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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx for this luvly ud dear...😊

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Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
part 77
love the part where all discussing how will baby look
liked rudra!! lolz srk kat n all areh veer hai na
ohh thank god neha saved
loved scene between veer n pooja
so veer abhi tak gussa hai n neha trying to manaying him
ohhho y this arpita getting kabab mein haddi!!
no worries he is veer on one can stop him
ohh scary precap

thank u di for ur comment
loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
beautiful update!
loved neha veer scene
but wht this tintokali upto
she married with agni
wht will jaimama's reaction
wow so veer found boy for diya its aditya
loved end scene
but precap is sad!

thank u di for ur lovely comment
really loved it a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi

Thnx for this luvly ud dear...😊

thank u dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 79

''accident ''she panickly asked again to the men on other side of call...she threw the phone on bed n rush outside from the mansion...nivi n sushma noticed her rushing outside hurriedly n called her from behind but before that she had left the mansion...

after fifteen minutes...she looked here n there on roadside but there was no one...with tears in eyes n fear in heart she scanned the road thoroughly veer''n mumbled nervously...

a black car stood near the road n driver staring at her dangerously-''she is there''n disconnect the call after hearing the answer from the other side...he start the engine n moved towards her with average speed...she still scanning the road unknown by any car -''veer''she shouts loudly but there was no one to listen her...n then suddenly she saw a car moving towards her in almost full speed...but before she could react car hit her on stomach n left her alone in pain...barely knew what happen to her she fell on ground with so much pain that her throat choked-''ve...r''fresh tears rolled down from her eyes ..she wricked her knee to stomach n cried out loudly...her eyes searching for someone for help but there was bot a single soul on that place...her lashes dropped slightly as she loses her consciousness...she screamed in pain again-''veer''n at last everything turned black

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''doctor neha kaisi h''veer asked hastily n nervously...dr preeti looked at her n sadly sat on her chair-''veer neha thik h but baby''his heart sank as she nodded negatively...tears rolled down from his eyes...but he wiped it immediately...preeti stood up n put her hand on his shoulder-''veer i know bhot mushkil h tumhare liye but according to her reports wo kabhi conceive nhi kar payegi''shockingly he looked at her-''what??

''dekho veer mein neha ki acchi friend or uski senior bhi hun mein juth nhi bolungi...tum uski reports dekh sakte ho''she showed him her file n looked at him sadly...

veer looked at the file n closed it...preeti said softly-''veer neha ko or family ko jitni jaldi ho sake bta do...''veer looked at her with tears-''ok''n left before the tears made their way

he wiped his tears n caressed her face lovingly...he locked her hairs behind the ear n kissed her forehead which made her opened her eyes...she smiled softly-''veer''n hugged him-''veer tum thik ho na kisi ne mujhse kaha ki tumhara accident ho gya h or mein''

veer released her n gazed at her affectionately-''tumhe waha nhi jaana chahiye tha mana kiya tha na meine...''she touched his face -''tumhare accident ki baat sunkar bhi nhi jaati???pata h kitna daar gyi thi mein...or ...''veer looked at her n she continued smilingly-''or baby bhi''

tear fell on her cheek n she winced ...he never cried like this before...she tried set herself when veer pulled her back on bed-''veer kya hua tum ro kyu rhe ho bolo na''

''she looked at him nervously-'veer bolo kya hua ''he embraced her tightly-''im sorry neha''n wept between her hairs-''im sorry mein hmare baby ko nhi bacha paya''
she stunned to heard this n tears made their way automatically through eyes...

--------------------------------------------------------------------------after two days

nivi n sushma sitting on dining table n chopped the vegetables...when sapna came with tea for both fo them-''maa tea''

sushma took it silently n looked at nivi who still lost in her thoughts...sushma shooked her-''nivi''she jolted with sudden reaction n looked at sushma-''didi hmara mann nhi h aap le lijiye''

shushma put her hand on her shoulder-''nivi itna pareshaan hone ki koi jarurat nhi h...jo kuch hua usse bhul jao..aaj subah swamiji ka phone aya tha unhone kaha ki hume pareshaan hone ki koi jarurat nhi h is ghar ko waris hume veer his dega...aaj nhi to kal hmara pota hmare saath hoga to pareshaan hone ki kya baat...bas hume neha ka acche se dhyaan rakhna hoga wahi to hume chota veer degi na''

