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Chapter Four ' Phone Call

A ray of sunshine shone through the crack of the curtain as Maanvi awoke. She had forgotten where she was until she remembered last night's conversation with Jeevika about her accident. The pain in her leg and head was numb and she felt much better, even if she was not completely cured. She looked at the clock in the room nearing 8am, not knowing what to do. She didn't know if she could simply get up and leave or whether to wait for someone to get her. She was curious about the Vadhera's, after all Maanvi's middle name was curious!

Maanvi opened the door and crept out, looking left and right for anyone. If anyone was to arrive, she'd rather that be Jeevika, she was the only one who checked up on her. Then again, the others might have done that whilst she was asleep. Maybe only Jeevika and her husband lives here, Maanvi thought. No, Jeevika did say that this was the Vadhera's house, meaning more than one.

She held onto the railing of the stairs for control as she walked down the cream stairs. The Vadhera's seemed to be wealthy but the house wasn't over the top or in your face; it looked elegant, as if a lot of thought had gone into the decorations.

"Maanvi," a voice spoke from behind.

Maanvi turned around to see Jeevika looking at her in concern. "Thank God you're here, I thought you might have gone."

"I, I didn't know whether to wait for you or to just go, so I.." stuttered Maanvi.

Jeevika stood near Maanvi on the stairs and took her hand in hers, helping her to get down. "It's 8am, the time where everyone eats for breakfast, that time is strictly compulsory so I got busy with the cooking. Sorry, I'm late."

"No, no. It's not your fault. I'm the burden."

"Maanvi, how can you say that? You're like my sister if I had one, don't worry it's not your fault."

"Okay, we'll put this blame on your devar okay?" Maanvi grinned with Jeevika joining in.

The duo arrived in the hall, where everyone sat for breakfast. The whole Vadhera family looked on as Maanvi limped into the scene, looking agitated to see the pain Maanvi was in.

"Everyone, this is Maanvi." Announced Jeevika whilst making Maanvi sit on the chair on the corner.

"Hi," Maanvi spoke, trying to not making any eye contact with the family.

"I'm so sorry we couldn't meet you last night, it was quite late and we didn't want to disturb you." Spoke an elderly man, sitting at the head chair of the table. He had worn a black suit, and looked pristine and high classed.

"It's okay, no problem." Maanvi said, she really didn't like it when elders apologized to her.

"Maanvi, this is Dadaji. My mother-in-law Vanshika, Inder Chacha, Kadambari Chachi, their son Shlok, Swamini Bua, my husband Viren and my devar Viraat." Jeevika introduced her family to Maanvi who smiled back until she saw Jeevika's devar, known as Viraat. It was because of him that she was in this mess, meaning that she was behind her time limit to find her mother's friend.

"Er, I'm sorry that I entered your house like this. I mean, it must be strange having an unknown person in your house but I'll leave soon."

"Nonsense, child! It's our fault that you're in this problem, you can leave as soon as you're better." Dadaji said.

"But sir," Maanvi protested.

"Sir? You can call me Dadaji, there's no need for this politeness child."

"Okay, Dadaji. I have to leave, I can't stay here."

"Maanvi, you're hurt. You'll get ill this way, you can't leave." Vanshika said.

"Yes, Maanvi. Mom and Dadaji are right. You can't leave now." Viraat spoke. Maanvi glared at him. First he tries to kill me and now he tells me what to do? She thought.

"Maanvi please." Jeevika pleaded.

"Okay, I give up. But only when my wound has healed okay?"

"Okay. Promise." Jeevika said.

The next few minutes went by in silence, with the odd occasion of Viraat looking across at Maanvi whilst she shunned him, no need to be polite to him, she thought.

After breakfast, Jeevika took Maanvi back to her room'well, the room that she woke up in.

"Your family are really nice." Maanvi said.

"I know, they are the best sasural that a girl can wish for!" replied Jeevika, taking Maanvi to the bed.

"No, I'm fine. If I rest too much I'll get ill." Joked Maanvi.

"But if you don't rest, how will you get better?"

"Don't worry, I'll be fine. I don't like being in bed when the day is so nice."

