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Anila

@-Anila-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Awesome update...

loved it lodsss...

bt m missing MN moments in d past a lottt...

as SaJan couple ban hi gaye toh ab plzz MN ko bhi couple bana do as i know now ke unke bich pyar toh pakka tha as he said dat der is no Blush now like it used to be...so abhi i wanna know abt dat Phase plzzz...

m dyinh to know wht exactly happen Between Mayank n Nupur...

kab milega woh parhne ko n kab pata chalega ke akhir hua kya Exactly!!! n wht abt dis Divorce!!!!

Awww...felt terrible wen Mayank was talking to lifeless Nupur...Sigh!!!!

n YA ALLAH!!! API apko aur kuch nhi mila iske alawa!!! even i too hate n scared of it like hell!!!!

Bechari Nupur...

well...i wish ke Gunjan ka hath ko MN ko aur kareeb lane mein n unke beech past mein Pyar ka Ehsaas karane mein...as i know Pyar toh bhttt pehle se hi hain bt Ehsaas nhi hua jaldi...

Beautifully written API...

well i dont think its slow as i think yeh asa hi hona tha bt ya i want to read more present parts n han more MN parts in Past too rather den SaJan plzzz

loved it lodsss

love u API...🤗🤗🤗

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#262

beautiful update

i liked the present part more better then past this time..dont know why but i could not connect with past story,when i read past i feel i am reading Sajan FF..something missing there..

Yes for me Pace is slow..story is moving very slowly..after 7 chapter nothing is clear...

continue soon

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Wow ! Loving the update .

I am practically loving this FF , when I thought i could even read it properly

LOve you jaaan :)

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Aaj main do bar royi aur dono bar aap ki hai ff par ke roi..
Pehle MY nd now this...uff dono mayank mein kitna farak hai...ajeeb lagta hai...matlab abhi usko kya imagine kia MY mein nd now this mayank who can even give his life for her...hehe...
But really dii the present left me all teary...The way he ws caressing her cheek just to blv she ws here and will wake up anytime made my heart ache...bohut bohut bura laga dii...
And gunjan ws right mayank do love her but he himself is unaware of that...
Loved this part...
And dii all is fine with this ff...but one thing u can do is keep the length of past nd present same in each update...but jo bhi ho im loving it...
Cont soon...

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Nice update di...Loved the part where Mayank escaped her from snake so carefully...and present is very sad..My heart ached when Mayank entered in ICU seeing his life lifeless...so heart wrenching di...😭

and yeahh pace is lil slow...I mean nothing is clear yet...waise hi its hard for me to connect with complexity of marriage and 'iddat' and upar se there is still no connection b/w past and present...but I won't force u to pace up coz I don want to spoil its beauty...expressions and emotions are important in this FF so carry on as u want...I can keep patience😊

But sajan part thora cut short karo past me and mayur romance thora aur jyada😳😆

Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago

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mahek

@Star_001

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#266

lovely update fiza sajan ki story zaada hai iss wahaj se pace kuch slow feel hota hai

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#267

the best update of the FF so far :):)
and ironical though but my like button isnt working

brillinat part :):)
thanks for the PM

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#268

the snake thing was so scary

and the way u descried nupurs fear and mayanks reaction was superb

the hospital part was also painful

amazing ff

continue soon

thanks for the pm😊

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Mini4

@Mini4

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Heart touching part!!!👍🏼

Mayank was so caring n protective abt nupur!! nupur's hurt n pain felt by mayank..truely a beautiful relationship❤️

feels bad to see both mayank n nupur in their current situation!!!😔

waiting to know why n how dey got separated!!

continue soon!

thanx fr d pm🤗

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Irum.

@Irum.

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#270

It was very nice update especially snake wala scene the way Mayank handled the situation was very intelligent.Yes bt he got panicked when Nupur fainted.

Yes like others I also feel the pace is slow and in past it feels i m reading sajan story.Bt past is also important because it shows us the bonding,depth,intensity and purity of Mayur's relation.Without that we Won't be able to feel their present relation.

Bt past main hum bohat scences dekh chuke hain and present k I think three, One Nupur's parent in hospital with sajan and second Mayank's arrival and then Mayank in hospital.

Sorry dear If i hurt u bt u asked that's y i said.Its ur FF and u can write as u like.Usually I very rarely talk about pace because every writer has her own temperament and way of thinking.

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