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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rsusmita



read all part in one go
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Mindblowing update as always




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



very painful update...

from the update I guess they have very big misunderstanding created by someone...Maan thought that she betrayed him by having affair with other men and left her...he even don't know that he is father of her child...whereas Geet is thinking that he left her for another woman and that is why send divorce papers...

I hope when they will start working on a project together, they will slowly start caring for each other and realize their love for each other...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 8
nice...
Maan doubted her fidelity?
is her sister the reason?
cont soon dear...




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Posted: 13 years ago
THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING MY FFs...
here is the next part



PART 9

NOTE: Hi guys i know you all want to know about their past and after one ortwo updates i am going to write their past till then please bear with me


Geet came in her senses when diya coughed …… seeing her daughter ..her life because of whom she is surviving …her each and every breath was now attached to her little daughter….

Geet was glancing at diya with so much love wanted to kiss her ….cooed her In her arms…. She was looking at diya with a certain longing…. That emotion which is being played within her on seeing maan is now making her restless……

She could not sleep whol night either kept staring at diya or keep going back in the memory lane which is related to maan and their past….. sometimes a small smile played upon her lips on reminding those early days of their married life where they were trying to understand each other … trying to adjust with each other….. their marriage was certainly the unique where she in has not even dreamt in her wild dreams to be married in such a hurry that too with maan…..

On the other hand after reaching home maan was also drifted in the same events as geet but the difference was that instead of having painful memories he was cherishing their lovely and romantic moments…….

The shy and innocent geet for whom he fall for….. her clumsy nature ….. her cute anger and bossing over him….. when maan was having a pleasant time in the sweet memories…his attention suddenly went to the today's happening that again brought them together in front of each other… a jealous and possessive feeling that has strated on seeing geet with the client ( Neeraj) was somewhere getting stronger …… making him feel like shouting and yelling at her ……

Maan: why I am thinking about her… she doesn't matter to me…. She was the only one who sent me those divorce papers …… how can I forget her betrayal……

Maan: maan just stop thinking about her …get her out of your thoughts….. you did the greatest mistake by marryinng her….. your once decision in haste had proved fatal for you…. The pain and yearning you have suffered for her has only made you strong , cold hearted and stone whose life only revolves aound business and nothing else..just remember that your hatred is far more stronger than that love which you once had for her

she now only deserves your hatred …….

Suddenly aaiyana's word echoced in his mind

"She has moved on in her life…… it's the time for you to carry on with your life…."

A sudden fury and rage erupted through him……

Maan shouted …shouted to make him calm but somewhere he knows it will only lead him to a agitation…. Which he actually is having from past three years …..

Maan angrily went to his private jim …. It was almost midnight he was vigourosly doing his tai chi moves ….. kicking in the air letting himself drowned in the sweat which will only help him in getting tired …it will not reduce the pain and anxiety that he is having on seeing her …. Seeing her with another man…..

Today also and that day …..

the day maan saw her with a man in that state which she deserves to be only with him shattered him …. It broke his trust…..

his geet found solace in someone's arm

what he do ….

Where did he lack….

Was his love not enough for her…..

Maan came out of his hurt state and shouted ….shouted in fury….

Maan: I know…. I know geet … I know you have moved on in life….. I knew that day three years before…… your betrayal I knew……

Maan: why are you back….. just get lost from my life…… I just can't tolerate you……

There was a round mirror hanging in the jim….. maan saw geet standing behind… dressed up with her sindoor and mangalsutra….. the way she used to after their marriage like a newly wedded girl….

Suddenly she started laughing…. Pointing at him…….

Maan who was alreay burning in hell of the misunderstandings ….. broke the mirror by punching it hard…. Making it into pieces….

Broken pieces….. the pieces somewhere representing his broken life….. broken state …..broken heart…..

The heart she brove through her deception…… the pure love she changed into pure hate …..

It was four in the morning when finally maan came out of his own den …. The jim was messed up along with its master's state…… maan was toyally drenched in sweat…. His eyes totally red in anger and fury….. bruised hands…blood dripping from his wounds…..

His went to the washroom …..

The chilled water was letting his sudden upheviel down…. He stood there nearly thirty minutes and after calming his nrves went to the teraace attached to his room and sat there letting his anger cool down…..

On the other hand geet got up at five finally and went to get freshen up….. she did not sleep whole night… after making her self composed and hiding her inner sorrows she went to the kitchen to make breakfast for her little angel , her lunch and necessary items for her nursery…….

After accomplishing her task she went to wake up her baby….

Geet : ( gently kissing diya's forehead and pulling the duvet from her) diya….get up……

Geet: baby get up look its seven….. diya has to go to nursery…..

While diya was twisting and turning naughtily in her sleep not getting up…..

Geet finally pulled diya from her neck and made her sit on her lap…..while diya rested her head on her mumma's chest sleeping peacefully….

Geet: baby get up ….else mumma and diya will get late…… my sweet bunny get up……

Diya finally slowly slowly opened her eyes and started rubbing them ……

Geet kissed her cheecks and greeted her…..

Geet : ( with a cute smile) good morning baby…..

Diya: ( a cute grumpy face….as she wants to sleep more and mom has distured her sleep)

mumma diya wanna sleeep…..( with a cute puppy face)

Geet : sleep …. So diya don't want to go the nursery….. and play with her friends…

Listening to friends and play diya came to a naughty cheerful mood and told geet

Diya: mumma diya will play….

Geet: play but you wanted to sleep ….. so…..

Diya: no sleep……

Geet smiled listening to her baby doll and took her for bath…..

Diya wanted barbie clips so geet made her wear blue mermaid clips matching with her yellow top and blue skirt …… her cute diamond earings…..since diya is very fond of having earings and anklets….. and matching blue sandles…looking like a doll itself….

Geet kissed her daughter….

Geet: my baby is so pretty….. come we will have your favourite breakfast……

Geet served her glass of milk with chocalate favour and grilled cheese sandwich…..she was feeding her small morsels and having her side by side….

Geet and diya went to her nursery she talked with her teacher about diya's behaviour and attitude…..

On seeing her friends diya ran quickly while geet meet her teacher…..

Geet: good morning mam….. I am diya's mother …..

Shalini ( diya's teacher a middle aged women) : ya I remember mrs geet ….. good morning…

Geet : mam actually I wanted to know about diya how is she…..i mean her behaviour….. adjustment…

Shalini: diya is very sweet girl ( looking at diya playing) I also wanted to talk to you actually ….. mam actually diya doesn't seem to be mingled with all the classmates….

She is coming here from more than one week and has only one ortwo friends…doesn't speak to others….

Geet: I know that she actually finds difficult to befriend with the children of her age ….. that's why I came to talk to you…..

Shalini: don't worry we will try our best to let her free like a bird…. Mam next week there is a camping trip for the students for two days ….. since the vacations are going to end and the students coming here in vacations will go back to there school routine so the school has organised it ….. it will be nice try for diya…..

Geet: but mam diya is so small … how will she cope up….i mean…

Shalini: I understand your concern mrs geet but we will have all the responsity of the students and moreover the faculty is there and they are trained teachers ….. you need not to worry…. Although decision is yours……

Geet just nodded her head and taking the consent slip an necessary details she went to her office ……

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part and song was too good
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely ud dr geet is in pain but still she loves maan haaye..loved it dear do cont soon...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part..
song was an apt one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
i absolutely loved it
it was so sad !

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