sab kuch he bohat he khubsoorati say likha hain aap ne.. aur yeh yakeen say keh sakti hoon k iss say behtareen chapter aap ne shayad he likha hoga. Its most definitely the best chapter you ever written, and it defines you as a writer.
Heartbreaking update, but extremely well written. The emotions just flows out of it. AMAZING!

About your question about the pace. I read probably all comments, reading their answers.
I won't say anything about the pace, but all I'll say is.. do remember that its your story, your concept, and that YOU are writing it.
Nothing more than that.

.SilentPrincess

its okay dear..
thanks alot for liking it..

thts grt so ap un ki pershani mein bhi maza talsh ker layti hoo..wonderful...

uff ur words made me spechless..thnku so much dear... thnks alot for ur such kind words..
thnku

Originally posted by: gopi06

awesome updt fiza
for me its ok with pace of the story ... but curiosity to know what happened in the past is the reason to want a little bit fast forward the past...eagerly waiting for the next updt...cont soon
thanks for the pm

thnks alot dear...
i know u all are curious to know but than i cant make past very fast forward there is loads of things tht needed to be shown in past...
i will cont sooner

Originally posted by: Sweety.Arjun

Amazing update...loved it
thnx 4 d pm

thnku

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

superb update

thnka alot

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

beautiful update...

lovely...

i wanna knw the past jaldi...

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

thnks alot dear
will try to update sooner

Originally posted by: shria19

Awesome part:)

thnku

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update...

loved it lodsss...

bt m missing MN moments in d past a lottt...

as SaJan couple ban hi gaye toh ab plzz MN ko bhi couple bana do as i know now ke unke bich pyar toh pakka tha as he said dat der is no Blush now like it used to be...so abhi i wanna know abt dat Phase plzzz...

sajan are the one who will lead to all the things in MN life,... so u have to tolerate them in this stroy... uff tht phase long way togoo

m dyinh to know wht exactly happen Between Mayank n Nupur...

kab milega woh parhne ko n kab pata chalega ke akhir hua kya Exactly!!! n wht abt dis Divorce!!!!

Awww...felt terrible wen Mayank was talking to lifeless Nupur...Sigh!!!!

n YA ALLAH!!! API apko aur kuch nhi mila iske alawa!!! even i too hate n scared of it like hell!!!!

Bechari Nupur...

well...i wish ke Gunjan ka hath ko MN ko aur kareeb lane mein n unke beech past mein Pyar ka Ehsaas karane mein...as i know Pyar toh bhttt pehle se hi hain bt Ehsaas nhi hua jaldi...

Beautifully written API...

well i dont think its slow as i think yeh asa hi hona tha bt ya i want to read more present parts n han more MN parts in Past too rather den SaJan plzzz

loved it lodsss

love u API...🤗🤗🤗

thnks dear.. u will see the MN parts more in future update.. i hopefully trying to make them more... plus actually there stroy is strting more n more now tu they will automatically get it

Originally posted by: Mudrika25

beautiful part,...

continue soon

thnks alot dear

Originally posted by: -Anila-

API!!!! humey agle update se kab nawajengi???? (i hope m ri8😆)

wah wah..kya baat hai apki urdu tu din ba din aur behthar hoti ja rahi hai...bulkul baja framaya apny..

agaly safar k baray mein hum kuch kha nhi sakty... taiyaar hai...bus khosih keray ga kal keraday... aj kuch mood nhi ban raha ...

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

wah wah..kya baat hai apki urdu tu din ba din aur behthar hoti ja rahi hai...bulkul baja framaya apny..

agaly safar k baray mein hum kuch kha nhi sakty... taiyaar hai...bus khosih keray ga kal keraday... aj kuch mood nhi ban raha ...

loved it dear...

Rplyd to u all..abt the pace I will try to cover it up with quick updates…as after the party automatically things will strt to change qucikly... thnks for ur love

Chapter: 8

Present( Haal) :

He came out from ICU as wasn't allowed to stay there for too much time, his steps were all too weak and he sat beside Samrat and closed his eyes rested his head back..

Samrat: I am sorry..

