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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Loved Both of The Updates !!!!

thanks dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shruja

awesome updates
din't liked sapna's behaviour!
loved veer slapped tanu!!
but she is not still understanding tht she din't love veer n vise versa
wow engagement done!!
loved whole 59 update!!
the tricky way she prooved his challenge to say i love u
loved veer neha moments
but scare abt jai n agni
wht r they going to do now?
wht if tanu also shake hands with them

thaks di for ur comment

lloved it
let see wht r they planning for😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 60

veer n neha reached at raj(veer's friend)place...he welcomed them with broad smile n introduced them with his other friends...veer was happy to met with his frnds after long time...neha clutched his arms as she felt awkward...he smiled at her ...rosy veer's other colg friend entered n saw veer...she smiled n came towards him-''veer omg u looking dashing''she hugged him kissed on his cheek...neha surprisingly looked at her then at veer...he made a innocent face n shrugged his shoulder...rosy still embraced him-''oh my god veer tumhe kitne dino baad dekha h meine tum to or bhi smart n handsome ho gye ho''veer softly remove his embrace n moved back...neha looking at her angrily...he tried to smile but to saw her anger his smile faded

raj-''sach mein veer baat kya h koi gf mil gyi h kya''veer looked at him-''han...nhi ..i mean ''n looked at neha

raj-''kya hua ''veer grasped her hand-''she is my life n would be wife''everyone shocked to saw her...raj n rosy-''really hume to laga tha ki tanya ''veer smiled-''nhi aisa kuch nhi h i love neha''

rosy n raj looked at her n smiled-''waise maan na padega veer tumhari choice bhot acchi h she is very beautiful n u looked awesome together''

veer looked at her she still fuming ...rosy came towards her-''neha u r lucky ki tumhe veer mila waise colg mein veer ke liye saari girls marti thi mein bhi thi usme he is so cute na''n snatched his cheek like a small baby...she frowned at rosy n clutched his arm again...he rubbed his cheek

rosy n raj giggled...when she continue-''neha veer ko aise hi pakad kar rakhna nhi to mein hi usse shaadi kar lungi''neha looked at him then his cheek which have red mark of her lipstick

after sometime

raj cut the cake n enjoying the party with his friends...all of them dancing ...chatting..eating while veer looked at a boy standing in a corner and staring someone smirkly...veer followed his gaze n saw neha sitting with some girls on a table ...he fumed with anger he went towards her-''neha lets go hume chalna chahiye''she confused with his sudden reaction-''lekin abhi to hum aye h''

veer in slightly loud-''meine kaha na chalo yahan se''

she stood up he grasped her hand n went outside when raj called him-''veer''he turned to saw him..raj came nearer-''khan ja rhe ho abhi party khatam nhi hui h yr common lets enjoy''

veer-''nhi raj hume jaana hoga neha ko uske ghar bhi chodna h''

raj-''koi baat nhi chod dena waise bhi abhi to party shuru hui h chalo ''he hold his hand n moved inside again

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after one hour

shushma to nivi-''veer abhi tak nhi aaya tumne dono ko jaane kyun diya''

nivi -''did aa jayenge kahin traffic mein phas gye honge''

sushma-'tumne un dono ko akle jaane hi kyun diya abhi shaadi bhi nhi hui h or is tarah bahar gumna accha nhi h''

dhruv came downstairs-''mom aap fikar mat kijiye wo log aa jayenge don't worry''

sushma looked at hi angrily-''hum nhi chahte jo tumne kiya wahi veer kare''

dhruv looked at his mother-''mom''but she stopped him-''bas kuch nhi sunna hume kal subah hi jaakar veer or neha ki shaadi ka muhurat nikalwayo jald se jald''

he nodded n leave

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she enjoying his embraced while dancing...he put one hand on her waist n other on her back..she closed her eyes while veer looking at that boy he was still gazing her...he tightly embraced her n turned on other side...

she looked at him while smiling then saw his red mark..she rubbed that mark with her thumb n kissed his same cheek...he smiled-''jealousy''she made her face-''han..sach sach btao kitni ladkiyo ne tumhe kiss kiya h ab tak''

veer smiled smirkly-''ummm''she pat his chest softly-''itni saari ladkiyo ne kiss kiya h tumhe ki sochna pad rha h''

he giggled-''nhi swthrt mujhe kisine kiss nhi kiya tumhare siva''

neha-''or wo rosy usne kyun kiya tumhe kiss''he chuckled-'yeh to usse hi puchna padega''

she made her face..he laughed n embraced her

after sometime

veer to raj-''raj hum chalte h jaldi milenge tum sab ko meri shaadi mein aana h''he nooded with a smile

as they leave veer listen something wiered ...he went outside n made her sit in the car-''neha im just coming in 2 min''she looked at him surprisingly-''lekin mujhe chodkar kahan ja rhe ho''

veer-''neha bas 2 min mein aata hun''he leave

he entered again in house with angry face n went towards that guy-''kya bola tha tumne''that boy smiled-''kyun karega item bola teri wali ko''veer punched him on his nose...it start bleeding..then he hit on his stomach n face..he fell on floors...raj came hastily n stopped him-''veer what are u doing''he didn't listened him n hit him with his leg...he grasped his collar-''agar agli baar use aankh utha kar bhi dekha na to tu kisi ko nhi dikhayi dega jaan se maar dunga''

as he moved that boy stood up n about to hit him with knife when he turned n hold his hand n gain punched him on his face...raj stopped-''stop it veer he's my brother vishal''veer stopped n said-''apne bhai ko samjh dena ki aaj wo tumhari wajah se bach gya''n he leave

