FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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maazia

@maazia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

Wow. Great update. Like the way Khushi is answering him back, although she's always been the one who would react to his insults and answer him back, in her own style (unlike Lavania).

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Read all the 10 parts in one go.. Amazing concept.. Loved all the parts.. ❤️

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: mishti_17
Read all the 10 parts in one go.. Amazing concept.. Loved all the parts.. ❤️

awwhhh...😳

I am glad you liked it...things are going to keep getting hotter!!!! 😳

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Sayali

@Sayali_KSG

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

amazing part
w8ing for next part
thanks for pm

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kiddy-kavya

@kiddy-kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

Hmmm...lets see, dat was SHORT...but oh well, i 4give u cuz u r an amazing writer...oh and it would be nice if u could avoid using arnavji in the narratory part and stik 2 jst arnav...it sounds kinda awkward...apart 4rm dat ur ff's really nice.😉

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

a lovely update... three cheers for khushi for standing up to arnav's high-handed ways! let him learn that she is not at his beck and call! lovely of her to leave him with his mouth open 😃 the future seems very interesting: can't wait for the fireworks when they will be thrown into close proximity... aww, poor khushi, however much she tries, khushi can't deny her true feelings for arnav... is arnav going to follow her up to her room?

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

Great update Nisha .. but u r leaving us wanting for more! cant wait to see how things progress between the two ... i wonder if arnav & khushi will help the other love birds in their union! update soon :)

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LittleMissMagic

@LittleMissMagic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

thanks for the PM 😍 more kushi n arnav scene please!!!

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Shayal

@cutedesigirl199

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Posted: 13 years ago

#279

this awesome i love it soo much i have no words to express how good this is just love every bit of it please write more would love to keep reading and find out what happens sooo good one of the best FF's i have read