KriYaansh~Love at first sight~ chp9 updtd on pg136 - Page 101

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks guys...🤗
will soon post the new thread...
by tomorrow...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

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unres

dekh main aa gayi apne comment ke saath . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

update kaisa tha???

arey aur kaisa?

mast tha!

kk as told diff parts mein commenting!




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Part a

who is kriya talking to???/

u know jab aarav ne kriya ki waist ke around apne hands wrap kiya toh meko laga rey itni jaldi waapis aa gay

but den it was written aarav 😭

chal koi nahi!

surprise kaisa surprise dena hai aarav ne kriya ko???

aww kriya being possesive for rey huh??? 😉 . . . 😆

Luv it 😆

haaw aarav kriya ko chodo na uska jaaneman uska wait karing . . . . 🤣

lolz... KR hamesha hi takaar jaate hain! haha luv it!

LLHH aww 😳

Rey came back to his senses and pulled her into himself and said in her ears, "jaan, baahon mein hi aana tha toh keh deti yeh karne ki kya zarurat nahi thi, chot lag jaati toh?"

Koi ise sambhaalo pls 😆

"I am ready to face anything for you." Rey said meaning each and every word.

He is soo damn cute

but hey me not a deewani of him like shivi 😛

haha rey puchna chod do!

wo ni bataayegi! 😆

ab kriya ki jagah rey being possesive

huh! ntn can change b/w dem!

Making such appealing faces should be banned

Agree. agar nahi hua toh rey toh mar hi jaayega kriya ke looks se 😆


Okies part a ho gaya! ab b ki baari!

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Part b

well dis was longer den d part a

ahem ahem!

rey ko khade khade hi treat mil rahi hai huh?

apni baatcutter ko dekh ke! 😛

Those mavaalis! 😡

saara mood kharaab kar diya yaar!

Aww shenz why u made kriya stop rey!

he must kill dose mavaalis 😡

a**#**b

ahem ahem electric current went down her spine!

well no doubt! 😆

rey ka effect hai ye toh 😛

arey waah kya punishment thi! 😆

me likey likey! 😳

dis part is really very hot

koi ac on karo pls! 😆

thank god rey didnt crossed his limits!

naya thread jaldi bana!

finally done with d comment! 😆

arey main toh bhul hi gayi!

Yippie! first one to comment wo bhi part b ke upar lolz... 😆


aw!!! all I can do is adore your comment K...👏

chal koi nahi... late unres kiya.. but itna beautiful review diya... ki m so dead😳

and rahi baat Rey ko rokne ki... toh action dedeti toh mere pure update kachraa ho jaata...

anyways action scenes up in the coming chappies...😉

and new thread tujhe kal tak mil jaayega... but PM tuesday...😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aromakriyaansh

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cholly main bhool gyi thi vo kya hey main bhool jati hoo ki ...unres karna hey pata hai isiliye PM kiya... unres karwane k liye
nd ha tuje two part main comment chahiye bohat mehnat ka kaam hey ... dikh rahi hai teri mehnat...
but update main tha kya... haw!!!! tujhe toh main
main bhool gyi ... bhullakkad!!!
let me think .. think think.
nahi a rha jaad to itna hi asha tha ok by I'll kill you...



























































































































ha ha baby i m a devil u know na chal abhi ankhe mat dikha .... I knew it... devil rocker
asha update of
comment for first part ...
kriya kise baat kar rhi thi ha ...
kuj fishi hey i know pakka ...
arey j arnav kha se a gya ... aage aage dekh yeh kya kya karta hai...
kabba main haddi ...
sexy nd hotti nd upar sey kriya ka love i mean rey bahar khra wait kar rha hey hm!!!!
lekin j arnev schor hi nahi rha chipku khi ka ...
hwww kitna time ho gya ... I know yeh chipku hai... but aage ke updates mein u'll see him much more flirtatious
finally kriya nikal hi ayi wha sey ...
kriya rey ko bta hi nahi rhi ki wo log kha ja rhey hey ...
haha punishment k chaker main phas gya rey ...
hey panni punipuri means glgappa i love this ...
ok j part khatam ... even i love it...


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part two ka comment ...
haye j mawali kese comment pass kar rhey hey ...
haye raam tune kyu roka asha khasa fight scene milne wala tha ... fight scene coming up in next chappies
but koi na unki kismat ashi thi jo bach gye ...
nd after that jo romance kriyaansh ne kiya hey haye main to mar gyi ... thanks aro
rey shirtless me faint ...
upar se shirtless hey to kriya to cleanbold ho hi jayegi ...
wahi hua jiska dar tha ...
haye kriyaansh ka kiss ...
now bas main or nahi likh sakti i feel shy ...
but wowww
megical kriyaansh ...
u roke it ...
kya baat kya baat kya baat ...
ok mera kaam ho gya happy me going now
by by ... maine kitni besharmi se likha hai... yeh mujhe hi pata hai...

thanks for this long comment😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhima_arsha

wow diii awsom awsom! part
luveddd it cho cho chweeet...
srry for d late LATE cmmnt really bzy!!!!!
but really it ws an awsom blosom part luved it ❤️
wat a cheapo! i hate dat arnav!
itna bhi kya bst frnd hai yaar! seriosly hate him!! bloody cheapo!


ur part b ws really cho chweet!!!!!!!!
kriyaansh nyt out!! super exciting!!
wat a sweetu rey is following her instructions!
god wat a cute punishment!!!!!
rey must b super happy wid d kinda punishment!!!!!
update super fast...waiting...

dont b sorry for late reply...
u hate Aarav abhi se... dont know what will happen to u in next few chappies... anyways thanks a ton...
well updates next weekend se pehle nahi milega😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
chap 9 was awesome
it was fabulous loved it

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