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he sat in car...she said-''kahan gye the tum mujhe aklele chodkar agar koi bhoot aa jata to ''he looked at her innocent face n start the engine...she staring at him-''kya hua tumhare dist ne tumhe cake nhi diya khaane ko''n giggled herself...he still driving...when she again looked at him-''veer tumhe kya lagta h ki mein pagal hun jo apne aap se baatein kar rhi hun kya hua h tumhe''

veer looked at her-''kuch nhi''she thought something-''veer shaadi ke baad hum roj bahar dinner karenge maza ayega na bas mein or tum''he still concentrating on driving...she clutched his arm-''shaam ko office se jaldi aana thik h mein jyada wait nhi karungi mujhe raat ko jaldi neend aa jaati h ''

he stopped the car n removed her hand from his arm...she was confused n about to asked the reason but he kissed her lips without wasting a sec...she widened her eyes but he enjoying the kiss...soon she also curled her hands around his neck...he kissed her lower lips softly then sucked her upper lips

after sometime she tore the kiss-''veer chalo late ho rha h''while blushing...veer loved her when she shyly smiled...he caressing her face with his hand..she closed her eyes n felt something sticky she opened her eyes n looked at his hand it was bleeding by the cut of knife..she shocked-''veer yeh kya hua tumhara jhagda hua kisis se''he removed his hand-''kuch nhi hua neha thodi si chot h thik ho jayega ''

she tore her dupatta n wrapped around his palm-''veer juth mat bolo kya hua btao mujhe''

veer cupped her face-''neha wo abhi car ka door band karte time mere hath mein chot lag gyi or kuch nhi hua''

she removed his hand-''tumhe mein pagal lagti hun mein doctor hun or itna to mujhe pta h ki yeh chot tumhe knife se lagi h h na''he tried to answer her-''han baba knife se hi laga wo raj ka cake katne wala knife lag gya ab yeh mat puchna kab laga kahan laga pls''

neha-''apna dhyaan to rakhna chahiye na tumhe...''he pulled her closer-''sorry''she pulled him back-''baat mat karo mujhese''

he went nearer-''sry jaan age se dhyaan rakhunga pakka promise''she embraced him n smiled
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next morning

neha in her cabin when tanya came-''neha''she looked her -''tanya tum yahan kyun aayi ho''
tanya went nearer n joined her palms-''im sorry neha meine jo bhi kiya uski saja mujhe mil gyi h veer ne mujhse naaraz hokar apni dosti bhi tod di h''

neha-''dekho tanya yeh tumhare or veer ke aapas ke baat h mein usme kuch nhi kar sakti''tanya cried out-''neha mein jaanti hun ki mujhse bhot badi galati hui h lekin ab mein jaan gyi hun ki veer tumse bhot pyaar karta h''

neha-''tanya agar tumhe apni galti mehsus ho gyi h to acchi baat h mein tumse naaraz nhi hun''tanya smiled-''thank u neha sach mein veer ko tumse jyada koi pyaar nhi kar sakta

neha smiled n tanya leave
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nxt day

veer lazily went downstairs n sat on couch when rudra came-''gudmg veer''

veer-''gudmg''with a smile...rudra-'ab yeh smile jyada der tak nhi rahegi''

veer-''kyun''

rudra-''tumhari shaadi ka muhurat kal ka nikala h or tum kal tak neha se nhi mil sakte mom ke kade aadesh h''

veer shocked-''what nonsense aisa thode hi hota h''

aisa hi hota h shaadi se pehle dono ek dusre se nhi milte samjhe tum''veer n rudra turned n saw sushma...she looked at veer angrily n then on his hand-'yeh kya hua''

rudra answered quickly-''chot lag gyi hogi mom''

sushma-''tumse humne pucha''rudra made his face n veer replied-''wo badi maa kal car ke doors se chot lag gyi''

sushma-''kal tak tum kahin bahar nhi jaoge or na hi koi chot lagegi'' n she went in kitchen...veer made a cried face like a small baby-''aisa thode hi hota h ab mein neha se kaise milunga''rudra smiled-''ab pta chala bhot maza aya tha na tujhe jab meri or dhruv ki shaadi hui thi ab teri baari h barbad hone ki''

veer throw cushion on him-''rura tumhe meri help karni chahiye or tum manthra bankar aag laga rhe ho''

rudra hit him back with cushion-''accha or meri shaadi mein tu kakai bana uska kya ''

veer-''mujhe kuch nhi pta mujhe neha se milna h bas...he thought something n smiled then he laughed to looked at rudra..rudra saw him with corner of eyes-''what dekho veer mein kuch nhi karunga is baar jo karna h apne aap karo''

veer laughed-''bhai bhai ke help nhi karega to kaun karega''rudra ran towards outside -''no no never''n veer behind him
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

amazing part

just luv it <3

thanks dii😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Another great part!!

