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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi

Superb Ud dear.. I jst luv that Veer slapped Tanya...she deserves it.. She is really so bad.. Veer Aur Neha ki engagement...wow..amazing yaar.. I can imagine Neha in golden lehnga.. bt U didn't describe Veer's outfit.. hamara Veer b to lag rha hoga dashing yaar.. aur ab ye mamaji k dimag main kya khichdi pak rhi hai.. hey bhagwan koi do pyar karne walo ko chain se q nhi jine deta.. giv d nxt UD soon..plz..

thank u swati for ur sweet comment...loved ur comment dear😃yeah swthrt hmar veer to dashing lagega hi meine socha u can imagine rt itself in any dress u want isliye nhi diya😕
han dear har love story me yeh villain jarur hote h😡
will update soon😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashu1909


wow nice update tejjo.loved the way on which veer stood for neha.

thank dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

awww...

that was soo amazing..

simply beautiful n rocking update..

love it..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

thanks anu for ur lovely comment😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Nice update...veer and neha's engagement...lovely.

continue soon.

thank u for ur sweet comment😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Freethinker

that was simply awesome sweetie...

thank u dii for ur comment😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

nice ud riya...

wow veer ne tanya ko thappad mara woh bhi do baar...jiyo veer jiyo
but yeh tanya kya fevicol ke dabbe se nikli hai kya veer ko chod ne ka naam hi nahi leti...
sapna kab samjegi ki veer only loves neha...
and finally unki engagement ho gayi...
bt agni aur jai koi na koi problem jarur create karenge...
lekin veer toh veer hai...sabko sidha kar dega...
continue soon...
luv u

thanks mayuri for ur beautiful comment loved it😃..yes u r rite hmara veer akela hi kaafi h sabke liye😃will update soon ..love u too😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dhwanimehta23

amazing update!!!!
😛
😛

thank u dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

Thapad pe thapad thapad pe thapad maze aa gye veer u rock <3 poor neha dnt let her cry too much. Read all parts till nw, sry for being late.

thanks dii for ur comment😃its ok dii no problem😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 59

someone pulled her into the room...she fell on him and hold him tightly...she looked at him n frowned-''veer yeh sab kya h???''he smiled n gazed her lovingly...she shook his shoulder-''mein tumse hi baat kar rhi hun veer''...he came to his senses n said-''hmmm..han kuch kaha tumne''

she tried to pulled him-''veer..aise kyun dekh rhe ho jaise pehli baar tumne mujhe dekha h''

he smiled-''tum har bar itni beautiful lagti ho to mein kya karu''she smiled but soon loosened his grip -''tm yahan kyun laye ho mujhe''he came closer-''to kya sab ke samne kehta ki mujhe kiss chahiye''

she widened her eyes-''kya..veer tumhe sharam nhi aati kahin bhi shuru ho jate ho sab bahar h or tum ''he grasped her from waist-''to tum kya chahti ho ki romance karne ke liye bhi time hona chahiye subah 7 baje tum mujhe ek kiss dogi uske baad shaam ko 7 baje han''she giggled-''waise idea accha h''he frowned-''stop laughing neha mein mazak nhi kar rha hun i want a kiss''as he came towards her lips she put her palm on his lips-''nhi sab hmara wait kar rhe chalo''he remove her hand-''jab tak tum mujhe kiss nhi dogi tab tak mein tumhe nhi jane dunga''

she tried to freed herself but he hold her tightly again-''ab tum meri wife bannene wali ho apne husband ko pareshaan karogi fine mein tumhe kabhi kiss nhi karunga bye''he moved towards the door n she ran behind him-''veer veer''he moved outside with a naughty smiled but not noticed by her

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after sometime

he sat on couch with dhruv n rudra when she looked at him..he made his face n turned on other side..she felt sad ...she sat on chair just behind him...pooja helped her mother in serving the food for their family members as guest left the dinner...neha looked at salad which have cuccumbar..she put a piece n threw on him...he looked at that piece n smiled ...he turned n gave her a angry look...she say sorry to him with only movements of lips n childish face...he refused n turned his face...she gritted her teeth when sapna n pooja sat for dinner next to her...she again threw a piece of cucumbar on him...but this time that hit rudra..he put it n turned ...he smiled to saw sapna..

