KriYaansh~Love at first sight~ chp9 updtd on pg136

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Ridhi

@rIDhid3rox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

amazing...beautiful and superb os👏

if you are continuing it plz pm me😳

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

a spendid piece...loved kria and rey's first meet-kria made rey her driver/...their pov's after that meet were awesome...loved their 2nd meeting in kria's office...the way they became friends...the stammering rey ...but the best part was the sea-shore one...nothing filmy,nothing emotional...simple,beautiful and blissful...hats off for pulling it off so well...

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Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Its mindblowing do continue and pm me please !!!

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a_happy_2000

@a_happy_2000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

It was amazzzing !!!

Short .. sweet .. simple yet lots of romance and love ...

Loved it ...

Keep going .. continue writing ...

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

wowww i love this girl keep it up

ise ss bna do na

con. please

megical

kya baat kya baat kya baat

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Awsm dear!

And thanx for pm

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

awesome, amazing OS...loved it very much

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

NOTE:

guys since I have re-titled it as KriYaansh~Love at first sight~

you guys might have guessed it.. that I am planning to continue it... actually its all your comments that has made me continue this... so you guys are responsible for this... I don't know whether it will be a SS or FF... that depends on you as well as how much can I drag this story...

If I knew that you guys would ask me continue it, I won't have given that confession so soon... I did it to give a complete update.. so that if disapproved... it wasn't left incomplete...

well I didn't thought that I would be getting this kinda response... I was expecting criticism, juttas, chappals, rotten tomatoes, eggs and what not?? But to my surprise I got something totally opposite of what I thought it to be...

I have a doubt... How many of you actually succeeded to read the entire update?? as it was long enough to make any one doze off... I thought you guys might be pakaofyied... well I still doubt some might have dozed off, well many😆

so next time it would be shorter than the previous one so that I dont Pakaofy you all... well working on the next chapter.. hopefully will update in a day or two..

till then keep dreaming about KriYaansh/Arsha and have fun...

Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Kriyaansh can never pakaofy us . . . . . . They are our sweethearts 🤗

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Luv_Kriyaansh
Gr8 awwsome story luved d way its written👏...'i love you kria ghai' just luved dat...the way u sarted nd ended both were awwsome the way u mentioned feelings i felt lyk i was feeling d connection d chemistry nd y do u keep on saying 'juttas,chappals nd criticism' r we dat bad?😛 i think we all shud throw praises 😉 fr dis wonderful strry...Thnxx fr d PM nd do PM me wen u update d nxt Part...
KEEP IT UP CONTINUE D STORY SOON EAGERLY WAITING...
Rishita😊

It feels great that you liked it... but its not that you guys are bad but may be just that I cant trust myself sply my so called writing skills, I doubt to have any

Originally posted by: damonelena
If i could, i would click the like button like a million times... 😃

from when i read ur comments on my FF, i knew you were an amazing writer. When i saw your name in my Inbox, i was ecstatic. And i'm really glad i got to read ur OS. I'm really in love with it! 😊
Kria driving with a stranger without knowing him but falling in love with him. And the guy falling in love with her...It's just soo beautiful.. and them meeting again...and kria going to the party with rey even though she hates those kinda parties. 😳..
And the last part where they confess, ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!! 👍🏼

Girl, ur a genius!! ⭐️ ⭐️

If you can, pleaseee continue this as an SS or FF. SS atleast, pleeeasseee??? 😍

while reading your comment I was all the while smiling... and Sneha, girl I am continuing it... happy?? but please I don't consider myself to be a writer... atleast as good as you all are... it was my first attempt ever and people like you... have been an inspiration to me.. so after a lot of hesitation i managed to write one...

Originally posted by: yogini64
Wow . . . Dat was an amazing piece of writing 👏
the 1st meeting of 2 strangers made it to- Love @1st sight 😍
the attitude of kriya & the genuine nature of rey affected each other dat they spend sleepless nytes thinking abt each other 😉
& destiny brought them together once again . . . 🥳
& now they both knw each other well enough,,, to confess their love . . . . . 🤗
just loved it . . . If u continue it,, then plz pm me . . . . 😊

Yes I am continuing it...

Originally posted by: aromakriyaansh
wowww i love this girl keep it up
ise ss bna do na
con. please
megical
kya baat kya baat kya baat

here you go... aroma its no more an OS... ab SS hai ya FF... even I am not sure about it...

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh
a spendid piece...loved kria and rey's first meet-kria made rey her driver/...their pov's after that meet were awesome...loved their 2nd meeting in kria's office...the way they became friends...the stammering rey ...but the best part was the sea-shore one...nothing filmy,nothing emotional...simple,beautiful and blissful...hats off for pulling it off so well...

Happy to know that you liked it...