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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh
oye hoye bbatcutter...mast update dear...loved the romance and the way kria comforted rey in the end...simply megical...i was in my lala land on reading the update ,...awesome 1...hats off to u buddy...

Thnq sooo much!!😊😊😊

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--Nishi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
Awesome updt..

Good dat u sended away rey's mom...

Loved all d Kriyaansh scenes...it was a hot updt!!!

Thnq!!😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

my dear nishi u were suppose to update today what happen yaar hamesha aise kyun karti hai tu dekh sapna toh waise hi tujhe nahi chod ne wali aur meine bhi taan li hai tujhe chappal jhuthe se marne ki

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--Nishi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

CHapter:22(A)

he turned to her Nd said "sorry" she replied "Itz okay ...u have all rites on me..i trust u...but i just think itz the correct time"by saying this she came forwards kissed his forhead Nd smiled he too smiled back Nd their foreheads met...

Kria:rey aapko pata hai ki...

SHe was interrupted by him...

Rey:jab tum apni pyare muh se nahin bataogi to muje kaise pata chalega?

Kria:pehle suno toh!

rey:acha bolo *smiling*

Kria:uss mehandi wale nahin kaha ki agar ye mehandi lal ho jayegi toh iska matlab yeh hai ki koyi hums bahut pyaar kartha hai...

Rey:dheko ye mehandi zaroor lal hogi!

Kria:aap itni confidence se kaise keh sakthe ho?

Rey:koynki mei tumhe se bahut pyar kartha hun..!!!mei aapne apse zyadha tumse karthe hun isliye...

Kria*blushing*:ab bas bhi karo..

Rey:arey mei toh sach hi bol raha hun na...

KRia was blushuing😳

All this while rey was holding her waist tightly with both his hands..

Kria:rey ab chalo chalthe hai...

Rey*sad*:itni jaldi?

Kria:sab log humara intezaar kar rahe honge hume chalna chahiye...

Rey:joyi intezar nahin karega sab log aapne kam mei busy hai..

Kria*innocently*:plz golu...

Rey went to his dreamland..

Kria waved her hand infront of his face..He cme back to his senses..

Rey:i wonder jo naam muje suna mei hi gussa ata hai ..jab wo nam tere muh se sunraha hun toh bahut acha lag raha hai..am totally losing my senses..kahin senses lose karke kuch na karle tumhe*Smiling Nd moving closer*

Kria*blushing*...*pushes him slightly with her elbows*rey ab bas karo...

rey*baby face*:kria...

Kria:rey lagtha hai meri mehandi dry ho gayi hai...aur haldi ka rasam bhi shuru hone wali hai so chalo chalthe hai...

Rey:okkk...as u say...

While ooing rey pulls her by holding her elbow..

Kria:Kya?

Rey:bas ek"pointing towards his lips*plz...

She smiles Nd gives a peck on his lips Nd runs away from him..he too follows her...Kria goes to otherside to clean her hands Nd he goes to other side to do his work...Immediately rey gets a msg,Nd he starts searching for kria so that he could inform her about the msg as she was not carrying her mobile ...

He was searching searching searching...atlast he found her trying to wash her hands as her hair was falling on her face Nd disturbing her...

He slowly moves towards her by closing the door behind...Nd moved close to her...Her back was facing him...he moved Nd holded her waist with his right She stiffened..

Kria:rey...

rey:Ssshh!!

He slowly moved her hair back of her ear Nd he forwarded his hands Nd holded her both hands with his Nd placed them under the tap..He was washing her hands by rubbing his hands on her...she closed her eyes...he started kissing her left shoulder then slowly moved towards her nape Nd placed wet kisses ,moved up kissed her ear...

Kria:rey koyi dheklega...*closed eyes*

rey*kissing*:toh dhkne dho...

He was continung the same work I mean kissing Nd washing her hands for some time...after few mins she came to her senses Nd slightly pushed him...He too came to his senses...Still he was holding her hands

Kria:rey aap...*turnes her head back*

Rey*turns her front places his chin on her shoulders Nd points towards the mirror infront of them* PERFECT COUPLE

REY smiling Nd kria blushing...

Nd he looks at the her hands which were completely washed Nd they were RED! in colour...He lifts her hands as if showing her N says

Rey*softly*:meine kaha tha na ...ki mei tumse bahut pyaar kartha hun...

Kria blushed hard...

Kria:rey aap yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Rey:rey then remembers that he had come to say her something

He then immediately moves back Nd she turns Nd faces him

Rey:woh actually haldi shuru hone wale hai...wohi tumhe batane ayatha par...

Kria*excitingly*:haldi shuru hone wale hai chalo na chalthe hai!!!!!

rey*smiling at her childish behaviour *:okok chalo...

sorry for pending the precap actually kriyyansh ka ye scene dhimag mei aya aur likh diiya..so anarkali song skip ho gaya hai...

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