nivi smiled -''aap sach keh rhi h didi swamiji ne kaha h to sahi kaha hoga''

sapna grinned genuinely after two days of accident-''arey wah yeh to bhot khushi ki baat h...or hume neha ko bhi khush rakhna hoga jaise kuch hua hi nhi h...uski health ke liye yehi accha h ki wo khush rhe''

neha looked at their smiling face with tears in her eyes-''how is it possible jb mein conceive hi nhi kar sakti to''n silently went to her room

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he hugged her from behind n kissed her cheek lovingly-''are u fine...medicines li tumnne''she looked at him anxiously -''veer swamiji ne kaha h ki hume baby boy hoga isn't good news''she smiled heavily...veer broke their embrace n cupped her face-''neha tum bhot week ho gyi ho tumhe time par medicines n time par khana khana so lets go''n he grasped her arms while she stopped him sternly-''veer tumhe accha nhi laga ki hume baby boy hoga''he nodded softly-'hmmm ab chalo''while barely meeting her gaze

she went nearer-''jab juth bol nhi sakte to kyun bolte ho tum...mein kabhi coneive nhi kar payungi...kyu nhi btaya tumne mujhe''startled her looked at her finally-'tumhe kaise pata''

he put her right arm which held a file in front of him-''tum ise chupana bhul gye the''veer snatched the file from her hands n went nearer to her-''aisa kuch nhi h neha hum kisi or doctor ke pass jayenge...yeh reports shayad wrong ho''

-''dr preeti meri senior h veer...agar unhone us din mujhe us road par nhi dekha hota to aaj mein yaha nhi hoti...tumhe lagta h ki wo juth bolengi mujhse...veer meine unse bhot kuch sikha h un par ya unki reports par shak karna galat h ...yahi sach h ki mein kabhi concive nhi kar payungi''

veer pulled her closer to him-''neha mujhe baby nhi chahiye mujhe tumhare siwa kuch nhi chahiye pls bhul jao yeh sab or apna dhyaan rakho bas''

she pulled her face upward-''par mujhe chahiye hmara baby..plsss''veer looked at her pleadingly-''ok fine hum ek baar or test kara lete h ''

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''i didn't understand ki tum aisa kyun kar rhe ho veer...tumhe lagta h mein juth bol rhi ...wo reports juthi thi but see in reports mein bhi wahi sab aaya h...veer mein neha ki dushman nhi hun jo aisa karungi''she said in angry tone...veer stood up immediately-''im really sorry doctor but mera yeh matlab bilkul nhi tha ...mene yeh sab issliye karwaya kyunki usse baby chahiye''

preeti stared at him -''i know veer ki tum neha ke liye kuch bhi karoge...abhi usse apni health par dhyaan dena chahiye accident ki wajah se wo bhot week ho gyi or uski head ki injuries abhi thik nhi usse itna stress nhi lena chahiye tum usse kahi le jao jaha wo khush rahegi''veer nodded n took the file which lying on table n left defeatedly

after he left the room preeti dialed a number n smiled-''aapka kaam ho gya h ...''

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veer entered in the room when she looked at him n smiled-''veer kya kaha doctor ne...''veer gave her file n went towards the bed...he sat on bed n loosed his lases

she looked at the file n then veer-''mene kaha tha tumse yeh sab karane ka koi fayada nhi h veer''

still looking at shoes-'neha its ok mujhe baby nhi chahiye tum bhi bhool jao''

she sat near him n stared at him-''nhi bhool sakti mein veer sabko kitni hopes h humse ki hum unhe ''he looked at her pleadingly-''mein unhe samjha dunga or sach to btana hi hoga na''

neha put her hand in hers-''sirf hmari family ko hi nhi mujhe bhi baby chahiye veer pls''veer pulled her in his arms-''hum baby adopt kar lenge...''

