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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Sorry 8i dont knwo ur name.
thanks for continuing it.

Dozed of never ever.
It was wonderful reading it fully.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Awesum yaar..
Kria's dress was really cute!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
I'll update it today itself... so pls bechari bachchi ki jaan baksh do... thoda sa sabar kar lo.. remember... sabar ka phal meetha hota hai...types... meetha hoga ya nahi you all decide... but by the end of the day I'll definitely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
* Phew * just read it .. sry i knoe m late ..:'(


kays coming to ur update ...
its awsam ..
the way two strangers meet .. that feeling ahhh..
kriya"s attitude .. rey .. awww so cute
those restless moments to meet ur liked ones !!!
just fab ...''!!!!!
n just loved out destiny made it move ..!!
perfect ..!!!!!!
- do update soon ..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Shenz darls i loved it to the extremest core dear...

Really Awesum and strong concept !!!!

It's a bliss imagning something like this...

Unique concept...hats off to u yaar !!!!

Continue sooon nd PM me..!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Rishi, this one's for you... hope you all like it... and thanks to all I read all the comments and loved them all...

Character Sketch:

Palak Ghai:


Married to Sumit and Kria's mom, she is not a strict mother. She has given all the freedom to her only daughter; loves her a lot. For her life means her husband and her daughter; and their happiness. Loves her family.

Sumit Ghai:


He is a businessman. He is the owner of Ghai group of industries. Kria's dad, he is fun loving and cares a lot about his family. For him his family itself is his world. He wants Kria to be settled down with a nice man, who would love her more than him, should treat her like a princess, and is leading a successful life so that Kria can lead a peaceful life ahead as well. In short, he is a 'typical father'.

Gautami Singhania:


She is married to Rajdheer Singhani. They have a son, Reyaansh Singhania. She wants him to get married. She just wants a perfect girl, who can manage her family and handle her house 'satisavitri types'. In short a 'yogya bhau'; need not necessary to be perfect for her son can be okay if the girl is 'thik-thak types'. (I wonder whether she wants a bride for her son or a bahu for herself.)

Rajdheer Singhania:


Married to Gautami and father of Reyaansh. He owes Singhania group of industries. Loves his family and wants Rey to marry someone he wishes to spend his entire life with. He disagrees with Gautami at getting a yogya bahu inspite of someone who loves Rey, whereas he most of the time he agrees with her point of view.

Kria Ghai:


She is a bubbly, fun loving girl with loads of attitude. Loves to gain attention. Arrogant but a sweetheart. Filled with attitude but someone with simple wishes and wants. Perfect example for 'Beauty with Brains'. Her beauty attracts every guy around her, they just can't help but stare at this beauty infront of them. Loves her parents for being so understanding. Hates corporate parties and corporate talks. She is in corporate field just to dream fulfilled, to see her dream project become true some day. Her world revolved around her family and friends until she met Rey.

Reyaansh Singhania:


He is a complete workaholic. Hates to talk about marriage especially when it's from his mom. He is the owner of RS group of industries that he himself has started on his own. A perfect gentleman with all the qualities that a girl dreams to have in her 'prince charming'. All girls around him can't stop but droll over him. But he's very dedicated to his work and never gives a damn about the ones who look at him dreamingly. Finds difficult to express his feelings and is not a filmy bug.


Aarav chopra:



Kria's best friend... aah... correction bestest friend forever... they know each other since childhood and know each other really well... is elder to Kria and always protective and supporting to her... can never bear tears in her eyes... Aarav calls Kria as 'sexy' and Kria calls him 'hottie'. he was in abroad yet now here in India... Rey knows about his bonding with Kria but Aarav is not yet aware about KriYaansh being into relationship...

There are more characters to this but would reveal them only when they are about to enter.😉


P.S: for pms if required add me to your buddy list

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guys please lemme know if you want me to really continue this or just end it?

Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
U Wrote So Well Yaar..
I Can't believe dat You Are Writing for First Time😲..

Awesome Yaar...
Love it..
Do Write More
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
hey guys, typing this for the forth time😡
anyways as you all know I thought this to be an OS and planned it so didn't had any idea of continuing it... but tried to do so... hope to keep up to your expectations...

one more thing I am not good at writing romantic stuffs but as this is post-confession it had to be romantic... toh gave it a try...


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Chapter2:

RECAP: I LOVE YOU



(kria's POV in Pink, hope you all remember)

I was in the most comfortable and secure place for me in the world. It feels like home, to be precise it feels like heaven. I never wanna break this hug. I can be here for life long, the place where I belong.

(Rey's POV in blue)


I was just registering the moment. I felt complete. She suddenly questioned, "you really do?" I was stunned, moved back a little to face her, not letting her go, still holding her by waist.

"what kinda question was that?" I almost yelled at her. I could not get what was going on? but then found an evil smile on her face, she slightly pushed me and started running on the beach.

Okay so she wants to play... here I come, Kria...

"You'll have to pay for this, Kria" I screamed out loud, while running behind her... trying to get hold of her... after a lot of struggle.. Finally I caught her by her waist and pulled her towards myself, she was above the ground.