Mayank: hum ny tujh se kaha tha us ko buhat kareb rekhna… tumhain andaza bhi nhi hoga aur woh us haal tak poch jay gi jaha se hum mein se koi nhi wapas la pay ga us ko…

Samrat: hum nhi dekh paya ..woh buhat hi saada aur per sukoon dekh rahi thi

Mayank: itna sab honay k baad pur sukkoon dekh sakti hai wooh.. hosh k nakoon lay Samrat… tu janta hai us ko phir bhi asa..tu tu har haqeeaqt se wakif(known) tha…phir bhi... ab dekh rahi hai tujhy.. beintheha per sukkoon… kuch bacha hai us mein… itni se bhi zindagi.. us ki saas ukhar rahi hai yaar….he hid his face with his hand ...his voice was chocking and Samrat hugged him ..but he didn't hugged him back…

Itni takleef se saas lay rahi hai woh..dekh hai tu nay…. Aur woh kaha hai.. humary ghar k khuda… ab kaha hai wooh…he broke away from him… he was hating anyone anyone around him…. zinda kerain na is ko.. kaha chop ker bahiti hain woh…

Samrat: unko maat yaad kero… woh agai tu yaha rehany nhi day gi tujhy

Samrat saw a blaze in his eyes… as he will kiil everyone near her everyone..

Mayank: un ki ab itni majal nhi k woh mjhy yaha se ek inch bhi hila saky… buhat izaat kerli unki aur mein ny bhi zaroorat se zayda maan li us ki aur pcoh gai na woh is haal per… ab mein khud dekh lo ga sab.. aur mjhy humaray beech koi nhi chaiy.. koi bhi nhi… mjhy doctors se milna hai abhi…

He nodded in yes and it was too bad time to make him realize he has lost all the authorities on her, or any word than claim her his… he took him to doctors cabin..and he instead he wants to talk alone and Samrat left the place..

Gunjan: kya hau,…

Samrat: kuch samhj nhi araha hai..ab tu tufaan aay ga.. mayank itny daard mein hai k is waqt woh pori duniya ko aag lag day ga… us ki ankho mein khoon utra hoo hai..koi bhi us k agar ek min ko bhi yeah kahy ga na k nupur se door hojaoo tu woh maar daly ga us ko… sach mein maar daly ga…

Gunjan: ya khuda per yeah sahi nhi hai Samrat…. Ami jaan aur is k saman hua tu kay hoga

Samrat: mjhy nhi pata.. mein sirf itna janta hoon k ab jo kernay hai woh keray ga… mein us ko nhi rukho ga.. ab ami bi us k samany keray gi…tuffan aay ya qayamet… aur ky a qayamat aay gi.. unki beti maar rahi hai aur woh aram se is behas mein hain k usk elaj abroad kero gi..yeah janty hua k us waqt us ko sath ki zaoorat hai.. na kay un k pasiay aur takat ki…

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Past( mazzi)

Tai jan: Nupur… nupurr.. she was shouting at the top and threw her bag on sofa and was pacing around

Shilpa, mayank Samrat and nupur who were all in tv lounge playing PS were stunt to hear this voice and this level..but the worse part was she was calling her…

Mayank: nupur aram se bulky darny ki zaroorat nhi hai.. chalo…

Nupur: ami humain kyun bola rahi hain.. hum ny tu kuch nhi kiya…

Shilpa: aray beta woh neechy hai itni zoor se islyn bol rahin hon gi.. ap chalein hum sab hai nah…

She nodded and went slowly down

Tai jan: kya baat hai .. kaano mein awaz nhi jati ya pairo mein taqaat nhi bachi hia… taaz chal kern hi asakti app…. Jhot bolny aur humara naam karab kerny mein tu buhat aagy agay hogai hain ap…

Nupur: ji ?

Tai jan: us din jab ap mayank k sab university gain thi aur kaha kaha gain thi…

Mayank: tia jan hum ny bata ty hain

Tai jan: ap se baat nhi kera rahy hain hum… tu in ki vaqalat kerny ki zaroorat nhi hai apko…

( I am not talking to u so stop answering on her behave)

Tai jan: bolain… bolain ap woh low class area ki low class shops per kiya ker rahi thi… haan..

Nupur: choty … pa pa k.. gift..

Tai jan: kyun… bhai sehba k liyan taufa layna tha tu saray malls aur saray stores band hoagy hain kya haan… kiss ny kaha tha apko k un do taky k loog k pass jay kuch karidany…

Janti hain MS Waris ny dekha apko waha.. aur aj kitni bekar ki baatein ker rahi thi woh … aur ap us dukaan mein akelay thi…

Nupur: nhi mayank.. tha..

Tai jan: acha tu unhony tilsmani topi pehna rekhi thi kiya ( he was invisible there…tilsmani topi is a magical cap wearing it u turn invisible)….

Mayank: tai jan hum waha kuch karidan nhi gay thay.. sirf pen per papa k naam engrave kernay gay thy woh bhi mehiz 5 min k liyan aur hum us k sath thay…. Jin ms waris ko itni hi deeqaat( muskil) hai asay elaqay(place) mein jany mein tu woh khud kya ker rahi thi waha… yeah bhi poch liya hota…nupur per kyun

Tia jan: mayank.. ap se kaha hai na is mamaly se daur rahin app..

