~NEW DARK FF~ Shadows of Desire Chp.1 Pg.30 6/18

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Hey guys! So me and my friend, Aarti (--Aartzz--) , have written an OS for you all!! Yup yup, it's an OS!! How exciting???!!! Okay so before you all pounce at me for like disappearing, dying, FLYING OUT OF THIN AIR!, doing all that good Harry Potter stuff, let me explain!!!

I kinda got very very VERY demotivated guys. Like legit demotivation stuff going on. Until Aarti came along =) She kinda convinced me that writing is not a sin LOL. And that I should write and not hate. Yes, I did in fact say that. My words. Btw.. this is Aarti talking. Green will be my color and pink will be Mya. BTW: EVERYONE WISH HER A HAPPY BIRTHDAY ON THE 17TH OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND MAKE SURE U SAY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! ;). JUSSS KIDDING. but seriously, say happy birthday.

So anyway, here we are, the two of us, presenting our new OS!!! I hope you all like it!!! Leave comments and likes guys!!! Oh and also we have a LONG LONG LONGGG NOTE on the BOTTOM of the OS so PLEASE read that!! Please don't be blind and not read it because it is important.

P.S. Aarti's birthday is on the 16th. SAY HAPPY BIRTHDAYYY!! Or the bottom note will be trashed completely LOL.Awww don't threaten the readers. Blackmail them instead! ;) Shsshh!! We are good people! Never let the world know what we are actually like :D. *Erases evidence* OK enough of our blabbering, here is Shadows of Desire... DUN DUN DUNNN!

Leave comments people!!
Shadows of Desire

I watched her as she walked out of the house, disgust quite clear on her face. Smirking, I watched her turn the corner and walk out sight and then walked up to the house.

"Your job is done. That girl won't be stepping into this house ever again," the man said to me as he slithered close, thinking that I hadn't noticed.

"Good. Did you say exactly what I told you to?" I asked, knowing very well how the man's eyes were scanning me.

"Yes. Yes I did. Though I still don't get why you wanted me to do that. The girl seemed nice enough," the man said, wonderment in his voice.

"Good. At least you got her to leave," I said approvingly, "Also, remember what I told you before. You will not ask or talk about this ever again. You got your payment didn't you? You got it to keep your mouth shut."

"Now now baby, I was just wondering, if you don't want me to know then fine you don't have to say anything else. Speaking of that payment, there was another clause to that agreement we had. One that you said we would continue once the job is done. Now, since the job is done, how about we go back to the house and have a little alone time," he suggested sleazily. What a douche.

"I don't think so. Sex wasn't part of the deal if you have forgotten," I said stiffly.

"Are you sure about that love?" he asked sneaking up even closer.

"Positive. Now I suggest you move back a few feet unless you want to lose all feeling in your balls," I said defensively.

"Now don't be like that. At least pay me my 50 bucks," he said stepping even closer. I could feel his warm breath on my neck. Yuck. I stepped back a little and knocked him one in the balls in one swift movement. He yelped and doubled over in pain.

I smirked as I walked away from the man screaming in pain. That's what you get, I thought quietly and walked away thinking back to the deal we had made a few minutes ago.

~Flashback~

"You make that girl go away, I will pay you 50 bucks," I told the man in front of me, "And a little something else," I whispered suggestively as I laid my hand on his thigh and slowly allowed it to make its way up without touching him where he wanted.

"Whatever you say sweetheart," the man had whispered out completely out of breath.

I kept my hand where it was, smiling at him sweetly.

"Good boy. Now go. I'll give you the money afterwards. And maybe if you do an excellent job, that little something else," I whispered seductively, sneaking my hand up to the treasure and playfully grabbed it. I watched as his eyes bulged open and he groaned in pleasure. That seals the deal, I thought.

"When is the little bitch coming??" he groaned out, sounding completely out of breath.

"In 15 minutes so get ready," I responded and stepped away from him quickly, noticing immediately how his eyes whined in protest due to the extra space between us.

Smiling at his eager face I said, "Don't mess up big boy or you won't be getting under my umbrella," pouting slightly to make myself look more realistic and interested.

He nodded eagerly. Keep them wanting more, I thought

With that I had turned around and pushed my Ray Ban glasses down from my head, walking away with a big smirk.

~Flashback ends~

Watch. Just wait and watch as how I make your life hell. Ms. Khushi Chopra.



Alright people. So, by now you all have probably read the OS and have made up your mind about what you thought. SO we have to tell you all something.

If we get a good (she means great off course) response on this OS, we will continue it. Make it into an SS...FF? BUT ONLY if you like and comment this OS up!! It only takes a few minutes...so leave your comments and likes and we will continue if we get a GREAT response! Ok that's it for now... TATAAA!

PS. We have added a reference to some modern day events going on right now. In this specific OS, ( or FF if you so wish since you are the only ones who can make it happen) we added a reference to a singer!! A very famous one for that matter... One that we both love! SO guess who she is and we might even update quicker!! (IF this becomes a FF of course!!)

Like and Comment guys!!

We don't bite!


ADD AMPmz for PMS for this account!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX
Prologue- Above
Chapter 1 (Coming Soon)





If you would like PMs for this FF please add AMPmz!! Thanks :)
Edited by --Aartzz-- - 13 years ago
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First!! Yess! All that refreshing paid off! Hahah
Well, I think we did a pretty good job don't chya? We finally finished it!! Even though we got road-blocked from our "side conversation".. u know what I'm talking about ;)... we finally finished it!! I think it looks awesome!
I think the readers are going to have ALOT of questions... ;)
And I'm glad you decided to write again.. and with me... I feel so honored *sniffle sniffle* Now all you have to do is update Scarlet Letter and We Are Family! I will get you to do that to!!
Ok guys... Like and comment up! Or you won't be getting anymore from us!!! And try to guess who we made the references about!!!
Love you Mya!! 🤗
Edited by --Aartzz-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bllimmeeyy!!! What was that? it was so intense... i mean who's who? and why all the hate for Mrs Khushi Chopra?
Well you've got me hooked... it was brilliant, so many unanswered questions ,.. looking forward to more :)

Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This Is SO Confusing & Thrilling At The Same Time 😆
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res..yes 1st pg lol...

Happy birthday Aarti...

N for the OS, i have only 2 words... What the???? hahahah plz conti..looks interesting😉
Edited by Fazila~ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz do make next part and ya ya im on the 1st pg
Edited by naveena_arhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Confused.. 😕.. Check
Amazed.. Check
Intrigued.. Check
Cant wait for nxt part.. Check
On knees, beggin to continue... Check

So now my checklist is complete.. I loved that.. It was amazing..
Plz plz continue..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a brilliant start !!!!!!
It's full of suspense and very intriguing !!!!!!
Can't wait to read more of it !!!!!! Thnx for the pm !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Of cuz we need another part 😊 This is all so intriguing and so many unanswered questions 😊
Cant wait to see how the story unfolds 😊

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