"Okay, if you say so. I'll just come. Okay?" Maanvi nodded whilst Jeevika went out of the room. Just then her phone rang and Maanvi cursed quietly. She looked at the caller I.D, "Beeji" was calling. Maanvi shut her eyes and bit her lip, she wasn't even close to her destination and Beeji was going to stop her. She decided to man up and answer the phone.

"H-Hello?" Maanvi asked with a hint of fear.

"Maanvi! Maanvi where are you!" Exclaimed Beeji. "We are going crazy looking for you. If you didn't pick the phone up, we would have called the police!"

"Beeji'"

"What Beeji? Come home, Maanvi!"

"NO, Beeji I can't."

"Why not? Where are you, I'll tell your Madan Chacha to pick you up."

"No Beeji, you can't. I have to do this. I have to find out about my parents if you won't tell me."

"Maanvi, beta. Please."

"No, Beeji. I'm tired with all these secrets, I'll come home when I'm ready I promise."

"Maanvi, you can't do this."

"I'm sorry. I'm fine Beeji, and I'll be fine when I come back. Don't worry about me."

"Maanvi'"

"You lot won't tell me about my past, so I have to go."

"I think it's better that you find out about it yourself, I did whatever I could to keep you away from the truth. But if that's what you want, then fine. Go. Find it. But you have to promise me, you won't let the truth change your thinking about us, okay?"

"Okay, Beeji. I promise, I'll be home soon."

"Where are you anyway?"

"Chandigarh, Beeji. Chandigarh."

"Okay, promise to call every day okay?"

"Yes. I will." And with that the phone disconnected, leading Maanvi her freedom to find the truth. What had happened to her parents, why were the Chaudary's so discreet about it? She had to find it. Just had to.

Edited by ZAHARA. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Jus read all the parts so far...
Zahara your a mindblowing writer its so beautifully written
I love the whole concept of manvi looking for her parents, chaudhary's secret and how manvi accidentally lands in the vadhera house uniting VirMan...
I loved it so much and love this part especially and when virat kept annoying her and now she is planning her sweet revenge
Really super work
Continue soon and please PM me when u update
Im looking forward in reading more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mindblowing update!!!
Loved it!!!
Thanx 4 pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just read all the parts 2gthr...
mindlowing n freaking awsum...👏👏
y do i gt a feeling ki jeevika n manvi r bloodrelated...
luvd virman bickering a looot...😆
waiting for mannuz sweet revenge...m sure it wud b a treat 2 read...
well...nice style of writing⭐️
plz cont soon n wud luv to recieve a pm for ur wonderful updates!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome!!!Awesome!!!Awesome!!! 👏
Luvd it ...!!Cant wait for the next VirManish parts...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U are superfast. Just read both the parts. Loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hs7071

Jus read all the parts so far...
Zahara your a mindblowing writer its so beautifully written
I love the whole concept of manvi looking for her parents, chaudhary's secret and how manvi accidentally lands in the vadhera house uniting VirMan...
I loved it so much and love this part especially and when virat kept annoying her and now she is planning her sweet revenge
Really super work
Continue soon and please PM me when u update
Im looking forward in reading more


Thank you so much! It's literally all from the top of my head, no planning or anything so there are some mistakes *oops!* I will update as soon as I can! Thank you once again.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alicemath

just read all the parts 2gthr...

mindlowing n freaking awsum...👏👏
y do i gt a feeling ki jeevika n manvi r bloodrelated...
luvd virman bickering a looot...😆
waiting for mannuz sweet revenge...m sure it wud b a treat 2 read...
well...nice style of writing⭐️
plz cont soon n wud luv to recieve a pm for ur wonderful updates!!!😊


Blood related? Maanvi and Jeevika? Hehehe, well read and find out. I'm not giving anything away 😉 Haha, I tried to incorporate VirMan's nok jhok but I'm not that good, oh well hope its acceptable anyway.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter Five – Bandariya

Maanvi took a quick shower and changed her clothes, after finding her travel bag on the corner of the room. Wearing a dark blue suit, she walked out of the en-suite bathroom with a towel to dry her hair. Suddenly, she heard the door open and in strolled in Viraat Vadhera.

"What are you doing here?!" Shouted Maanvi, who was suddenly conscious of herself.

"I'm sorry, actually – "

"Sorry? First you try to kill me, and now you're in my room?!" She interrupted.

