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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update nishi.
It was amazing.
Thanks for pm.
Kriyaansh part was so cute.
Loved the update very much.
Mehandi tho rang layegi hi nah..
Update next part soon.


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyaansh_07





he turned to her Nd said "sorry" she replied "Itz okay ...u have all rites on me..i trust u...but i just think itz the correct time"by saying this she came forwards kissed his forhead Nd smiled he too smiled back Nd their foreheads met...

Kria:rey aapko pata hai ki...

SHe was interrupted by him...

Rey:jab tum apni pyare muh se nahin bataogi to muje kaise pata chalega?

Kria:pehle suno toh!

rey:acha bolo *smiling*

Kria:uss mehandi wale nahin kaha ki agar ye mehandi lal ho jayegi toh iska matlab yeh hai ki koyi hums bahut pyaar kartha hai...

Rey:dheko ye mehandi zaroor lal hogi!

Kria:aap itni confidence se kaise keh sakthe ho?

Rey:koynki mei tumhe se bahut pyar kartha hun..!!!mei aapne apse zyadha tumse karthe hun isliye...

Kria*blushing*:ab bas bhi karo..

Rey:arey mei toh sach hi bol raha hun na...

KRia was blushuing😳

All this while rey was holding her waist tightly with both his hands..

Kria:rey ab chalo chalthe hai...

Rey*sad*:itni jaldi?

Kria:sab log humara intezaar kar rahe honge hume chalna chahiye...

Rey:joyi intezar nahin karega sab log aapne kam mei busy hai..

Kria*innocently*:plz golu...

Rey went to his dreamland..

Kria waved her hand infront of his face..He cme back to his senses..

Rey:i wonder jo naam muje suna mei hi gussa ata hai ..jab wo nam tere muh se sunraha hun toh bahut acha lag raha hai..am totally losing my senses..kahin senses lose karke kuch na karle tumhe*Smiling Nd moving closer*

Kria*blushing*...*pushes him slightly with her elbows*rey ab bas karo...

rey*baby face*:kria...

Kria:rey lagtha hai meri mehandi dry ho gayi hai...aur haldi ka rasam bhi shuru hone wali hai so chalo chalthe hai...

Rey:okkk...as u say...

While ooing rey pulls her by holding her elbow..

Kria:Kya?

Rey:bas ek"pointing towards his lips*plz...

She smiles Nd gives a peck on his lips Nd runs away from him..he too follows her...Kria goes to otherside to clean her hands Nd he goes to other side to do his work...Immediately rey gets a msg,Nd he starts searching for kria so that he could inform her about the msg as she was not carrying her mobile ...

He was searching searching searching...atlast he found her trying to wash her hands as her hair was falling on her face Nd disturbing her...

He slowly moves towards her by closing the door behind...Nd moved close to her...Her back was facing him...he moved Nd holded her waist with his right She stiffened..

Kria:rey...

rey:Ssshh!!

He slowly moved her hair back of her ear Nd he forwarded his hands Nd holded her both hands with his Nd placed them under the tap..He was washing her hands by rubbing his hands on her...she closed her eyes...he started kissing her left shoulder then slowly moved towards her nape Nd placed wet kisses ,moved up kissed her ear...

Kria:rey koyi dheklega...*closed eyes*

rey*kissing*:toh dhkne dho...

He was continung the same work I mean kissing Nd washing her hands for some time...after few mins she came to her senses Nd slightly pushed him...He too came to his senses...Still he was holding her hands

Kria:rey aap...*turnes her head back*

Rey*turns her front places his chin on her shoulders Nd points towards the mirror infront of them* PERFECT COUPLE

REY smiling Nd kria blushing...

Nd he looks at the her hands which were completely washed Nd they were RED! in colour...He lifts her hands as if showing her N says

Rey*softly*:meine kaha tha na ...ki mei tumse bahut pyaar kartha hun...

Kria blushed hard...

Kria:rey aap yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Rey:rey then remembers that he had come to say her something

He then immediately moves back Nd she turns Nd faces him

Rey:woh actually haldi shuru hone wale hai...wohi tumhe batane ayatha par...

Kria*excitingly*:haldi shuru hone wale hai chalo na chalthe hai!!!!!

rey*smiling at her childish behaviour *:okok chalo...


sorry for pending the precap actually kriyyansh ka ye scene dhimag mei aya aur likh diiya..so anarkali song skip ho gaya hai...

