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Posted: 13 years ago
Heartbreaking😭
But a greaat update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yes, I know, before you throw rotten tamatars at me, I want to say I'm sorry for not updating this in a while. I have had a SERIOUS case of writers block and I put more focus on my other FF Take 2 and my joint FF with Mya called Shadows of Desire. (If you haven't checked it do check it out!). I promise I'll try to update this more frequently from now on but no promises. Here's Part 6! Enjoy :)



Part 6

"I have to say, this meeting went exceptionally well. I'm very proud of both of you for being strong enough to share your story with each other. Especially since you don't know each other very well. You are free to leave now. Same time next week," Dr. Kapoor said closing both of our "files".


Man how I wanted to know what was inside those things. Sameer got up first. He went to the small closet near the door and picked up his jacket and opened the door. He held it open.

After you," he said smiling at me pointing to the doorway. I said a silent thank you to Dr. Kapoor and walked towards the doorway. His smile was beaming.What the hell? Why was he so happy? A few minutes ago he looked like he was about to burst out into tears and now he looks like someone just said he won the lottery. I walked out of the room and I saw he was following me. I better fake a phone call until Chotte comes. As I was about to take my phone from my purse he walked up towards me.


"It was nice having a session with you. And thank you for listening to my story, it means a lot," he said thoughtfully.


"It's my pleasure. I'm so sorry for your loss," I replied sympathetically.


"Thank you. Um.. would you like to have some coffee with me? I hear they have a nice coffee shop near here..we could walk-" he asked.


"My bhai is actually coming to pick me up so... maybe another time," I said nicely.


"That's fine. Maybe another time," he said disappointed. Maybe another time


***************

"So, how was your first therapy session?"Chotte asked.


"It was fine. The therapist is nice and my partner is nice as well," I said staring at the window avoiding eye contact. I knew what he would ask next.


"Oh. What's your partner's name?" Chotte asked curiously.


"Sameer. He's very nice," I said quickly.


"Sameer? So he's a guy... interesting," Chotte said annoyed. Here comes the blow. "Maybe we could get you a partner that's a girl. Make it easier for you," he said hinting at it.


"That won't be necessary. Sameer is a very nice man and he has no bad intentions," I said flatly.


"I just don't want to see you get hurt again Di," Chotte said.


"Why would I get hurt? You're acting as though I just said I loved this man," I said knowing I had taken it too far.


"I'm not saying that. I just don't want this man to say something without thinking and hurt you. And when did I ever hint at a relationship between you two. You are NOT ready for a relationship," Chotte said sternly.


"Maybe I am. You don't know my feelings. Maybe I'm over Shyam already. Maybe I'm ready to get married again. Who knows? You can't take control of that," I argued.


"Damn right I can. Di, I know what's best for you," Arnav said.


"Oh really? Is that why you kept Shyam a secret for so long?" I retorted. I regretted those words as soon as they left my mouth. The words left a lingering bitter feeling.


"Chotte, I didn't-" I tried to explain but he stopped me.


"You're right. I don't know what's right for you," he whispered.


"It's not that it's just... let me be independent. I don't want to be your carry-on luggage wherever you go," I said touching him lightly on the shoulder. I could hear him gulp loudly.


"I understand. So you want to be more independent? That's fine by me," he said quietly.


"But that doesn't mean I don't need my bhai," I said smiling softly.


"You'll always need your bhai Di. And I'll always need my Di. Forever and ever," he said stopping at the stoplight. He intertwined his fingers into mine. Just perfect.

***************

A week flew by faster than I thought it would. There it was, the looming therapy session. Chotte said he would drop and pick me up from every therapy session. Well I guess that means no coffee with Sameer. As I walked into the building I felt a tingly sensation. Why? Why should I? He's just a regular guy. No one else.


"Anjali!" I heard a voice yell from behind me. Oh no. Oh no.

"Sameer. Hi," I said softly. He had run up to greet me.
"Nice sari," he said pointing to my baby blue sari. It had an intricate design woven in as a border. I felt a blush creep up onto my cheeks. Get a grip Anji, I told myself.

"Thank you," I said smiling.

"Shall we," he said holding the door open for me. I walked inside nodding as if to say thank you. The session went by fast. Extremely fast. We had discussed more on how we felt when both of our traumatic events happened. The way Sameer listened to me, I felt important. Like he really cared about how I felt. Like he was there when it happened. We were dismissed and got up first. He followed right behind me.