Shilpa: mayank chup hojay un k ghusa aur bahray ga… she whispered pressing her hand on his shoulder….

Tia jan: akhir baar ap se kah rahy hain hum… she moved close to her .. ainda ap humain asi wasi kis jaga bhi dekhi tu yaad rekhna ..woh din apky ghar se bahar jany k akri din hoga… samjhi…

Saying so she left the house while nupur sat on the sofa, shivering and her breath was turning uneven with fear….

Mayank n shilpa rush to her while Samrat went ot bring water for her…

Shilpa: aram se mera beta .. bus… she hugged her yet still she was in same condition

Mayank: kuch nhi hai nupur…un ko deemgh karab hogaya hai… khabardar hai jo tum un se daari ab…. Nupur tum is sab se bahar arahi ho k nhi

Samrat: yeah lo pani piyo… arma se… aram se ..ami gain dekho…

Shilpa: maaynk tum janty ho bhabi ko asai jagaoo per jana pasand nhi hai tu tum is ko kyun lay ker gay…

Nupur: us k kasoor nhi hai.. hum… ny… hi .kaha ..tha.. k hum.. apni pasnad.. ki font rekh way ga… us ny tu mana kiya tha

Mayank: itni koi pari baat bhi nhi hai… har bhar waly ki baat sun ker ana aur ghar mein hungama machna…yeah tu ink shooq banta jaraha hai…

Shilpa: bus acha chup hojay.. sab thik hai… she was rubingg her back to clam her down.. aur ap dono jay aur kahan lagy

Mayank: kYA hum

Shilpa: han tu roz hum keraty hain.. aj ap dono kerain…

Samrat: chal bhi yeahi suna baqi tha….

Mayank: had hai yaar….

Ajay ya apko dawat naam( invitation) behjay hum log… qibala humaray ghar aker humain apni shirkat k sharf bekshay

Pls grace us with honor of ur presence..

Shilpa: aaa ray hain aaaray hain .. chalo ajao .. dekho aj dono se khidamt keray gay..

Nupur wiped her tears and giggled the way all of them were changing every thing around her…

Shilpa: aj mein apny hatho se khelo gi apni beti ko…

Samrat: hain… ami ko phone lagao mjhy bhi daat ker jay… yeah na insafai hai

Mayank: humain tu itni pyar se khabi nhi khilaya … yeah koi khass hai kiya

Shilpa: han bulkily hai.. Ahmed khandan ki eklatoti beti hai yeah..

Mayank: ooh…. Samrat tu khud khushi kerly ya mjy maar day… kam se kam koi tu eklata pan enjoy kery ga

Samrat: buhat chalaky hai tu… dono ghinha(sin) mein hi keroo…

Mayank: han tu kam se kam uper jaker tu mjhy hoor milay

Nupur: lagnoor ko hoor milay gi… she giggle…

Mayank: tum tu dekhti jao mjhy kaun milti hai…

Taya jan: ohh tu aj chachi k hath se kahan kaya ja rah hai….

Nupru: aslamualkium papa….

Taya jan: walikum aslam.. khus rahi….

Mayank: ji taya jaan sara pyar is per hi tu ata hai….

Taya jan: han yeah tu hai bhabi…. mayank beta party ki sari arrangements k kiya hua

Mayank: taya jan sab hogaya hai.. bus ap decorations aur kahny ko approval day dain tu mein final kerdoo…

Taya jan: shabash thik aj hum ghar per hai tu ap humain dekha dayin.. wasy invitations card kafi khubsoorat hain…

Mayank: he smiled….apki beti ny design kiya hai…

Taya jan: he grinned….. aray wah.. sach mein.. kya baat hai meri beti tu buhat hoshiyar hai… shabash…

Samrat hit his elbow twice to him.. n he glared at him saying wht me..

Mayank: taya jan hum log apni ek dost ko bola sakty hain…

Taya jan: shilpa bhabi.. kaun se dost ko bola raha hai yeah…kya baat hai barkhudaar ( whts the matter son)…he said a bit teasingly

Mayank: … Samrat kaun se khass doost hai .. bata nah..

Smart chocked and shilpa n nupur suppressed there laugh.. Samrat looked at him ur dead…

Taya jaan: ohh.. tu apki khass dost hain… he suppressed smile

Samrat: baba woh.. nhi,. Haa.. woh tu hum sab ki dost hain..