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Mehendi wala scene was awesome
i loved it
kriyaansh scene .they look so adorable
and i loved the scene when rey see in the mirror and says
PERFECT COUPLE
AMAZXING
par yaar sapna ne bataya ki tu yeh ff jaldi katam karne wali hai
kyon reason toh dede
aur haa ek aur baat dot try to discontd ur other ff . This is not fair yaar. We wait so much for ur ff
jaanti hai jab tu update nahi karti toh hum tere purana ff baar baar padte hai aur tu kah rahi hai ki tujhe ff discontd kar na hai
not fair at all yaar plz dont discontd contd ur ff and finished it out plz plz plz
Its a humble request from Sapna and Me .Try to understand
and todays update was awesome
u have reached 100% of our demand
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
loved it
hayeee kriyansh romanceee
update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anniemathias


Mehendi wala scene was awesome
i loved it
kriyaansh scene .they look so adorable
and i loved the scene when rey see in the mirror and says
PERFECT COUPLE
AMAZXING
par yaar sapna ne bataya ki tu yeh ff jaldi katam karne wali hai
kyon reason toh dede
aur haa ek aur baat dot try to discontd ur other ff . This is not fair yaar. We wait so much for ur ff
jaanti hai jab tu update nahi karti toh hum tere purana ff baar baar padte hai aur tu kah rahi hai ki tujhe ff discontd kar na hai
not fair at all yaar plz dont discontd contd ur ff and finished it out plz plz plz
Its a humble request from Sapna and Me .Try to understand
and todays update was awesome
u have reached 100% of our demand



Hey Am hapy that u ppl lyked it😊😊...actually muje ye ff update karne ke liye hi time nahi mil raha hai..aur baaki ff's toh dhur ki baat isliye meine socha ki pehle mei ye ff complete karloon fir uss baki ff's ko conti karun...dnt worry ye ff ko happy ending dhedhungi...itni jaldi complete nahi hone wali ye ff thoda time tho lagegi par..ye ff complete karne ke baad woh Kriya+Reeyansh=kriyaansh ff par pura concentrate karungi
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!

really nice update

n kriyannsh sense as always awesome

do update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter:22(b)

Kria*excitingly*:haldi shuru hone wale hai chalo na chalthe hai!!!!!

rey*smiling at her childish behaviour *:okok chalo...

The haldi rasam starts...
(this haldi cermony is same like d3's but kriyaansh is added in it)
Here comes the dulha "swayam" everyone welcomes them by their dance...Both girls Nd boys start dancing...Only kria is seated near sharon n'd sharon was blushing Nd kria was looking at all of them Nd starts laughing...Rey sees her Smiles at her Nd dances..Kria gives him a flying kiss..While dancing only he suddenly falls (like fainting as kria gave a flying kiss) all the boys back of him catches him..Nd make him stand straight HE again starts dancing to the dol Nd gives her flying kiss..She blushes...😳😳
all boys sat on swayam's side Nd girls on sharons side...
Sharon shows her mehandi to swayam he says "wow" all of them see n start teasing them...they blush😳

Nilesh*mischevious smile*:haldi time!!

All the boys start to applying haldi on swayam

All boys:come on girls!!!

Now all girls start applying haldi on swayam...

The haldi session completes everyone again starts dancing...rey goes near kria Nd dance near her ...rey holding kria Nd dancing,kria blushing...

Again all are seated in the same places..

Nilesh:yaar lagtha hai lakiyon ka kuch kaam nahin kar rahe hai...

All girls:wat?

Nilesh:dulhe ka welcome kisne kiya?

all boys:ladke wale ne!

Nilesh:aur ghar ka sara kaam?

All boys:ladke walo ne!!

Nilesh:tho in ladkiyon ka kya kaam?

simmi:matlab hum kuch kam hi nahin kar rahe hai?

Nilesh:wahi toh mei keh raha hun!

all BOys laugh Nd gives hi5 to each other..

U knw na our kria kitna gussa ati hai usko...

Kria:ohhh toh humara kaam bhi tum log kar rahe ho?hum kuch nahin kar rahe hai?

all boys:wahi toh!

kria:toh hum girls aap logon ko aur work load nahin bada na chahthi hun isliye hum girls sangeet arrange kar rahe hai usme boys ki no entry aap logon ko kuch kam nahin karna padga .happy?

All girls:wow kria ...!!

Rey*baby face*:arey aise kaise?...*sees boys*guys bolo na

All boys:haan aise kaise ho saktha hain?

All girls stand Nd they say in unison:aise ho saktha hai!!!

BOys *sad devedas face*😆😆

Scene shift to girls sangeet!!its same like D3 ,everything is same sharon was replaced by kria in it...

Sorry could not describe everything as it is same...As kria was doing her sexy moves all the while rey was latoo over her..

At the end thy dance Nd come near boys all the girls removes boys dupatta

KriA*SHOuts*:tum?!!!!

Rey smiles...

Kria:meine bola na aap log yaha ana mana hai!!

as in d3 all the other girls were chasing boys Nd only kriyaansh were quarelling

kria:aap jan bhujke ayi ho ki humari party karab ho jaye!!aap logon ko itni bhi common sense nahin hai ki ye girls ki...*someone pushes rey from back Nd he falls over kria Nd they roll Nd end with rey on top of her*...(sorry swaron fans dont be angry..bas meine uss dhim kriyaansh ko miss kiya tha so meine ab kriyaansh ko uss scene mei dala aur imagine kiya.sorry if i hurt anyone)

Kria n rey LLHH...