''nhi mujhe or is family ko tumhara baby chahiye kisi or ka nhi''she said urgently...''yeh possible nhi h neha''he said little angrily

''wo mujhe nhi pata bas mujhe tumhara baby chahiye thats it...''n she went outside stubbornly

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after whole night she was just thinking about her baby...when veer came out from the washroom just in her white vest with towel on shoulder...she gazing at him he was still looking hot after the shower...he musculine features attracted her more...why he was so handsome...by thinking all that she went nearer n said hesitatingly-''can i rubbed ur hairs''after so many days he saw that twinkle in her eyes which was missing in these days-''now u want a permission for that''she smiled shyly n took the towel from his shoulder which showed his broad n perfect shoulders..on which she rest her head n found the peace of heaven many times...she rubbed his hairs gently without tearing her gaze...he was also gazing her lovingly-''u looked beautiful today''she blushed n concentrate on his hairs while he pulled her towards him by caressing her delicate waist...she shyly put the towel below-''chodo''instead,he tightened his grip n their noses brushed with each other

she rested her hands on his chest n looked at his face,his eyes darkened with full of desires...n gazing her lovingly she caressed his face with her palm while his lips caressed her skin all over on face...on reaching lips she put her palm-''ek shart par''he looked at her questionably while she started to speak n stopped nervously...he removed her palm n placed his lips on hers...she closed her eyes n moaned silently...

after sharing a passionate kiss he tore the kiss...n looked at her...he gently placed a kiss on her forehead-''i love u kabhi aisa sochna bhi mat...ki mein dusri shaadi karunga''her eyes widened with shock n then she quickly lowered her lashes-''but or koi ''he put his finger on her lips-''i don't care koi raasta ho ya nhi...mein kisi or ke saath apna pyaar share nhi kar sakta''he released her angrily n went towards the wardrobe...she followed him silently-'veer ''he looked at her sternly-''not again pls...kya baby tumhare liye itna important ...ki tum mujhe kisi ke saath bhi share kar sakti ho''she grasped his arm-''veer mera yeh matlab nhi tha''

he removed her palm-''to kya matlab tha tumhara...shaadi ke baad baby is ghar ko milega tumhe nhi...tum kyun nhi samjhti ho neha''her eyes filled with tears n she sat on bed weakly ...he control himself n knelt down in front of her-''neha look at me...don't u love me''she looked at him angrily...he smiled-''i know u love me...to fir baby ki kya jarurat rudra or sapna bhabhi ko hi dekh lo wo bhi bina baby ke rehte h na or isha h na kya wo hmari baby nhi h''

she turned his face-''mein sapna di nhi hun veer ...mujhe baby chahiye''suddenly he stood up angrily n after geeting ready he left the room without saying a single word...she looked at closed doors-''tum kyu nhi samjhte ho''


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at night

he came to her room hurriedly when he looked nivi sitting beside neha...veer went nearer-''kya hua maa apne phone kiya tha''

nivi-''han veer neha behosh ho gyi thi doctor ne kaha h ki wo abhi bhot weak h usse stress nhi lena chahiye''

veer growled at her angrily while she ignored his gaze n turned her face...nivi stood up n said -''veer tum kuch dino ke liye hmare farm house chale jao neha ko lekar shayad neha ko waha accha lage,...khush rahegi to uski health bhi acchi rahegi''

''mujhe kahi nhi jana ma mein yahi thik hun''without meeting his gaze she said quickly...

''just shut up..hum kal subah hi jayenge maa...or neha ko kuch nhi hoga''he smiled at her mother...nivi caressed his face-''thik h hum tumhare liye jaruri cheezein pack karwa dete h''n she left after saw her again

he sat beside her-''yeh sab kya h neha''she didn't speak n didn't either looked at him...she threw the bedsheet on other side on bed n stood up from the bed angrily...he grasped her hand n made her sit on his lap-''whats ur problem''he said while growling at her...trying to freed herself-''u r my problem''she said angrily

''accha to shaadi kyu ki mujhse...???mujhe meri ring wapas do...kar lunga dusri shaadi ...or kisi acchi ladki se karunga jo smart ho,beautiful ho thodi intelligent or thodi sexy''she put her pal on his face-''just shut up agar aisa kuch socha bhi to mein tumhe chodungi nhi''

