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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

emotional updt fiza
you expressed mayank's anger & frustration very well
waiting to know how mayank handle nupur's mom..she is a terror
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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mahek

@Star_001

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#322

the question doing disco in my mind what happened in the present

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parul_bansal

@parul_bansal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#323

awesome update...

aww poor mayank ...

bt don't knw nw i think ki mayank was nupur's husband only...

bt phir yeh sab kyun???

n wo tai jaan is so ahhh

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

that was such an interesting part!! Mayank's reaction when he sees nupur and then on the mention of tai jaan his anger was so well written out!

i hope mayank would be able to cure nupur out of her depression...if some one can its sure Mayank :)

continue soon dear :)

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Irum.

@Irum.

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

Uff ...Fiza it was very painful update yaar.Every sentence had pain, mystry suspense.When I was reading it to main soch rahi thi yeh kb finish hoga .Esa pehli baar howa with me .Usually I like to read more bt is baar it ws very heartwrenching.U very briliantly described emotions and mujhe kuch clu bhi mil gaya hai k kya howa hoga.Usually I read update at least twice bt such kaho na jane q is baar himmat nahi hoi. I ws feeling pain.Tum esa kese likh leti ho.

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

waiting to read nxt part

brilliant writing dear 😊

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#327

beautiful part yaar,...

but yaar i was stunned, unki ami itni si baat ko lekar itna bada tamasha,...really unhe sach me sirf aur sirf apni reputation ki hi chinta hai,...

bas ab jaldi se disclose kar do mystry,... raha ni jaraha,,... ...

loved your writting,.,..

continue soon,...

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess
I can understand. Ramzan main toh nahi update karein ghi na?

i cant say ..if till the week end i can write more than u all can get updates.. as i will not be writing in Ramzan..but can update already written..but han akhri ashray mein tu updates bhi nhi..har daafa ki tarha chand raat ko try kero gi