HUMTUM (RTMC FF) COMPLETED... - Page 99

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Posted: 12 years ago
to be edited only wen i get my bday gift!
Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
HAPPY HAPPY ENDING TO A VERY LOVELY STORY ''HUM-TUM'' ...hum-tum's journey was so sweet...
n the last part was good, finally jai mama n agni ki pol khul gayi n our lovely love birds got their little prince...
thank u so much for a lovely story riya...
do continue with ur other stories too soon...
lot's of luv n hug's to u...
luv u... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
riya, di..

want just one more last ud plzz...


neer wedding anniversary party n rudra baby
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

riya, di..


want just one more last ud plzz...


neer weddinganniversaryparty n rudra baby

bt me end kar chuki hun sweety or i hv posted that there is some problem with editing bhot kuch missing h ud me mera edit button work nhi kar rha tha
aj itne dino baad sbko reply kar rhi hun...bt i'll try to ud last one jst 4 u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

bt me end kar chuki hun sweety or i hv posted that there is some problem with editing bhot kuch missing h ud me mera edit button work nhi kar rha tha
aj itne dino baad sbko reply kar rhi hun...bt i'll try to ud last one jst 4 u


yahi kaafi h mere liye...ki aap try kerr rhe ho


n waiting for ur creation gallery too😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
aapne mera cmnt kyu nhi like kiya lekin??? :'(

aapne padha tho h na?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

aapne mera cmnt kyu nhi like kiya lekin??? :'(


aapne padha tho h na?

padha liya wo to mene sweety but like button kabhi kabhi work nhi karta😕what to do
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi!
i was waiting since so many days for the update and then u posted the last update...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
But the update was really nice
thank u sooo much for writing this wonderful story...it was one of my most fav FFs
Neha and Veer will always remain close to my heart
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear ...sorry sorry sorry for late commenting
I know main bahut jyada late huyi hu comment dene me
but kya karu ye examm😡...no solution for that 😕 have to endure it

...
thanx for giving update on humtum
but what this you ended it ...😭
you it would have been one of my favorite story in all RTMC ff
pata nahi kaise...par main is jodi se , veer neha se jud gaye the ...ek unknown si attachment
but glad that you wrote this story till end ...😛
thank you so much for giving such a lively sweet love story ...
you are excellent in composing all characters , their pure emotions on every situations which might be happy or sad

n the bond between veer n Neha was so tightly bounded that noone like mamaji , tanaya could able to broke .

Their love remain as it is as was on their first realization ..

talking about last part...you wrote so well 👏 👏

loved their chemistry ( love scenes 😳 )

Neha's stubbornness nature to which veer was speechless
but I didn't like Neha's intention on veer's second marriage

n her senior doctor also with mamaji in that shadyatra 😡

poor neha n veer ...went all that trauma 😭 that why all this rubbish thoughts made their way in Neha's mind


par acche logo k sath hamesha accha hi hota hai ..right
so hamare veer Neha k sath kaise kuch bura ho sakta h 😛

ohhh unko babyboy hua ...wowww😛 ⭐️ bikul veer jaisa hoga ...nahi neha jaisa ...ooops 😆 kiske jaisa bhi ho ...hai to dono bhi mere favorite 😉

I m so happy 🥳

liked last scene ...lovely

thanks sweetie once again for giving this lovely story

but felt bad ki end ho gayi .koi baat nahi tum aur nayi start kar dogi 😃

a big hug for you 🤗

love you
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Posted: 12 years ago

last part


rashu just becoz for u dear😃

whole mansion decorated with different flowers n bright lights ...mansion glittering n shining beautifully and looked like a palace...after all family had two reasons for celebrations...first neha n veer's anniversary n second the arrival of an apple of everyone eyes...neha n veer's son vyan...

sapna changed the clothes of her daughter rashi n looked at rudra who still stick to his chair as there is no tomorrow for work''are u not coming with us''she yelled...n rudra closed the laptop immediately-''im just checking the mails''affter looking at her he murmured...

she went nearer -''from last 3 hrs u are justt checking ur mails right??sudhar jao rudra ek beti ke baap ban gye ho tum''

rudra looked at her daughter n smiled cutely when sapna turned his face towards her-''don't look at her...im talking to u ''

rudra-'why not...she is my daughter n she is smiling at me''sappna growling at him n put his clothes on his hand-''becoz she finds a good joker in front of her ...now go fast''by pointing out her finger to washroom...

rudra pout-''joker''n she scowled at him-''jao rudra we are getting late for party''rudra moved towards washroom with lazy steps n turned to saw her..sapna moved towards rashi to pick her but before that he came in front of her n kissed his cheek-''i love u ...u look pretty when u r angry''sapna hit him on chest-''mera makeup kharab ho jayega jao yaha se''

rudra smiled-''toh saath me shower lete h come''sapna pulled him in washroom -''just go ''

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veer playing with his son vyan on bed by making different faces in front of him n kissed his small palm which was tightly curled around his index finger...veer's smile made him smile with toothless gums...he excites n pulled his another palm to catch his nose but veer turned back n smiled cutely as baby...

by seeing this lovely scene she forgot to rubbed her hairs with towel n looked at them lovingly...

''kitna wait karwati h tumhari mumma dekha...''veer mocked in front of vyan n he again smiled...