Viraat couldn't help but smirk, Wow, this girl is a lioness, he thought.

"If you let me explain – "

"What are you doing in my room? Can't you see that I'm changing? GO!"

"Your room?" He smirked.

"Yes, my room. Go before I tell Jeevika!"

"Oh, so now you're using my bhabhi to threaten me? Bravo Maanvi, bravo."

"It's Miss Chaudary to you, Mr Vadhera. I wouldn't want to be on first name basis with the person that tried to kill me!"

"Oh okay, well Miss Chaudary, what else do you have to say about me? After all, I am a killer, a pervert who goes into rooms, what else? Tell me, tell me."

"You donkey, horse, chep!"

"What's going on here?" Jeevika asked, coming into the room. "Viraat, is everything okay?"

"Yes, I was just telling your guest that we are happy to have her here. You know, to make her stay comfortable. And I was just getting some clothes from the wardrobe." Viraat pointed to the brown coloured wardrobe behind Maanvi who looked in shock. "I was just making sure I wasn't disturbing Maanvi, you know the sweet boy I am." He looked at Maanvi in pure mockery.

Maanvi gulped. "This is your room?"

"Yes, Maanvi this is Viraat's room." Jeevika interrupted, smiling.

"Miss Chaudary, have you heard that phrase 'my house is your house'? Well, assume this; my bedroom is your bedroom." He chuckled. Maanvi stood in front of him in pure shock. He looked at her, with eyebrow tilted upwards. "Hello, Miss Chaudary?" He waved his hands in her face.

"What? What?" Maanvi quickly focused.

"Did you know, you look like someone…" He pondered on.

"Who?"

"Let's see. Have you ever been to the national zoo?"

"Zoo? No, why?"

"Have you ever seen a monkey?"

"Tsk, no."

"Oh, so bad. I swear I saw your twin, Miss Bandariya." He mocked.

"What?"

"What?"

"You call me a Bandariya? Are you mad?"

"When did I say anything? I was just getting my clothes out of my wardrobe which is in my room, right bhabhi?" He looked at Jeevika who looked at him perplexed.

"Viraat? Why are you teasing Maanvi?"

"Jeevika! Your devar called me a Bandariya right?" Maanvi didn't like Viraat at all. Okay, maybe she did call his room as hers but it was a totally innocent mistake!

"No, Bhabhi. I think Miss Bandariya is mistaken, I did no such thing." He smiled looking at Maanvi who became angry.

"Again? You called me that again?!"

Maanvi and Viraat became engrossed in their conversation, him mocking her and her getting angry when they didn't notice just how close they were. Inches away, Viraat looked down at Maanvi who had to look up at him. 'This girl is too easy to annoy', thought Viraat as he smirked at Maanvi who had her fingers point in his face. 'Stupid, who does he think he is?' She thought. She was annoyed at him! After all, he was the one who failed to mention that it was her room and then intended to mock her in front of Jeevika. Whilst the two were arguing, Jeevika looked at them confused, not understanding what had just happened.

"Viraat! Maanvi! What are you guys doing?" She exclaimed, tired with their argument.

"Bhabhi, what am I doing? I was just getting my clothes." He replied and walked towards the wardrobe and picked out a white t-shirt with dark green jeans. Walking out, he made sure Jeevika wasn't looking and then pulled out his tongue at the stunned Maanvi.

"Jeevika!" Maanvi shouted.

"What? Maanvi are you okay?" By then Viraat had gone and Maanvi felt displeased.

"No, nothing. I'm fine."

"Are you sure?"

"Yes, don't worry."

"Okay, I have to do some work so I'll see you later?"

"Yeah sure,"

"If you need anyone, call anyone of us. And Viraat is just opposite the hall so, don't hesitate to ask okay?"

"Don't worry Jeevika."

Whilst Jeevika walked out of the room, Maanvi smirked. She wasn't the type that lets other people walk all over her. If there's anything Maanvi loved more was the sweet smell of sweet revenge.

"Mr Chep, watch out. I don't give in too easily. I will get my revenge otherwise my name isn't Maanvi Chaudary." She smirked. "Just watch Chep-ji. Just watch."

Edited by ZAHARA. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I hav read all ur parts they r very inter esting plz do pm me whenev er u update the next one

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