Sharon SS...A JOURNEY FROM DENIAL TO ACCEPTANCE.. - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anku Di...Kaan pakadke maafi for not commenting so long...Nahi thi na isliye...Ab regularly comment karoongi...

Part 1.
Wow..an epic start..the pain, the suffering the love..all was just so well expressed..Sharon's dialogues made me feel the pain she was suffering..
Awesome One Anku Di...

Part 2.
Another amazing one..
I loved the way u compared thoughts to clothes..The voice questioning her back was wonderfully written..i really loved it...I loved the last four lines..beautiful...

Part 3.
The taani part cracked me up..The other parts you handled it very well..The way she insulted Swayam..her internal turmoil..beautifully written Di..Rey is the best friend anyone can have...I love rey as a friend..

Part 4(a)
I loved the whole part..Sharey is just awesome..Loved the whole plan..so unique and simple but so beautiful..Loved it to the core...The childhood memories were beautifully written...Shaggy and Scooby..how cute...

Part 4(b)
One of the best part...i really enjoyed it..The part where they visit the old age home was exclusively beautiful...I loved it very much...

Update soon
Finally I have commented on each part..From now on i will try to be as regular as i can...

Urs
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Edited by swaron95 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
luved it simply loved words are not coming so as to give a proper comment sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Really amazing update
U describe every part beautifully friends,fun,enjoyment and love
Waiting for next part
Update it soon

Thanx a lot buddy...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

super awesome update ankita !!👏

i totally loved angel and rey 😃 and the way they tried convincing sharon to give another chance to life and happiness 😊
old memories , friends , enjoyment and fun , love are really the true reasons of anybodies happiness 👍🏼 u described them beautifully.
will be waiting for the next part to see what sharon decides abt her life and swayam .
update soon...
thanks for the dedication 😃

Thnx a lot tanuka...glad that u lyked it...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pratik54000

It was really wonderfull update...you shown some beautiful sharey moments...and i m really fond of this purest form of friendship of sharey...i really wish something like this should exist in real life nd we all have friends like this...nyways comming back to story...

i also loved the way vasundara convinced sharon...she is actually helped sharon to comeout of her confused and blocked mind state...really wonderful part...

please update soon...thank you for PM...

Regards...

Maddy (Pratik)...

Maddy thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie

It was awesome... Anything to read from Sharon's pov feels soo good... Please update soon next time...

mannu glad that u lyk it...n yeah i am updating pretty early...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaRonArsha95

Loved Angel and Rey convincing Sharon to give life and happiness a chance and to read Sharon's POV is always good...amazing update Anku and thanks for the PM.

Massy i am happy that u lyked it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: marauder

This was beautiful , even more awesome than the last part. Loved the conversation between Angel and Sharon. It certainly were about spme valuable lessons about life . And one more thing your FF consist some of the best Sharey moments i ever read.

Wow the blue line tats a huge compliment...thank u so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Awwhhh, that was a really sweet update...All those ShaRey moments and then the convo with Angel was really heartfelt !!! I hope Sharon gives life another chance in the next update !!!

Abi thanx a ton...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Aww thanks Ankita, that's so sweet of you. 🤗

It was so worth the wait. Beautifully penned. Loved the ShaRey moments, the Angel and Sharon's conversation were beautiful. Life sure becomes difficult at times, but thats no reason to not give happiness another chance. I hope Sharon makes peace with her past and follows her heart for a happy life ahead.
Thanks again. 😊

I hug u back dear🤗 n thank u ...

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