FF:SUPERNATURAL-Chapter 12(Updated on Page 41) - Page 15

Loved Alot. Aww Poor Arnav Is Alone Again.

Yet again a lovely chapter Manal! ⭐️

Originally posted by: nav_bat

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Heya Manaal.🤗

For starters I love the title of the Chapter. It was enough to have me hooked and wanting to read the entire chappy without any disturbance.👏 The ending with the use of the pivotal word fo the title, was well thoguh off. Simply brilliant that was!👏

Arnav being Arnav was really in the mood wasnt he? Typical ASR-ish, though you know what?, the way he was adressing them seemed like he is perfect to be Dean Winchesters brother. the sarcasm that hard hitted humour, it all was so simliar, and then again the family saga, and somewhere a calm deamnour like Sam, Arnav has got a lot in common with Sam and Dean. Just my observation though.😉

On a serious note, honestly speaking, I never liked John Winchester from the beggining (in reality), always seemed to be the non sensical character to me, specially when he sold his soul out to that Demon for Dean, yes it was supposed to be a getsure of love, but it only appeared to be anything but self less sacrifice.

Back to find Daddy love? You brought memories of Season 1, Episode 1 back to me with that Winchesters talk, I remember Sam replying in an identical way like Arnav, and why not John Winchester was never the perfect father, never even to Dean. The poor thing was brought up like a bully, he coudnt help but abide, and somehow he names it as love. Surprises me.😳

This chapter was surely pivotal for the story ahead, revealing Arnav's dark past. I dont seem to be much concerned about his past or his mother, I just hope its not cliche idea of John leaving his mother because of some disease or something, that woudnt be really nice to read. Just my opinion, sorry if offensive.😳

I love the way you have had everyone of the charcters right into their deameanour, from Dean's witty humour, to Sam's calm composure, to Arnav's hyper active state, and lets not forget sleepy head La.👏 Poor thing I must say for her, I was hoping that she would end up like Jessica, but well reading it all over again gave me the exact creeps like the first epi did. In fact this was the episode that actually hooked me to Super Natural, apart from that clad in white women fiasco.😳

And you say Jessice-Sam past is not similiar? I am eager to read through the changes, although its evident something typically super Natural and horrid happened with her too, to be the driving force for Sam to enter this life of darkness back again.😳 And yeah not to be too curious, is this the yellow eyed demon back again, or do we have changes in this as well?😳

Arnav was behaving just like Sam did, and the order of events was exactly the same, I am glad you kept it identical, I woudnt like streak changes in that scene particularly. It is one of my favorite ones till date.😉

Another thing, i was glad about is the fact that you didnt put Khushi in. it would look bizzard to me atleast, and I am just happy shes not around right now. I am waiting for their paths to meet, although hadnt it been destined Arnav-Khushi, I would have loved the Dean-Khushi pairing, it appeals alot to me.😍

Overall I would say, I chapter that was definetly worth the read, and enough to keep me hooked to this FF for a long time now.🤗

Absolutely Outstanding job done here! Words alone would not fulfill my praise for it.!👏

Thankyou so much for the Pm.😳

Love,

Batool😳

You write such lovely long comments...I can't thank you enough!
And Sam's story will be slightly different...not much...and Jessica died the same way Lavanya did...just wanted to make that clear...
Lots and lots of love!

Originally posted by: TheWandmaker

Yet again a lovely chapter Manal! ⭐️

I do find similarities from the supernatural season, and your narration is just so lovely that it takes me to the episodes, but i am sure u have a different plot in mind, as i can see the tiny tit bits of you in the story. The changes you have made are becoming more and more evident as we are progressing through the chapters ! Great work :D

It was quite sad to see Arnav's last ray of hope to be gone. Lavanya, she didn't deserve such a painful death...i mean ofcoz we all know it's Arnav-Khushi at the end...but you know, Lavanya was adorable! and particularly the last scene b/w them.

Lavanya dragged her feet back to the room but turned back once to ensure that everything was fine. Arnav nodded as if reading her mind.

It really shows how the two were in love. It will be a tough job to write Arnav overcoming the grief but well m in for the ride, coz i trust the writer in you! :D

It's not a trouble that Khushi isn't here, am just glad you didn't leave us at a cliff hanger, though yeah am very interested in her story too, i hope she picks up individually n then they cross paths.

This Khushi is a rebel, am wayyy too excited for Dean-Khushi scenes 🤣

I wonder what's the BG you gave to Sam, coz you gave his story to Arnie 😆 ahem so let's see :D

Once again a wonderful chap! :)

Keep Writing, and Thanks for the PM 🤗

Luv Zee <3

PS: You KNOW IT! :D 😆 Thanks for including the grilled cheese burgers !! 😎 🤣 🤣

You leave such wonderful comments...it makes me all emotional...😳
Thanks a ton for commenting and liking...it means a lot...it keeps me going with my weird chain of thoughts...!😆
And Sam is gonna have a SLIGHTLY different story here...just a tiny bit...and Jessica died exactly the way Lavanya did...just wanted to make that clear...

Gallons of love!!! 🤗

oh my god i am so in love with this story right now!!! please keep writing it!!😊

Oh how I love Supernatural. I actually watched 6 seasons in one month. I used to watch it on and off but then I'm like, why not just watch it from the beginning. I am absolutely in love with Dean and Sam. You put my IPKKND obsession together with my Supernatural obsession and made on epic FF. You're a great writer. And chapter 5, the entire Lavanya scene, I remembered S1E1, Pilot, where Mary was like that. I almost cried.

Originally posted by: DarkDove

Read all the chapters in one go!

Omg! Combining my two fav shows!? Are you kidding me!? I am sooo soo freakin excited about this FF!

I LOVE your writing style!! It is really good!

And had to laugh at the part where dean said the booty thing about the plane 😆!

Awn! I knew it just knew it! I knew that Lavanya was going to die! But sad, she seemed like a sweetheart :(

But this has now motivated Arnav to join the oh so hot Winchester boys! Whoot! Party! well not exactly because la died, but you know what i mean! 😆

So how are they going to meet khushi!? Through one of their road trip rides through a some evil filled small town!?

Can't wait!

Heheh wll deam flirt with her!?? 😛

Sorry for not commenting before :(

Loved this! And love your writing!

And love Arnav, Sam and Dean! 😳

I am a HUGE FAN of YOUR WRITING!
Thank you so much for commenting! Khushi and the boys will meet soon!
Love you!