''jaise papa to bhot hi seedhe or sharif h ek dum jalebi ki tarah''neha complained with pouted face...

veer turned n looked at her-''arey itni jaldi ready ho gyi tum''

she threw towel on his face angrily...veer removed the towel from his face n smiled cutely-''it smells nice''neha picked up the vyan n changed his clothes-'just go to washroom''

veer hugged her from behind-''saath me chalte h''n smelled her wet hairs...she hit him on chest-'accha...bhot romantic ho rhe ho..''he kissed his cheek-''wo to mein hmesha hota hun but tum mujhe romance karne ka mauka hi nhi deti ho...ab tum mujhe se jyada vyan se pyaar jo karne lagi ho''neha frowned at him-'baby tumhara nhi h kya tumhare romance ki wajah se hi yeh yahan h samjhey ab jao jaldi late ho rha jao''he made his puppy face n went towards the washroom-''husband ki value hi nhi h''

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pooja n dhruv welcomed their guest with broad smile when dhruv sensed something on his right leg..he looked downwards n chuckled to saw her princess isha...he picked her up in his arms-''arey meri doll kaha di ??''she pointed her fingers on a box which had a cake..dhruv smiled at her-''isha ko cake chahiye''she nodded cutely n pooja chuckled to look her...

everyone wished neha n veer ...shushma felt very happy to saw vyan...at last she got her grandson...she loved him a lot..rudra n sapna came with her daughter n everyone was happy to saw them together with a baby girl...


after cake cutting ceremony...veryone wished them n neha put first piece of cake in isha's small mouth n kissed her cheek...isha clapped her small palm on mouth to resist the cake coming outside...

after sometime

tanya came with a gift in one hand n other hand curled carefully around her son...she hugged neha n then veer...veer grinned at her-''tannu u r late''

tanya made a sorry face-''just becoz of him...bhot pareshaan karta h mujhe yeh...happy anniversary''

neha smiled-''its ok baccha h wo''after saying that she knelt down in front of him n offer him two chochlate..he grabbed them quickly n kissed her cheek..on which she grinned...

veer turned to tanya-''agar koi problem ho to mujhe btana...i'll''but she stopped him-''im fine veer tumne bhot kuch kiya h mere liye i just hope jaisa h waisa hi chalta rhe''

veer-''agni ne kuch kiya tumhare sath...me use''neha stood up n said quickly-''han tanya bta do veer ko taaki wo fir se jakar agni ko do chaar laga de''

veer scowled at her...neha turned to tanya-'don't worry agni dheere dheere sudhar jayega''

tanya nodded...n smiled

dhruv with pooja n rudra with sapna on dance floor when veer gabbed her hand n went on dance floor...she curled her arms in his neck n he wrapped her creamy waist with his hands-''happy anniversary''she came closer to him-''happy anniversary veer..thank u for everything...''he smiled n hugged her

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after saying gud buy to their relatives they wrapped up the things when neha called diya who picked up vessels from table-''diya rehne do mein kar lungi''

diya-''its ok bhabhi''neha stopped to saying further but after a moment she asked-''diya tumhe koi problem to nhi h na i mean bhaiya ke sath tum khush ho na''

diya looked at her-''nhi bhabhi...aapko pta h aapke bhaiya kitne shy h unhone mujhe i love u bhi shaadi ke 2 month baad bola or wo bhi shuruwat mene ki thi tab''

neha chuckled softly-''diya bhaiya shuru se hi aise h...but wo tumhe bhot pyaar karte h''

diya smiled about thinking him-'' i know bhabhi he is the perfect husband pata nhi unhe kaise pata chal jaata h ki mujhe kya chahiye...thanks to u n bhai...neha hugged her tightly-''i wish tum hmesha khush raho''

diya-''thank u again''

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veer looked at doors very five minutes n then on laptop screen...after switched off the laptop he stretched his legs on bed then he heard vyan's voice...he turned n looked at his puffy eyes...he was awake after a deep sleep...he picked him up-''don't worry im here...''he grinned at him n then made a weird face n shout-''neha''

she came inside the room-''kya hua''n she chuckled to saw his regular expression on face-''again''

veer scowled -'yes again...tumne sikhaya na usse roz roz mere pass akar mere kapde gila karna''

neha snatched baby from his hand-''itne se baby ko kya sikhayungi mein...or waise bhi papa ho tum tumhre clothes gile nhi karega to kiske karega''

she changed his clothes...n looked at veer-''tumhare bhi mein karu''

veer smiled naughtily-''mujhe koi objection nhi h''she knew his intention''jao shower le kar aao ''

veer went to washroom


at late night

she caressed his neck with her soft lips...when he stroke her hairs...she moved her delicate fingers from his six pack abs to his chest n he slid his strap of nighty from the shoulder...he kissed her shoulder ...n bite on her neck which made her moan softly...he teased her more by kissed on her nape n cheek...she pulled him back n bite his ear-''neha''he shouts in pain..she closed his mouth with palm-''shhh vyan uth jayega''

veer looked at vyan who was sleeping peacefully on other side of bed...veer removed her hand n pulled her more closer-''tum ek paly school kyu nhi khol leti ho sare chote bacche entertain kiya karenge tumhe..meri kya jarurat h''neha caressed his forehead with her fingers-''ooo baby ko bura laga..ya jealousy ho rhi h''

veer -''mujhe neend aa rhi h...tumhe subah hospital nhi jana''he turned to other side n closed his eyes...neha chuckled n kissed his shoulder-''sorry''

why??why it's so difficult to stay away from her...n then their lips met again ...hugging each other they lost in their dream world😃

i hope u like it...
Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago

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