''wahi to mein chahta hun''he raised his brow n wickedly smiled...she hit his chest playfully-'meri ek baat nhi maan sakte tum''he laid her on bed n himself on top of her-''isse to accha h tum meri jaan le lo''she frowned at him...n he kissed her on cheek..she pulled him back when he grasped her wrists-''kal hum dono ko farm house jana to apni packing shuru kar do''

he stood up but she didn't budge...he looked at her n then smiled suddenly-''ok fine tumhe baby chahiye na...thik h but meri kuch shartein h jo tumhe manni padegi..promise karo''

her face lit up suddenly she got up on bed-''mein sab manungi promise''n hugged him

he smiled-''pehle shart to suno...to pehli shart h ki us ladki se shaadi nhi karunga...dusri shart ki wo mujhe tumse milne se nhi rokegi...teesri shart wo hume hmara baby dekar chali jayegi...or iske baare mein hum kisi ko kuch nhi batenge...then fourth one n last one yeh h ki ab tum is baarein mein koi baat nhi karogi''then he looked at her who was expression less-''are u joking aisi ladki kaha milegi''

veer pulled her on bed-''wo sab tumhari problem h tumhe baby chahiye na to meri shart to manni padegi warna bhul jao''n then covered her with bedsheet-''gdnt swt drms''

she glared him hatefully-''i hate u''he smiled-''i love u too''n winked at her

he went to washroom smiling at himself-''aisi ladki tumhe kabhi nhi milegi''n looked at once again when she turned his face n he giggled again

after two days

''tum kahan gye the veer''she asked him while removing the clothes...veer hugged her from behind-''i love u''she turned n looked at him-i know lekin gye kaha the tum''

veer-''tumhara accident jai mama ne karwaya tha...or wo sab reports tumhari so called senior doctor preeti ne kisi or se badal di thi...bas un logo ko sahi jagah pahuchane gya tha''she stared at him with tears-''matlab wo sab reports juthi this dr preeti aisa kaise kar sakti h mere sath veer''

veer embraced her tightly-'its ok don't worry mein kabhi koi problem nhi hone dunga...just relax''

she hugged him tightly-''im sorry mene tumhe bhot pareshaan kiya or dusri shaadi ka khayal pata nhi mere man me kaise aa gya im sorry veer

veer smiled-''forget it ab tum yeh socho ki mein tumhe kitna pareshaan karne wala hun''she looked upward-''what??''

he smiled -''tumhe baby nhi chahiye''she pushed him back-''veer''

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after one yr

he kissed her neck while she blushed-''veer''he grasped her waist-''what yr''she looked at him shy-''veer baby uth jayega na''veer looked at bed where their little prince sleeping peacefully...

veer smiled-''tumhari tarah cute h''

she smiled-''hmari tarah ab jaldi ready ho jao warna aj ki pooja me tumhe badi maa ki fatkaar padegi''

she pulled him back n moved towards the doors when he grasped her hand n pulled towards him-''tumhe hmesha itni jaldi kyu hoti h''

neha-''veer pooja ke baad tumhe office bhi to jana h mujhe hospital bhi jana h kitna kaam h jaldi to hogi na''

veer grabbed her waist tightly n bend his head to kiss her when a cute baby cry disturbed them...she burst into laughter to look his annoying face-''tumpar gya h ...mein tumhare pass aayun use bhi pasand nhi h towel kahan h''she smiled while walking towards bed-''bathroom mein h''

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after pooja

''ok fine im leaving junior ka dhyaan rakhna''she nodded-''bye''he kissed her n then his son-''love u or hospital mein koi problem ho to mujhe call karna''

neha-''veer jao na mein chali jayungi or duggu ki chinta mat karo maa sambhal lengi usse''he smiled n left



at evening

he was sitting on terrace when she came with baby-''veer tum yaha kyu baithe ho''

he extended his palm and she put her palm in his...she sat down with him-''kya hua''veer looked at her n baby-''happy anniversary mrs neha malhotra''

she looked at his watch-''12 baj gye ''he nodded n pulled her in his arms-''thank u''

