FF:SUPERNATURAL-Chapter 12(Updated on Page 41)

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Amy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: ss374
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Actually Khushi of ur FF reminds of that girl...I forgot her name...she used to work at bar...and then she died later on!!

jo harvelle?

Edited by mz.brar - 13 years ago

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Manal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: mz.brar
So I was slightly frustrated by this chapter until I read ur AN. I'm curious to learn about Jessica's death, and how it differed in ur story.
So John and Arnavs mother were together as in lived together? dose that mean that all 3 brothers lived together at one point? ahh I'm so excited to read the next chapter.

Can u do a scene of Khushi and Arnav talking in hindi and the Winchesters just lost as to whats going on!(I know that they might not meet for another few chapters but ya) I always find it amusing when my white friend try to keep up with my convos and i switch back and forth btw Punjabi and English.
pretty please.

I will definitely take your request into consideration!
I never said Jessica died in a different manner. I said that Sam has a slightly different story here. You will come to know about that in the future chapters. I had to twist and turn the original story to accommodate Arnav and Khushi in. BTW...you might think I am silly but what's AN?
And I am really sorry to frustrate you with the chapter.

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Nazibah

@nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

I had tears in my eyes when I read Lavanya dying!!!!

My heart is breaking for Arnav!!!!!!

But I loved it like always!!!!!

I hope you update soon and thank you for the PM!!!!

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Manal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: nazibah
I had tears in my eyes when I read Lavanya dying!!!!
My heart is breaking for Arnav!!!!!!
But I loved it like always!!!!!
I hope you update soon and thank you for the PM!!!!

It was very difficult for me to write Lavanya's death too!
But don't worry! Arnav has his Khushi! They will meet soon!
Love you! Thanks for commenting!

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Amy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: seriallover17

I will definitely take your request into consideration!
I never said Jessica died in a different manner. I said that Sam has a slightly different story here. You will come to know about that in the future chapters. I had to twist and turn the original story to accommodate Arnav and Khushi in. BTW...you might think I am silly but what's AN?
And I am really sorry to frustrate you with the chapter.

no no my dear...its just that i was hoping that La(if u killed her off) would have a different death then Jess...somthing more original.
AN stands for Authors Note.

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Manal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: mz.brar

no no my dear...its just that i was hoping that La(if u killed her off) would have a different death then Jess...somthing more original.
AN stands for Authors Note.

Hey! Thanks for telling me what A/N stands for.😳
Actually...I have a reason to kill off Lavanya the way I did. You will see in the upcoming chapters!
Thanks so much for commenting. Its what keeps me writing. I really hope to satisfy your expectations from this FF. I am trying my best and trying really hard to write well. Hope you enjoy!
Lots of love.

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Manahil192

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Cuttoo First Of All Fab Update 👏
The Ground Literally Shook Beneath My Feet When Lavanya Died 😭
But Loved The Update Entirely 🤗
OMG I JUST NOTICED YOU GOT SHIFTED TO FF Forum😲 Congrats Cuttoo Keep Updating 😊

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Manahil192

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

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angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

awesome. How sad, Lavanya died..

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Batool Imran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#140

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Heya Manaal.🤗

For starters I love the title of the Chapter. It was enough to have me hooked and wanting to read the entire chappy without any disturbance.👏 The ending with the use of the pivotal word fo the title, was well thoguh off. Simply brilliant that was!👏

Arnav being Arnav was really in the mood wasnt he? Typical ASR-ish, though you know what?, the way he was adressing them seemed like he is perfect to be Dean Winchesters brother. the sarcasm that hard hitted humour, it all was so simliar, and then again the family saga, and somewhere a calm deamnour like Sam, Arnav has got a lot in common with Sam and Dean. Just my observation though.😉

On a serious note, honestly speaking, I never liked John Winchester from the beggining (in reality), always seemed to be the non sensical character to me, specially when he sold his soul out to that Demon for Dean, yes it was supposed to be a getsure of love, but it only appeared to be anything but self less sacrifice.

Back to find Daddy love? You brought memories of Season 1, Episode 1 back to me with that Winchesters talk, I remember Sam replying in an identical way like Arnav, and why not John Winchester was never the perfect father, never even to Dean. The poor thing was brought up like a bully, he coudnt help but abide, and somehow he names it as love. Surprises me.😳

This chapter was surely pivotal for the story ahead, revealing Arnav's dark past. I dont seem to be much concerned about his past or his mother, I just hope its not cliche idea of John leaving his mother because of some disease or something, that woudnt be really nice to read. Just my opinion, sorry if offensive.😳

I love the way you have had everyone of the charcters right into their deameanour, from Dean's witty humour, to Sam's calm composure, to Arnav's hyper active state, and lets not forget sleepy head La.👏 Poor thing I must say for her, I was hoping that she would end up like Jessica, but well reading it all over again gave me the exact creeps like the first epi did. In fact this was the episode that actually hooked me to Super Natural, apart from that clad in white women fiasco.😳

And you say Jessice-Sam past is not similiar? I am eager to read through the changes, although its evident something typically super Natural and horrid happened with her too, to be the driving force for Sam to enter this life of darkness back again.😳 And yeah not to be too curious, is this the yellow eyed demon back again, or do we have changes in this as well?😳

Arnav was behaving just like Sam did, and the order of events was exactly the same, I am glad you kept it identical, I woudnt like streak changes in that scene particularly. It is one of my favorite ones till date.😉

Another thing, i was glad about is the fact that you didnt put Khushi in. it would look bizzard to me atleast, and I am just happy shes not around right now. I am waiting for their paths to meet, although hadnt it been destined Arnav-Khushi, I would have loved the Dean-Khushi pairing, it appeals alot to me.😍

Overall I would say, I chapter that was definetly worth the read, and enough to keep me hooked to this FF for a long time now.🤗

Absolutely Outstanding job done here! Words alone would not fulfill my praise for it.!👏👏👏👏

Thankyou so much for the Pm.😳

Love,

Batool😳

Edited by nav_bat - 13 years ago