Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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@boyznaka

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#661

This was so, so beautiful. The end--Perfect. Hell, the whole chapter, just perfect! I loved it!

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#662

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It is 2Am. And U r down with illness and U have college tomorrow. U should be sleeping now. Not updating. x-(

But yet, thanks for the update! Long wait :P

That was beautiful. The food feeding part - there was a tingling sensation all over my body. As if I was watching their sizzling romance from a hiding point. ;)

I was wondering when this question would come up - "Who's my dad". I just loved how mom and daughter Duo hugged each other after the vulnerable moment.

The Kiss. No matter how much aged they are, their chemistry and romance is still green. Same sensations :)

She slept along with him? That was cute. But she is a women and she needs support from her man. I totally see how vulnerable she is at this moment!

Beautiful update, Sona!

Thanks for the pm

Edited by --Siva-- - 13 years ago

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chetanahooda

@chetanahooda

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#663

Okay i wll not go on and on about how wonderful the update was, but jump to thanking you first for the update...I have been waiting for the update for a long time.

I LOVE you for the last part...I mean abso-freaking-lutely!

Brilliant!👏

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neena

@shadesofme

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#664

tats a beautiful update...
poor kushi she is through so much ...
and the last part was so beautiful...

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preetijaiswal19

@preetijaiswal19

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#665

wow...loved the update!!! so sweet, nostalgic, earthy...there's something about ur writing that is really calming and relaxing! thnx for the pm :)

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#666

This was beautiful !!!!!!!!!!
Brilliantly deceived the emotions of Khushi and her feelings, confusion and doubt !!!!!!
Loved the way she was trying to tell arnav without letting him know that where their daughter was !!!!!!!
the aashna and Khushi scene was soo sad !!! I think Khushi should tell her !!!!
The scene in the garden <3 !!!!!!! *Sigh* !!!
Beautifully described !!!!! And the kiss was lovely !!!!
Awww she went to sleep next to him !!!!!
Cant wait to read more !!!!! Update soon !!!
Brilliant work Sona !!!!

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Roshkolovemusic

@Roshkolovemusic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#667

Very beautifully written part.

Felt so sad for Aashna. Hope she will get the deserved happy life with her parents.

Their kiss was magical and Khushi is remembering everything they shared before.

Thanks for the pm. 😊Pls continue soon dear.

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ssaaaa

@ssaaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#668

Awww Sona that was beautifully written. I really feel sorry for Aashu, hope she finds out Arnav is her dad.

The moment between Arnav and Khushi was so sweet. I love how a small smile can convey how they feel.

Love the way you write!

Please continue, I still wanna know why Arnav told her to leave!

Thanks for the PM

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#669

it was one such perfect ending.! i myself felt content at the end.!

plus their kiss was written in such a beautiful manner that i was able to visualize it too.

see the magic of your writing.! brilliantly written.

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#670

Aashna has matured too early for her age,and with such matural comes an instinctive quality of protecting the parents. When she let her walls down and asked about her dad,the feeling of helplessness was so overwhelming that it made me want to hug her fiercely.

The changes that years have brought about in Khushi and Arnav are so subtle yet dynamic. The awareness they feel in their bones is still so strong. It almost like wine,gets better and more potent with time.

An emotional chapter.