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Awww Shu you really know how to make me cry dont you!

this was saad!

Arnav and Khushi separate

Nice touch bringing in Arti and the bracelet

It was so heart touching when she went and gave him the bracelet and he gave it back with the note

I loved it

Glad that Khushi was found in the end :D

loved it!

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Varsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was so beautiful! :) How that bracelet caught her fancy and as much as it was denied to her, the more she wanted it. Behaviour typical of a child! :) Arnav's initial resentment and then later his repentance for shouting at her. And then how Aarti managed to bring them together again! Though the fact that she didnt, well couldn't tell him over the phone seemed cliched to me, but it seemed apt that both Khushi and Arnav dont have prior knowledge before seeing the other. :) Haha! and KKGSR ! :D

I loved it! :)

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Caroline_arhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry I posted another comment, the story was so beautiful and gripping I totally forgot I had reserved a post, so sorry:)😳

But brilliant writing, wow👏

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Gunjan Mukherjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

If i tell u dat aftr reading dis i love u(dnt tk it othrws😛)will u undrstnd hw much i loved dis os?
total filmy reunion(just d backgroung music was mssng😛)..touching..
comin to arti, she was denied d bracelet repeatedly n she became more n more addicted n attracted to it..just like forbidden fruit..
d whole incident, frm arti losing d bracelet to arti n arnav hugging, was very touching..nyc emotions u put there..
loved d ending..happily evr aftr😊
the last line was an intelligent touch😊

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nayikaPM

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Originally posted by: Psychedelic
That was so beautiful! :) How that bracelet caught her fancy and as much as it was denied to her, the more she wanted it. Behaviour typical of a child! :) Arnav's initial resentment and then later his repentance for shouting at her. And then how Aarti managed to bring them together again! Though the fact that she didnt, well couldn't tell him over the phone seemed cliched to me, but it seemed apt that both Khushi and Arnav dont have prior knowledge before seeing the other. :) Haha! and KKGSR ! :D

I loved it! :)

Thank you!

I did initially have the University and cafe in Delhi so she wouldn't have to not tell him for so long (maybe an hour max) but then it seemed a bit improbable that Khushi would be in Delhi and Arnav wouldn't find out somehow so this was the only way :P

Khushi probably knew it was coming though after seeing Aarti in the cafe.

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indy12

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Posted: 13 years ago

awww! what a veer zara moment😆

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Risha J

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Just finished reading! This was so heartfelt and beautiful! I've always thought it'd be awesome if Anjali's child played cupid for ArHi. Aarti's so special, isn't she?

Great work.

BTW, I loved 30 days. 😃

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Caroline_arhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing<3

Beautiful<3

Bought tears to my eyes, the way she kept the bracelet, the way Arnav let her have it<3

And the way Khushi and Arnav met<3

totally beautiful<3

WOW<3

Thankyou for the PM<3

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...Doctor...

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Awww it was so beautiful & touching.

I loved it!!

It was really emotional.

I loved aarti . She really cared for her mama & mami.

You wrote it beautifully Nayika.

Arnav cared so much for the bracelet. That was such a sweet gesture.

The ending was perfect. Honestly, I wasn't expecting their reunion & for a moment I thought that khushi is dead. But you proved me wrong & ended it perfectly.

Keep writing.

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