Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#681

Nice update.
Why is Arnav holding himself back when he Knows that Khushi longs for him.Now that e also knows what his daughter wants,he has to shed his inhibitions and start to live his life.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#682

Thanks for the PM ...

Beautifully written ... just hope they are now able to sort their differences and be together ...

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#683

THIS WAS SOOO BEAUTIFUL.. AASHNA CRYING REALLY WAS SAD... N HOW KHUSHI IS TAKIN REFUGE IN ARNAV'S WARMTH..!!

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#684

*late update*..Khushi shud tell Aashna abt Arnav nw..no mttr wteva d end result shud b..she's der daughtr n she ought 2 no..hope NK helps in unitin dem again..:)update sooon n do pm me..😛😛😛😛thnxxx😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#685

Yet another beautiful piece of work...im so overwhelmed...loved the way she turned to him for comfort...

Cheers!!

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MISTIE

@MISTIE

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#686

loved it.
Poor aashna baby.
They kissed.
Khusi slept with arnav..hmm.
Thanx 4 d pm

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Swati

@Swati_

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#687

Beautiful Sona,amazingly beautiful...
Seriously dont have words to describe this update...

I love Arnav and Khushi so so much in this ff...i hope they start living like a normal couple soon..their kiss was so pure and full of love for each other...

Felt bad for their daughter..a father is a must in a daughter's life...girls can be close to their mother but no one can replace the connection a father and daughter share...i hope she gets her father back..

Your choice of words , the way you describe each and every scene is gorgeous...

Waiting for the next update..thanx for the pm hon...
Take care...

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#688

BEautiful update sona
Wonderful dedication to my sweet munchy - she is one of the best writers I have ever come across - no doubts about it
The last part in trance was tooo tooo good - well written
Luved it - thx for ur pm

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#689

through the very long seperation the fact that they long for each other is astoundingly beautiful...u write that very nicely...

i have never been a fan of silent suffering even if it is due to a grt love but reading this update i feel that may be true love exists somewhere even if u have to be apart even when u grow this old...lovely...

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#690

Omg the ending!! It was just what was needed :) I love that Khushi's still able to draw so much comfort from Arnav, and I'm so glad you're showing them as still being relatively intimate because that really adds a special touch! I hope Aashna finds out who her poppa is soon, I bet she'll be thrilled :D

PS. I really actually liked the feeding puri scene too, something about it was just super sweet and homely!