Kria *breaking the eye lock*:rey uto na...

Rey*lost in her dreamland*:nahin...

Rey moves her few strips of her falling on her face ...

Kria:rey...

Rey:ssh!!!...aaj tumne bahut acha dance kiya i mean HOT! tumhara dance dheke mei aapne apko control nahin pa raha hun...i felt like coming to u Nd kiss u ...par sab log hai na isliye control karna pada...

Kria was blushing,she pushed him slightly but he made his grip tight on her waist..

He was coming close to her...

KRia:rey sab log hai..

But he dint answer anyything he was just moving forward...she closed her tightlly...When he miled at her action Nd kissed her forehead Nd moved back smmiling ,waiing for her to open her eyes...she opened her eyes Nd smiled at what he did

Kria*smiling*:thanx...

Rey:thanx aise nahin kehthe hai...*smirking*

Kria:rey ab nahin...

Rey:ab nahin toh koyi aur dhin...par mera thanx muje zaroor chahiye*mischevious smile*

All:AHem ahem!!!

Kriyaansh straighten themselves...

Rey :woh guys chalthe hai na

Kria:haan..haan...guys chalo na bahut raat ho gaya hai...

SHaron*teasing*:toh apne pati ke saath so jao na tum..*smirking*

all were smiling...

Kria:Sharon!!!!*with anger*

Sharon:okok chill chill!chalo guys chalthe hai itz already late...

Evryone :ok...

nilesh:waise kal ka kya plan hai?

Sharon:kuch nahin kal kuch nahin hai.sab free hai...

Nilesh had something in his mind so he was smirking...

Sharon:kya hai?

nilesh:kuch nahin...kuch toh nahin..

Sharon:ok girls come on lets leave...

actually whole gang was standing opp to kriyaansh...as soon as the gang turn back to leave...
rey immediately pulls kria by her waist gives a peck on her lips Nd says "good nite baatcutter"

Kria shouts a bit ...aLl of them turn to see what was it ,as they were turning rey leaves hr Nd pretends as if nothing happend...Kria was blushing

Sharon:kya hua kria are u ok?why are you blushing?

Kria:kuch nahin ...chalo na chalthe hai...

While going she turns back Nd gives rey a flying kiss..He jumps Nd catches it Nd kisses it...All of them leave..

*SCENE SHIFT TO BOYS ROOM*

Nilesh*smirking*:guys i have a plan!!!

ALl boys:kya hai?

Nilesh:bachelor party!!!*mischevious smile Nd ribbing his hands together*

all boys:Yeah!!!!!

swayam:par sharon...i mean girls...

Rey:ya yar girls ko kya kehenge???

Vicky:kuch nahin bas ye kehenge ki hum kuch kaam keliye bahar ja rahe hai...

Rey:usko doubt nahin ho ga kya...waise kria ko bina bataye chala gaya toh woh bahut gussa hogi yar.*sad face*

Nilesh:arey rey typical commited man mat bano yar*annoyed*

Vicky:guys itz decided!!!KAl BACHELORS PARTY !!!NO GIRLS!!!

all boys:YAY!!!!!

all girls Standing near the door Nd they hear only the last two sentences that are vicky saying "kal bachelors party !no girls "Nd all boys shouting "yay!!" excitingly...All girls are shocked!!!

Precap:Anarkali disco chali.!!

Guys jhute chappals all welcomed When i was giving the precap i dint think abt haldi nor sangeet..but suddenly jab D3 dhek rahi thi toh yaad aya aur sab last min add karna pada...So next update mei pakka anarkali disco chali update karlungi...by this time u all ppl came to know why that song actually came..So will write the song in next update pakka wala promise...plz iss bar maaf kardho

Hope u ppl lyk it

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Edited by kriyaansh_07 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woww so awesum update.. Rey se jada kria ko pyar aur kar bhi kaun sakta hai. Haldi rasam was fun and sangeet rasam toh mindblowin.. Loved it so much.. Update soon
Edited by LOV_ARSHA_KREYA - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...waiting 4 the bachelor's party...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wonderful update
i loved it
actually even i was missing kria a lot in RDX marriage.
I use to think agar kriya hoti toh kitna fun aur aata
but u fulfilled my dream u kept kriyaansh in all the scene it was amazing thankx for fulfilling my dreams u made ur update fantastic waiting eagerly for nxt one it was awesome
i am desperatly waiting for boys bachelor party and song of anarklai disco chali and the reaction of boys when they see thir repective girls in front of them i am sure tu kuch na kuch dhamaal masti aur romance dalegi
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update
luvd it
waitin fr da party
update soon😊

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