Nupur: ji baba.. hum bolai…

He chuckled at the way his son was fumbling and nupur was covering up

Taya jaan: han han bulkily bolain.. jitney dost bolany hai bolaoo… bulky ek kam kerain.. un ki family ko bhi bola lain… hum sab bhi milay gay…..kyun bhabi….humain bhi tu pata chaly

Shilpa: bulkil Samrat bolay lain…

Mayank n nupur were trying hard to stop there smile… n Samrat was finding anyway to disappear…

Nupur: sharama tu yeah asa raha hai k rishty wali anty k samny bhaita hoo…she giggle pretty low

Mayank: taya jaan ny pakar liya.. ab tu aur maza aay ga…

Taya jaan: mayank ap khana kha layain tu phir hum se Milan lay…

Mayank: ji…

Taya jaan: aur han… apky project concept kafi diljasap (interesting) hai.. salman per gain hai ap bulkily… kafi alag hai yeah line… humain lagta hai is per kam kerna chaiy..

Mayank: thanks taya jaan…thnk u so much

He patter his shoulder and left the place

Samrat: manhoosoo..

Shilpa: haaa….

Samrat: sorry… choti ami in dono k dekhain …tum ko asay koi bata ta hai

Mayank: nhi bata tu meri shadi hojati gunjan se… aur dekh taya jan ny us ki family ko bhi bola liya… acha hai nah.. itni muskil kya hai tujhy

Nupur: bhai shadi ki taiyari keroo… kitna maza aay ga

Mayank: hola hath rekho… abhi hitler k saman baqi hai..

Samart: yaar pls maat dara mjhy ….

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Present( Haal) :

Dr. Nadir: kay say ho mayank

Mayank: ji

Dr. nadir: humain maloom hai yeah waqt kafi muskil hai ap k liyan… per is waqt buhat pyar se sab kuch sambholo… unki valida( mother) aai thi aj.. shift kerny k kah rhai thi…

Mayank: uncle hum ny ap se ilyan sambhain ko bola hai k ap per humain pora behroosa hai… aur raha sawal tai jaan k.. tu ab hum agay hain so sari authority humary pass hai…

Dr. Nadir: beta magr woh tu kah rahi thi k…

Mayank: woh sab chorain .. hum dekh lay ga… nupur…

Dr. Nadir: dekho tum nupur ki is halat se waqif tu thy….he nooded in yes… magr itna zayda nhi tha yeah…. Woh ek khauf tha us k andar jis k treatment kafi ach se chal raha tha….. aur tum ny usko almost bhola diya tha…. Magar phir dobara yeah sab achank….

Mayank: mein kuch dino se yaha nhi tha uncle… aur na hi yeah baat nupur ko bhi pata thi k usk elaj horaha hai…ap janty hain hum nhi chahty thy k us k is baat k koi bhi stress ho k woh bemar hai halaky hum janty hain k asa nhi hai…

Dr. Nadir: woh tum ny sahi kiya… maagr tum bulkily nhi janty k kya hua hai…. Itna bekhabbar kasay…

Mayank: buhat lambi kahini hai… aur sach mein yaha yeah sab chal raha hai humain sach mein nhi pata tha… aur haraat humain is baat ki hai k nupur ny humain kuch nhi bataya….

Dr. Nadir: ya asa hai k us ko batany nhi diya gaya… khir…yeah tu hum kah nhi sakty k nupur thik hai…. Us ki anxiety ek bipolar disorder mein change horahi thi… aur kis ko yeah khabar nhi hoi… ab hum yeah tu kah nhi sakty k itna bara kya hua… per han woh ek dam se is qadar depression mein gai hai k.. us ko mind soo gaya hai… respond ker raha hai…. Per kcuh had tak…but she is still quite positive I must say…but sab se bara masla hai k

Woh buhat zayda weak hain… is qadar ki us k muscle mass weak horaha tha… I just wonder sab andhy hain k kya ghar mein

He chukled pitfully

Mayank: andhein hi hain… per ab ksay..

Dr.Nadir: us k pass raho.. us ko encourage kero… k woh ankhein kholay.. khud se lary.. waps ay.. zindagi abhi baqi hai usk liyan… usko yeah samjho.. mayank do baatein hosakti hai jo us ki is halat k zemdar hosakti hai ya tu kisi baat k beintheha daar.. ya beintheha thakan…

Aur yeah dono baatein hi curable hain… bus sath ki zaroorat hai… asa nhi hai k us ko beech mein kahbi hosh na aya hoo…us ko hosh aya hai… per anakhein khol ker us ny asa pass dekha hai aur phir baad kerli hain….

Tu woh dobara band nah keray itni himat usko doo..

He nodded his head in yes.. but what was going in his mind was the fact when he left what has happened… wht that big has happened that even she when he left she was stable.. knowing pretty well that it was mutual decision but after that ….