OS: The Weight of Gold

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-Saumya-

@-Saumya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

OMG 😳 This is one of the best OS I've read. It's written so beautifully.

Right from Aarti wanting to wear the bracelet with her realization of the importance that bracelet held for Arnav... Everything was amazing <3

And the end... Perfect :)

Brilliant OS, Nayika!

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

This was so beautiful !!! 😳 I really liked how you created the character of Aarti. She touched my heart in just a little while. Arnav and Khushi united because of her. Hell, i love the kid! 😆

P.s I am so sorry i haven't been liking and commenting since the past few days. Actually my finals were going on which just ended yesterday. Just got the time to come on IF. I'm really sorry for the inconvenience of sending PMs without getting a response but i promise to make it up to everyone here. 🤗

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MvDiva25

@MvDiva25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

OHMYGOD.

This OS is so touching! I love Aarti, she's really amazing. And you are the best! How you've rounded Arhi to come to full circle after 20 whole years was just the thread for me!

Its a beauutiful OS, Nayika. Its been a while since I've read one of your OS's and this one just does the trick!

Thanks so much for the PM! :)

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Sumi

@mumz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Brilliant and heart-rending at the same time...good material for a short movie..

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Raj

@GillRK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

that was sooo sweet really enjoyed reading this os thank you :)

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Loved the one shot! Superb! Awesome! It touched my heart.

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

a heart touching one!!! so nice!!!!

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

This is truly touching Nayika. You are a terrific writer !:)

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@pixielove29

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

This is so beautiful! It nearly brought tears to my eyes :'D

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Amy

@mz.brar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Its heartbreaking to think of all the time they lost out on and to think about all the things that could have been.
KKGSR- shes always been his -and it will forever remain that way;no matter the distance or the time.

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