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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meevee

A best friend is one who luvs u when u forget to luv urself - so true and totally defines the two parts of the update- whether u find ur true luv in lfe or not whether u r abl to sustain that luv for life or not...but it is one of the best blessings of life to hav a friend who knows u more than urself...thanx for a wonderful update & for reminding us of that...hope Sharon sees reason in Rey and Angel's efforts and embraces the joys that life offers her 😊

Meera i always lyk reading ur comments...n i am so happy tat u lyked it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Swayamonly

Wowwwiiee.. Anki.. Sooo sweet... M loving this Sharey bonding a lot...:):)

BE thank u😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chimpukli10

hey it was anyc part anku..rey is truly her best friend.doing all d things which are a part of her gud memories of lyf..do update d next part soon dear...

navi i am glad tat u lyked it...n yeah rey is a true frnd...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnx a lot...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

i really luved sharey's frendship...
really luv d way rey understands sharon...
angel-sharon part was cute!
i just hope she gives lyf & swayam a chance...

Hey dear glad that u luved sharey...thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swaron95

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Anku Di...Kaan pakadke maafi for not commenting so long...Nahi thi na isliye...Ab regularly comment karoongi...
Chutki i knew tat u r out station...no need to say sry...
Part 1.
Wow..an epic start..the pain, the suffering the love..all was just so well expressed..Sharon's dialogues made me feel the pain she was suffering..
Awesome One Anku Di...
Thanx a lot...

Part 2.
Another amazing one..
I loved the way u compared thoughts to clothes..The voice questioning her back was wonderfully written..i really loved it...I loved the last four lines..beautiful...
i am happy that u lyked it...

Part 3.
The taani part cracked me up..The other parts you handled it very well..The way she insulted Swayam..her internal turmoil..beautifully written Di..Rey is the best friend anyone can have...I love rey as a friend..
tanni part😆...thank u

Part 4(a)
I loved the whole part..Sharey is just awesome..Loved the whole plan..so unique and simple but so beautiful..Loved it to the core...The childhood memories were beautifully written...Shaggy and Scooby..how cute...
Aww thank u...
Part 4(b)
One of the best part...i really enjoyed it..The part where they visit the old age home was exclusively beautiful...I loved it very much...
Glad tat u lyked it..
Update soon
Finally I have commented on each part..From now on i will try to be as regular as i can...
i would be eagerly waiting for ur comment

Urs
Chutki (Sree)

U made my day chutki...Thanx a ton
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swaronilicious

luved it simply loved words are not coming so as to give a proper comment sorry

Aww it means a lot...thank u😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Well this is for my buddy Massy aka Nishna….. I kept my word massy…Hope u lyk this part n agar achha nahi laga toh dnt forget that I m still 112…

And I tht ki Swayam does a rare appearance in my ss toh aaj todha Swayam ko include kiya he….hope u all lyk it…

Part 5

Sharon woke up with a sweet smile plastered on her face. For the first time after so many days she had wake up feeling animated for a new day. She looked at clock it was it was 6 in the morning. It was too early but she was not at all feeling drowsy. There was something new about the way her heart was feeling. She felt a new zest for life a new zeal to do something. What was happening to her??? Maybe this was hangover of yesterday She thought.

She recalled each and every event of yesterday. With each flash of yesterday the smile on her face widened. She remembered Rey and Angel's request to give life another chance but giving life another chance means exactly what???? Thinking this she got up. She was feeling so charged up. There was a positive force which propelled her to do something which she usually didn't do. She started the music player and the song which started playing was

Sooraj ki baahon mein, ab hai yeh zindagi
Kirne hain saanson mein, baaton mein roshni
Sooraj ki baahon mein, ab hai yeh zindagi
Kirne hain saanson mein, baaton mein roshni

Sharon just started enjoying the song and went near the window. The morning sun rays were just filling more energy in her already energized mind and heart.


He was sitting on his bed with his eyes focused on something invisible. It was six in the morning he was awake not that he slept even for a moment. He felt vacant as if somebody has sucked all his energy. He shifted a bit and his hand touched the remote of the music player and the song started playing

Escaping nights without you

With shadows on the wall

My mind is running wild

Trying hard not to fall

Yes it was what his mind was up to remembering all the bad memories that he and Sharon shared telling him that it was all over.


Jo bhi badali dil ki taal hai,
Yunhi hi aaya ek khayal hai,
Paate hum hai zindagi ik baar
Kyun na kare khulke hum isko pyaar

She stood in front of the mirror and looked at herself and thought what had she made of herself. In the attempt of protecting herself, she has actually hurt herself. For a change why not just drop the shield she created for her safety and enjoy each day. Yes…yes this is what her heart wanted to do.

Cause i know i'll never free my soul
it's trapped in between true love and being alone
When my eyes are closed the greatest story told
I woke and my dreams are shattered here on the floor

His dreams and hope that one day Sharon would reciprocate to his love were crushed. And according to him he was solely accountable for this. His one mistake had brought him to a point where there is only darkness no light…no hope.


Naye naye sapne jo bunn sakey
Ussi zindagi ko kahoon zindagi
Naye naye rasste jo chun sakein
Ussi zindagi ko kahoon zindagi
Har pal machalti ho jhoom ke chalti ho woh hai zindagi

Yes she finally understood what giving life another chance exactly means. It means to life life to fullest. To dream , dream and dream and to work in direction of our dreams. To explore new things that would give new dimensions to our life. To be happy and in process make others happy. Stop worrying and start enjoying.

Why oh why tell me why not me
Why oh why we're meant to be
Baby i know i could be all you need
Why oh why oh why

I wanna love you
if you only knew how much i love you
So why not me


His love was pure. He loved her unconditionally but then why was she ignoring him and his love. She was his sunshine, his world, his reason to live. He was still sitting in his bed with tears rolling down his eyes. He wish someday she would understand how much he loved her………..someday…


Sharon was standing near the window and looking at beautiful garden outside. She had decided that she was going to use the clues Rey had told her. They will guide her to a happier life. She dialed Rey's number.

Re: hey Sharon, wassup???

Sh: Rey, I am ready to give life another chance…….

Re: and Swayam????

Swayam!!!!!!! She had thought about him but incase of Swayam her heart was still fearful. Swayam is way too precious…….She was still afraid of letting him enter her life.

Sh: Rey, I need time…..I can't bring all the changes at a time….let's proceed one by one….

Re: As you wish Sharon……well it calls for a party…..Pasta…what say????

Sh: No pasta…..

Re: Then what do you wanna eat???

Sh: What about Vada Pav????

Re: vada pav!!!!!! You are going to eat vada pav I just don't believe it!!!!!!!!!! You and Vada pav……I am coming to pick you up now…..OMG Vada pav!!!!!

Nxt Chap: Pata nahi what I will write……dimag khali he abhi…..so don't know……

P.S: 1) did I made sense in this part???????

2) Swayam ko who song suit hua kya???????

Edited by tanharocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first nahi toh second toh hoon hi...

Loved the update...Sad Swayam...awww...The song..i loved it...
SHaron...I love her..HOpe she gives Swayam a chance...
Sharey will rock the next part.. I know...

P.S. I too love vada paav...
Edited by swaron95 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you so much updating this Anku !! 🤗

This was amazing..loved Sharon understanding what Rey and Angel meant to tell her but please make Shar realize naa that her life is incomplete without Swayam...and please change ur DOB silly...dadi amma bolenge sab
Edited by SwaRonArsha95 - 13 years ago

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