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nyc update fiza!
acc to me...the pace is a bit slow!

wow amazing. present is painful. mayank is almost dead seeing nupur. past is so cute

Bhai hum kahani enjoy kr rhe he cment shment ni dend hota:p

m liking the present ...but wanna know thei past story too .
ye sajan ko thora kam space do na !!!!

lovely update .
nupur resembled me in dis part .m too this much scard of snake .
mayur k pyar-shadi-divorce kyun hua????


ummm

pace is ok but past n present ko equaly dikhana chahie .before this update u used to put very short of present n past to full of sajan hai 😕

Originally posted by: Maria.

beautiful update

i liked the present part more better then past this time..dont know why but i could not connect with past story,when i read past i feel i am reading Sajan FF..something missing there..

Yes for me Pace is slow..story is moving very slowly..after 7 chapter nothing is clear...

continue soon

thnks dear...
i m glad u felt the present so deeply...
i think i shud change the title are with MJHT ff as Sajan are extrmly important part of this ff.. though it is indeed Mn story yet sajan is there as pretty important aspect...
thnks will cont soon

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

Wow ! Loving the update .

I am practically loving this FF , when I thought i could even read it properly

LOve you jaaan :)

thanks alot dear..
i so love it ..tht ur enjoyin the ff and can read it to.. at the end of this ff i will make u familiar with Urdu.. not to worry 😆

love ya too

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Aaj main do bar royi aur dono bar aap ki hai ff par ke roi..
Pehle MY nd now this...uff dono mayank mein kitna farak hai...ajeeb lagta hai...matlab abhi usko kya imagine kia MY mein nd now this mayank who can even give his life for her...hehe...
But really dii the present left me all teary...The way he ws caressing her cheek just to blv she ws here and will wake up anytime made my heart ache...bohut bohut bura laga dii...
And gunjan ws right mayank do love her but he himself is unaware of that...
Loved this part...
And dii all is fine with this ff...but one thing u can do is keep the length of past nd present same in each update...but jo bhi ho im loving it...
Cont soon...

ahy jani i am extremly sorry .. i never notice the fact tht two emotional parts im updating together..sorry abt tht

han so tu hai... dono mein zameen asman k farak hai...
i m extrmly happy tht u can feel n relate to the present so deepyl yet i m sorry to make u sad...

yaar bachy problm is tht i cant at this ff make it in equal length... as i have to make it reach at certain level... yet i will try to..
glad ur enjoying it
will cont soon

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Nice update di...Loved the part where Mayank escaped her from snake so carefully...and present is very sad..My heart ached when Mayank entered in ICU seeing his life lifeless...so heart wrenching di...😭

and yeahh pace is lil slow...I mean nothing is clear yet...waise hi its hard for me to connect with complexity of marriage and 'iddat' and upar se there is still no connection b/w past and present...but I won't force u to pace up coz I don want to spoil its beauty...expressions and emotions are important in this FF so carry on as u want...I can keep patience😊

But sajan part thora cut short karo past me and mayur romance thora aur jyada😳😆

thnks alot dear...
i m sorry to make u sad...
haan so tu hai.. but i cant connect the past n present suddenly... i need to get the past to a certain level... and than u will be able to connect with it... the point is tht can u connect with mayank n nupur as togther in past n present.. tht is wht actually is needed... if i will not show the deepth of there connection u cant feel the pain in present..
that is so true... this is extremly emotional ff...n they need time to get into ur soul..

sajan part is problm to u all haina..hmm😆..but than there are very important part of this ff.. and romance ..yaad hai yeah ff strt kerny se pehly we were talking n i told u romance is sumhow not a part of this ff... initmacy is probably not there...

thnks for ur lovely comments

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

lovely update fiza sajan ki story zaada hai iss wahaj se pace kuch slow feel hota hai

thnks dear..

han i m just geting u all tht pace u all r feeling slow as mayb sum of u must be skiping sajan's part..yet they are pretty importnt in this ff.. will try to mange it...

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

the best update of the FF so far :):)
and ironical though but my like button isnt working

brillinat part :):)
thanks for the PM

thanks alot dear..
im so so so thankful to u for this... thanku...
its oky... i'll count ur like myself 😉


thnks alot