Loved the jealousy and possessiveness in Neer parts...But Neha needn't worry...veer usse bohot pyar karta hai

Ab yeh Tanya ko achank kya ho gaya?? i'm sure uska koi plan hai...
Neer ki shaadi itni jaldi...Really excited
The part b/w brothers was very cute and funny..
Cont soon
Lov u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...👏
loved neha getting jealous...and veer wow kya dhulai ki vishal ki...dhishoom-dhishoom...maza a gaya...
and loved veer neha scene...
and tanya chipkali...phir a gayi...kutte ki doom hai ye kabhi nahi seedhi hogi...pehle toh veer ne sirf 2 lagaye the ab ki baar toh pakka terrace se dhakka de dega...chudail...
and manthara and kaikai...funny...bechara veer...
just hope ki unki shaadi tak ye tanya kuch gadbad na kre waise pata hai ye kuch na kuch toh zarur karegi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,baaz nahi ayegi but ohir bhi we know shaadi toh zarur hogi...
continue soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
reso jii
~~edited~~

yeh yeh yeh yeh ..
pehle tho ud hoa isliye i m vry happy jii
thnx di...

di.. and doasri baat yeh ki...
veer ki tarah mujhe bhi chott lagi h...
haath main..
rite wale..
aaj kal main free hun, so mom mujhe khana banana sikha rhi h...
n maine aapna haath kaat liya h... mera thumb n index finger...injured h.. mujhe bilkul idea nhi tha ki new knife itna sharp hoga... bhott bhott dard ho rha h abhi bhi type krte samay
isliye egl update main bhi thoda late ho jayega...

sry..

but LSS ho jayega..
coz uska bas thoda hi ud baki h..
ma fav prt ws jealousy..

rosy kitni bhi rosy ho, humari neha jaisa koi nhi...
but her in dis ud. so cute...

unka dance bhi bada sweet tha..
kya band bajayi veer ne uss KUTTE ki.. maaza aa gya...

wow, car wala scene, kya kahun.. kitan mazedar tha..
wow so much...
kinna☺️ voh tha..
veer ne suddenly kiss kiya neha ko...

neha kitna bolti h by god..
han veer humari neha bewkoof nhi h.. she noes evry thing...

tintoakli k dimaag main kya pakk rha h..

kahin jaa kr bagh kyun nhi jati yeh...
i hate h..

veer n neha ek dinn tak nhi milenge...
o no...
ek dinn.. haye yeh lambi judai...

but i noe, veer neha se milkr hi rahega...

veer ne kab kissi ki suni h jo ab sunega...

:P

veer ki jai...

ud soon di, sry fr shrt cmnt, haath main dard h.. verna thoda aur likhti..
lov u di

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res 😊 Very NIce part
loved it thoroughly
Neha n Veer in Party 😉
n Neha felt jealous with his Female friend .😆
n that idiot boy ...accha maj chakhaya veer ne 👏
loved their drive n veer sudden action (kiss)😳
loved Neer's Romantic scene
omg kal hi shaadi hai 😃
sari tayari sabkuch kaise manage hoga
n Veer tumhe Neha se milna hai gre8 !! 😉
so dekhte hai how veer n Neha's meeting will occur before marriage
It would be very interasting n Romantic too😉
waiting
Ud soon
love u
Edited by sonalimurat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

another fabulous UD dear..👏

I m so excited for Veer & Neha's mrg😃
I m sure...there will b lot of fun..
Poor Veer aur Neha..
ab ek-dusre se nhi mil sakte..
Bt Veer to Veer hai..apni veerta to dikhayega hi..😛
aur ye Tanya ne maafi maangi wo b Neha se..😲
kuchh to gadbad hai bhai..itni jaldi kaise sudhar sakti hai wo..
sumthing is going on in her mind..I think..
& Veer is so caring..
achchhi khaasi dhunayi kar di Raj k bhai ki..bechara..😆😆
Neha was jealous...oh my...
waiting for nxt UD dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks sweety for updating such a lovely part!!!!!!!!!!!

Veer... our filmy hero , wah kya fight thi 👏 👏 👏 👏

Neha was jealous, beta apne hone wale pati par lagam rakhna 😉 😉

hmm... veer k dimaag me koi khurapati idea aaya hai

Rudra 'manthara' 🤣 🤣

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