(same as Swayam did in D3 to Sharon when she slapped Shivam)

Kria started pedaling her legs trying to escape, Rey was strong enough to hold her but this action of her's made it difficult for him to maintain his balance and they fell on the ground. Kria on top of Rey.

When she realized they were falling she suddenly kept her hand on Rey's, that was around her waist and squeezed it; all this time she had her eyes closed. As soon as they landed,Kria didn't hear anything from Rey... this made her concerned. She slid herself next to him, turned to face him, he had his eyes closed... "Rey are you okay??" she asked. she patted his cheeks in order to make him awake.

Suddenly her hands were caught by him and he rolled upon her. "I'm fine dear. It was just to make you pay back for what you did some time back." he said and winked at her

He planted a hard kiss on her cheeks, she was taken a back but was enjoying the moment. He kisses her jawline, eyes then slides down to her neck and starts planting wet kisses all over her neck. She moved her head to the other side revealing more skin for his access. He was enjoying each and every bit of this romantic pay back.

"Re--y, p-le--as--e st---op." she stammered as it was difficult for her to utter anything while he was going wild but he didn't bother and was busy kissing her. She again spoke, "please stop. I wanna talk to you. Stop it, Rey."

He jerked and sat straight and she too managed to get up and sit next to him. He felt embarrassed thinking may be he was moving to fast. He stared at the ground and finally uttered, "I am sorry. I never wanted to make you uncomfortable."

She smiled at this and said, "you don't need to be sorry. I didn't want to spoil your mood, I am sorry if I did" made an apologizing face, he looked at her innocent face and was lost in her beauty that was so appealing even in the dim moon light.

"Its just that I wanted to share something with you. I have never spoken about this with anyone but I feel like sharing it with you." she said while starring at the sea. She looked at him once for his approval and he just nodded to her asking her to proceed

"You know girls always want a grand proposal. Something kinda a royal, grand... may be an outing at a restaurant or any place... with all arrangements made to make the girl feel like a princess.. an even violins been played"

I am such a stupid... how can I forget this?? its a special moment for a girl and it has to be special as well and I ruined it all.. but still she confessed her love why? my train of thoughts were brought to a stop by her voice


"but.. I never wanted so... you said what you felt, what was there in your heart... and that's how I always wanted it to be... a simple yet heartful proposal... no filmy drama, no dramatic scenes and those scripted dialogues" she smiled at him wholeheartedly and then again shifts her gaze at the sea.

"I am happy that you did it this way.. Look Rey, arrangements, decorations, dinner in a five-star hotel; these things never matters to me... what matters is that you have the one who loves you along... and here you are with me. And you know one thing I also wanted it to be at the sea-side; and it was all just the way I always wished to have. Perfect. Thanks"

he hugged her sideways and said, "I didn't knew all this. But thank God, its just the way you wanted. I think I should have planned a romantic candle-light dinner or something" (makes a puppy face)

She pulled his cheeks. "aw!!! don't be upset for such a small thing, that doesn't even matters to me.. and whereas your romantic candle-light dinner is concerned I guess you had enough of your romantic dinner (pointing at herself) in this moon light inspite of candle-light. So wasn't that enough for you?"

"Well if I am suppose to get such romantic candle-light dinner than its never enough for me." said with an evil smile and leaned forward and kissed her nape, then ear lobe slightly bit it, to which she moaned with pleasure.

"Its getting late and I haven't informed at home about me being this late. My parents might be worried. I guess we should leave." she said looking at the dark night.

"But I don't wanna leave you. Is it not possible to stay here for some more time." he said blinked his eyes twice and looked deep in those hazel green eyes trying to convince her but all in vain. "okay lets go." he said in a low voice and they moved to the car and sat in.

He started driving, as he knew she hated silence, so he blankly started speaking about random things

and soon they reached Ghai mansion. He came out to her side, opened the door for her and accompanied her till the entrance.

He had his hands in his pocket. They were now at the entrance, when he held her hand. He didn't want her to leave. She looked at him helplessly, placed her right hand on his cheek and said, "good night. see you tomorrow." And hugged him.

She was about to enter when he called out her name, "Kria" she looked back at him and he said, "is this the way you say good bye? don't you know how should you bid good bye or say good night to your boyfriend?"

"I never had any."she pouted. "but now you do.."he said coming closer to her, she hit the door and he pinned her to the door blocking her way. "I'll show you how to say good night."saying this he aimed at her lips. "It seems you are quite experienced in all these things." she said trying to control her anger.

"I guess somethings burning." he said imitating to smell something. Now she was unable to control her anger and started hitting his chest. He took hold of her hands and whispered in her ears, "you're the first one and only one... to rule my heart." She blushed at his comment. He continued, "so now can i have my good bye, please?" and leaned forward aiming at her lips, they were few mm's apart, she closed her eyes giving her approval for what was coming up. He touched her lips with his gently, brushed it and moved back. She could feel the electricity jolts at his touch but now was left confused... she opened up her eyes and gave a confused look.

