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Aarti

@aartipartyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ok so this is my first OS ever. After reading everyone's amazing work here, I thought I'd give it a shot.

So, I thought I would do an OS in the Point of View of Anjali when Khushi and Arnav tell her about Shyam. It's as though they just come straight out and tell her.

*NOTE* Arnav knows the whole truth about Shyam. The will and everything. He also knows Khushi is innocent. They're happy with their life. This is mainly based on Anjali so there won't be really any ARHI scenes in here. Ok enough of my blabbering...

Here's a snippet of it, If you guys like and comment, then I'll continue, if you don't, I'll just drop it.

Prologue

My world was shattering before me. This can't be happening.
The man who I thought loved me, loves someone else? No, no, no this can't be
true. If it was true they would've told me earlier right? Why didn't they tell
me earlier? Why? After everything we've been through, Chotte can't tell his own
Di that her own pati, my love is cheating on me!? His eyes only for Khushij? And Khushiji knew about it from the beginning?
He used me only for my money. How could I not spot this? All those times he
said he was on business trips, he was actually at Khushijis house eating,
sleeping. Which lie matched up with which event? He has to love me. He's said
it so many times that it's become a casual phrase for him. He had to.

INDEX

Prologue- Above

Part 1- Page 4

Part 2- Page 8

Part 3- Page 11

Part 4- Page 15

Part 5- Page 20

Part 6- Page 22

Edited by --Aartzz-- - 13 years ago

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 13 years ago

This is different 😊 I haven't seen any stories based on anjali, so u should definitely continue this. She would be a fun character to explore 😊 Good one!

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peepli

@peepli

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Posted: 13 years ago

really good considering ur a first timer..n k think this us the first time im reading something from anjali s pov..

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

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Posted: 13 years ago

Definitely different one👏 Thankyou for writing something from Anjali's point of view 😳Because however dumb she might appear,she is going to be shattered after knowing the truth..Please do continue would love to read more on it :)

And you are doing an awesome job 😳

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

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Posted: 13 years ago

Fabulous was a bit sad, I feel bad for Anji, she is really sweet and deserves a loving guy not a snake like Shyam! I hope she stays very strong when the truth comes out!

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Prii

@PriiDevi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Its very nice. Ita very different 😃

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Sonam-IPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great post! Very different and so many questions 😲
Please do continue 😃 😳

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@Fazila~

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Posted: 13 years ago

It is a gr8 idea...see we dont see najalis pain, we dont know what shes going through, maybe she knows it all..but when it all opens, she will be hurt...she trsut all 3 of them...n atm all the 3 r hiding from her, imp info...poor Anjali...sighhh

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Fazila~
It is a gr8 idea...see we dont see najalis pain, we dont know what shes going through, maybe she knows it all..but when it all opens, she will be hurt...she trsut all 3 of them...n atm all the 3 r hiding from her, imp info...poor Anjali...sighhh

yea that's exactly what i was thinking when i thought of the idea. because everyone is all like "anjali is dumb or stupid" you never know what she's actually going through. you never know until it actually happens that she finds out. so yea that's where i got the idea from. 😊