"Hey Anjali, do you think, maybe we could have that coffee today?" he asked. His eyes were two orbs of honey. They showed compassion, kindness, happiness and, sadness. Maybe, just maybe I could give myself another try. I owed it to myself to do that, right?

"I would love that Sameer," I said giving him a warm smile. Now to convince Chotte.

***************

"Sure," he said over the phone.


"Really?" I asked astonished.


"Yes, you can go out for coffee. I was going to ask Akash to pick you up anyways. I have an important meeting to attend so this works out perfectly," he said distracted.


"I'll be back before dinner," I said.


"You better be. Or else this Sameer kid isn't going to last another day," Chotte said regaining his old self.


"Kid? He's older than you," I said giggling.


"Whatever. Still, consider himself warned," Chotte said.


"OK baba, I'll hang up now," I said clicking the end button. I saw Sameer leaning against his car door. He had loose fit jeans on and a black jacket on. I couldn't help but stare.



"If you don't mind, could we walk? The coffee shop is only a block or so from here and today's a nice day for a walk," Sameer asked.

"That's fine with me," I said accenting it with a smile. He headed forward and I followed.

"So what do you like to do for fun Anjali?" Sameer asked. What did I like to do for fun? What DO I like to do for fun?

"Um.. um.. nothing really," I muttered embarrassed.

"Kya? You don't do anything for fun? There has to be something you like to do," Sameer said.

"Well, I do poojas a lot," I answered. He laughed. Hard.

"You do poojas, for fun?" he asked through breaks of his laughter.

"Yes, I do poojas for fun," I said pretending to be offended.

"You are an interesting person Anjali Raizada," Sameer said giving me a goofy grin. Interesting? Psh.. yea right.


Ok, that's it for now :)
I promise I'll update ASAP!!
Please Like and Comment, I would really appreciate it!!
*Regarding PMS*
I don't accept requests for PMs unless you like or AT LEAST comment. It's really discouraging as a writer to see buddy requests from someone who hasn't even bothered to like your work. So yea.
~Aarti.


Edited by --Aartzz-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RESSS

*edited*
AARTZZ!! MY AMAZING WALRUS!!!
You updated!!!
I LOVE YOUUU!!! 🤗 ❤️
Anyway..on to the update...it was FANTASTIC!!
So Anjali is starting to have a bit of a crush on Sameer!!
Interesting..
Arnav LET her go to coffee?? WOW!! Surprising!
Haha 😆 she does POOJAS for fun!! 🤣
TOO funny!!
Anyway this was FANTASTIC!!
I am SOO HAPPY!!
Love,
Tara ⭐️

Edited by -Smiles- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I will come back to read this! 😳 <3 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES
Edited
Okay so first off i did not know my desi pakora also writes SS...🤗
Read it all in one go. This is one unique story i mean i am a huge fan of Anjali Arnav bonding( i am the girl who makes Vms on them 😳)
Now back to the story
Okay i loved the over possessive brother in Arnav "I know whats best for you" lol
i loved the head strong Anjali (CVs i hope you are listening)
I loved the mother daughter bonding.
and Last but not the least you my dear are a fab writer and i am real surprised that you like my FF...Really? 😳
and before you get tired of reading this...
Aarti this for you⭐️
Thanks for the pm, keep me posted
Love
Arabella
Edited by Carabelli5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

res😃

Holy crap! LATE!

So I read the SS in one go!
It is really unique...I never read stories based Anjali! This one is amazing and I love the idea of yours by writing from her point of view.
Sameer sounds really nice and a good guy for Anjali.Perfect match!
I loved how protective Arnav is about Anjali...Well he always is but they way he said to Anjali that if she won't be at home at diner then he will kill Sameer.
Awhhh I wish my brother was like Arnav...HmPH!!! Life is always so unfair!😆

Haha...Anjali does poojas for fun.I laughed my a** off when she said that.So the secret is out now.Anjali is just bored that's why she does poojas all day and all night long.
This SS is really amazing! I want to read more! *evil smile*

Ehem..You know what I mean!

This a bribe:
Can you resist this smile?😍
got ya!! Can already see you drooling😉



Edited by Ri_luvs_ArShi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it, amazming update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Aarti!!
that was lovely dear!😃
i was thinking about reminding you😆
love this Anjali perspective story..
do update soon!
and thanks for the pm!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read all the parts!! AD amazing job! 👏 I never knew you write! Well thanks for the pm and please do pm me when you update or else! Just kidding! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...I loved it..
lovely story...i like the anjali perspective story...
arnav send them to the coffee...
thats awesome...continue soon...
thanks for the pm..

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