"I guess you were getting late." he said teasingly. She gave a angry look (fake anger) and suddenly he gave a peck on her cheeks and said, "that'll do for me." She placed her hand on his cheek and pecked on the other and said, "good bye."

"good night?" he asked forwarding his other cheek. She slightly slapped on it. He wasn't expecting this. "What was this for?" he asked trying to recover from what just happened a minute ago. "I didn't get the other one so why should you get it?" she said. She continued, "and on top of that you didn't mention the count of good bye kisses and good night kisses... Well which rule-book says that there is no GOOD NIGHT SLAP."

He rubbed his cheek."Fine. I am leaving." said in disappointment and with this he was about to leave when she pulled him back with force such that his crushed into her's. She was pressed between the door and masculine body of this Man. (who now belongs to her)

She gave a peck on the cheek where she slapped and questioned, "where do you think you were going without your good night kiss?" she again kissed the same cheek and mouthed a 'sorry'. He just took her in his arms, hugged her tight and whispered, "You don't have to be. You have all the right."

"Good night" he said breaking the hug and moved towards his car. She was still standing at the entrance and looking at Rey. He hopped in the car and started driving, before he would disappear from her sight, she waved her hand to which he gave a smile and drove to his home.

Kria went inside her room; all the while jumping, twirling around and saying 'I am in love." She changed her clothes and laid down on bed thinking about Rey, the moments spent at the beach, their confession and all the moments that she had spent along with 'HIM' tonight.

Meanwhile, Rey reached his house entered his room and switched on the Music player. 'Hosanna' was being played. I felt it was meant for us. It was written taking 'us' into consideration. Something that I wanna convey to her.

(please play this song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M2ygPLoNGbk&feature=fvwrel)

Dil hote jo, mere seene mein do

Doosra dil bhi main, tumhe deta todne ko

(ho hosanna hosanna hosanna..)

He placed his hand on left side of his chest and closed his eyes trying to feel her and imagines her.

Dilkash thi woh shaam pehle pehal jab ke tumse mili thi nazar
Aisa chakraya ki ab yeh na jaanu ke jaaun toh jaaun kidhar
Hosanna, tum samne thi pal


When he opens his eyes he finds her standing infront of him.


Hosanna, agle hi pal thi ojhal


He forwards his hand to touch her but she disappears. He scans the room but she was not there.

Ab kya bataaun main, kis haal mein hoon main

Yahaan wahaan bas apna dil aur hosh dhoondta hoon main

Hosanna (madhoshi deewanagi)
Hosanna (main aur meri bandagi)
Hosanna (ab hai yehi zindagi)
Hosanna

He takes out a photo frame that had Kria's photo, he caresses her image.

Everybody wanna know feel like a, feel like a I really wanna be here with you

Its not enough to say that we are made for each other
Its Love that is Hosanna true

He recollects the moments spent with her tonight. Today he knew the real Kria, the simple girl with a golden heart.


Hosanna, be there when you are calling I'll be there
Hosanna, feeling like my whole life has changed
I never wanna be the same
Its time we re-arrange
I take a step you take a step and me calling out to you

Hello hello..
Hosanna ho hosanna..


Her cuteness,innocence, childish behavior, her pouts always made him melt. The way she teased but still love him.


Udti hui titli ki rangeen parchaayi reh jaati hai phoolon mein

Vaise hi tum ik tasveer ke jaise chhaye ho inn aankhon mein
Hosanna, tum jo mera khwaab ho
Hosanna, dil kyon na betaab ho
Kahoon toh kya kahoon
Main kyun deewana hoon

Tumhare baare mein hi har ghadi main sochta hoon kyun.


Her laugh, he found it to be most soothing for his ears. Her smile that can make him do anything for her.

Hello hello ..

Hosanna (ab din ho ya raat ho)
Hosanna (dil chaahe tum saath ho)
Hosanna (bas haathon mein haath ho)
Hosanna

He Kept the photo frame aside and went to the balcony and stood there staring the moon and closed his eyes to see her beautiful face.

Dil hote jo, mere seene mein do
Doosra dil bhi main, tumhe deta todne ko
Dil hote jo, mere seene mein do
Doosra dil bhi main, tumhe deta todne ko

"I had one that's already with you. If I had nay more; let it be one, two or as many you would have owed it by now." saying this he turned off the Music player and hits his bed, grabs the pillow, brings it close and tightly hugs it and says, "I love you Kria."

Meanwhile, Kria hugged her pillow and said, "Rey, I love you."

And both dozed off and had a sound sleep, dreaming about the other.

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*phew* finally completed... ignore typo mistakes... hope its enough for today... please comment and lemme know how was it?

good? bad? worst? like it? hate it?

all kinda comments welcomed even criticisms, juttas, chappals, rotten tomatoes, eggs and all that you wanna throw at me...

Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow !!!
Simply the best ...
Cute , romantic and naughty Rey and Kria ...
Loved it ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its very nice continue soon...

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