''for what??''she asked while patting baby softly...''for everything for love me...for marry me for caring me n for this beautiful gift''he said while caress his baby

neha touched his cheek-''are u ok na...kya hua suddenly yeh sab kyu keh rhe ho''

veer kissed her forehead-''bas aise hi ...''she looked at him for few seconds n moved towards his face...she kissed his lips-''thank u meri life me ane ke liye'he smiled n kissed her back-''i love u''




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Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sad part😭
but still its very nice
plsss update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
...many lines , 2 paras , hot n romantic scene is missing from this part automatically ...dnt know whats wrong with this edit button...
Sry 4 that guys..mene pura part bhot mehnat se likha tha bich bich me kuch gayab ho gya
well sapna n rudra got their child n jai agni in jail...
One hot scene between veer n neha toh explain nhi kar sakti kyunki kuch post nhi ho rha h...so sorry or alag se itna scene post karna is not good idea...so pls bear it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ktni badi wali nainsafi h ye
pm ni kiya meko 😭
ff bhi khatam
miss u neer
ye preeti kitni buri h kamini 😡
ye veer ki sharto ko sun kr to mujhe vo wali movie yaad aa gai jisme salman preeti n rani the
rani bhi to aisa hi krti h
dono da name of dat movie :/
mujhe phle hi sak tha daal puri kali h
finaly baby veer aa gya 😉 [Y]
happy ending 😊
luv u di
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Posted: 12 years ago
nahiii aisaaa nahi ho satkaaa...
this was the last part...nonooo...

well it was beautifulll
finally that jhuti doc ki sachai samne aa gaiyeee...

otherwise neha veer ki dusri girl k sath setting kara deti... fool kahi ki..

other than that the last part was sweet ... ye sare fan fics read karne k baad mera maan khetha hai ki mere ko bhe aisa life partner chaiyee...
😳☺️

now come back with a dharsooo shamakedar fan fiction like hum tum staring Rajat and mugdha like always..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 79-

Ye tho agn a roller coaster ride wla update tha!..

Accident- thrill, neer- romance, dr preeti- s@@l! gandi doctor,…beekau kahin ki-…

Muje bhi dara diyaa usne di- neer ka baby- poore humtum mei hum uska hi tho wait kerr rhe the- first update se!..

Loved dat scn –kitna jyada emotional n heart wrenching tha- wen he told neha dat they abby is no more!..

Mekko bhot bhot dard hoa di..

And den, the way veer wanted her to retest- iss umeed k saath ki yes-neha is completely fine-both physically n sexually.

Neha- kitna gussa aaya di muje- how neha cud think of sharing ver wid another woman…goli maar dungi kudh mei uss woman mei…n neha k upper bhi dheer saara chillnane ka mann kerr rha tha!..

But evn enjoyed dat part wen neha was ready to choke his neck wen he said ki I wil marry a gal sexier than u…she said-''chundungi nhi tumhe!''

Haadd h di!- ladkiyoon ko kudd pta nhi hota ki unhe chahiye kyaa!.. :P

Sorry- mei bhi ek ladki hu!...so replace ladkiyoon to KUCH LADKIYOON…

Jai agni ko thikane lga diya—yippeee!..popat lal is finally in jail I hope…uss dr-preeti ko bhi badi si panelty milni chahiye!..

Family guruji bhi h ohoo!..great…acha gurujii- duggu k aane wali news ko confirm hi kerr diya!...

But di, aap story aise kaise end kerr sakte ho- meine aapse kitna request kiya tha for rudra baby bhi… :'( guruji ne rudra k baby k liye bhi kuch kaha hoga!..aap likhna bhul gye lekin… :'(

DI U DON'T LOVE ME ANY MORE NA!...

Isliye bina rudra baby diye hoe u ended!..dats not fair..

Ek aur update chahiye- 80 update honge tho acha bhi lagega- even number..

79 kuch odd odd lag rha h..isliye uska category bhi h-odd numbers…

Yaad h , padha tha 4th class mei.

Di ek aur plzz- neer ki wedding anniversary party bhi n rudra baby bhi plzz…

Iske baad pakka kuch nhi mangugi..

Mera bhi bday h 13 may ko..next Monday- uska bday gift dedo plzz….aapni life ka pehla gift di mei aapni jhuli palace beekh mei maang rhi hu…don't break me here plz..dont let me down.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago

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