Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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BlueOrchid

@BlueOrchid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

Beautifully written.. Awesome feeling... Ty,:) continue soon..

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#702

that was so beautifully written...
i felt for khushi in every part of this update...
she is trying so hard to combat with her past n to cope up with her present situation in every possible way--but the reality once again turns up against her..
felt so bad for aashna also...
the kiss was just mind blowing though...the passion n intensity they shared after all these years spoke volumes...
n he asked her if she is alright !!!!

oh my favorite part --khushi feeding arnav...that was sooo captivating...

"No one, however, knew if his actions were fortuitous or purposely done."
too good dear...
another amazing update...

thanks so much for the pm...:)

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Devilways

@Devilways

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Posted: 13 years ago

#703

Beautiful, gorgeous and so magnificently written it is difficult to express what i felt while reading and after reading each line.

The flow of the story, the words and the manner of writing was wow. In short.

Continue soon.

Thanks for the pm.

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irene

@rennie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#704

lovely update...can't wait to read more...

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

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Posted: 13 years ago

#705

amazing...!!!!😃😃😃

u write beautifully...😃😃

luved aashna's part...plz update dis ff a little faster...i can't w8 to read more...😃😃

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#706

an emotional update..in this chapter i felt khushi's inner turmoil.her daughter's pain and tears was heart-wrenching..

awesome update

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 13 years ago

#707

Hey gold!!

(pun- gettit? Your name Sona, and then your IF group is goldie.. Gettit??!!)

So, basically I love the chapter. I love it so much. I know how bad Ashna was feeling. And imagine how awkward Khushi must have been feeling?

The way you bring out the emotions in the chapters... Wow!!!

Love,
V