veer giggled...-''rudra bhabhi bula rhi h jaldi jao''rudra nod n went towards the sapna...she looked at him angrily-''tum yahan kyun khade ho''

rudra-''tumne hi to mujhe bulaya na''she stoodup from the chair-''mein kyun tumhe bulaungi''

rudra-''accha to kisne bulaya mujhe''she left with angry look

neha felt relaxed...n gazing him

after sometime

shubh-''ab hume chalna chahiye 5 din baad shaadi h to uski tyaari bhi karni h''sameer -''ji han tyaari to bhot jaldi jaldi karni hogi''

sushma to naina -''aapki beti aaj se hmari beti h aap uski chinta mat kijiye wo wahan khush rahegi''

naina-''ji''

diya hold his hand-''bhai chalo mujhe kuch kaam h''he was confused-''tujhe yaha bhi kaam h tujhe kitne kaam hote h diya''she giggled-''bhai important h jaldi chalo''

veer-''kaam kya h tujhe''

diya-''wo bhabhi ne aapko terrace par bulaya h''he was glad-''kyun''

diya -''wo bhi mein hi btau''he pulled her hand-''tu ja yahan se''she chuckled-''bhai mein bhi aau teraace par aapko company dene''

veer frowned at her-''nhi koi jarurat nhi tu ja''she laughed at him n went back...she looked at him while her foot slip n she about to fall when aditya catched her...there was small eyelock session...she came to reality n felt his touch on her waist..she fumed with anger-''chodo mujhe tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe haath lagane ki''adita still gazing her-''hi im aditya neha ka bada bhai''

she contracted her forehead-''pata h mujhe isliye kuch nhi bol rhi hun nhi to ''he smiled-''nhi to kya karti aap''she about to say when her mother called her..she looked at him angrily-''baad mein batungi tumhe mein''he staring at her--''im waiting''

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as he entered on terrace she hugged him from behind-''sorry sorry sorry''...he giggled then turned-''mujhe tumse baat nhi karni''

she grasped his hand-''sorry bola to meine phir bhi'''he removed her hand-''meine kaha na nhi karni to nhi karni''she smiled n kissed his cheek-''abh bhi nhi''

he pulled her-'nhi''she clutched his shirt-''tum apne aap ko samajhte kya ho han sorry bola na''he looked at her surprisingly-''mujhe tumhara sorry nhi chahiye''she hold his collar -'dekho veer mujhe gussa mat dilao nhi to mein''he said-''nhi to kya karogi''she thought-''pata nhi kya karungi''

he removed her hand from collar-''tum kuch kar hi nhi sakti''she again clutched his shirt-''matlab kya h tumhara mein sab kar sakti hun''

he smiled smirkly-''sab ke saamne mujhe i love u bol sakti ho''she shocked to heard his challenge-''kya sab ke saamne but mein''

veer-''rehne do tumse nhi hoga''she frowned at him n came closer-''agar bola to kya doge mujhe''he grasped her waist -''jo tum chaho''

she freed herself-''to thik h aj or abhi sab ke saamne tumhe i love u bolongi''

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everyone ready for leave...shubh n siddarth went outside when neha came towards the sushma n nivi...she touched their feet n took blessings...veer smiled to saw her ,...she felt scared ..they moved outside ...veer raised his eyebrows...she turned her face n looked at him..he stood next to pooja...she moved towards him-''i love u''everyone looked at her...she hugged her sister-'di...i love u''they all were happy to saw sisters bond...neha winked at veer..he smiled at her

sushma nivi siddarth n sushma leave with sapna n rudra...dhruv looked at veer-''veer chale''he nods n moved when pooja said-''veer hum sab chalte h tum baad me aa jana ok''

veer-''ok bhabhi''

they left while giggling...he grasped neha hand...as they were alone outside.-''yeh to cheating h ''she smiled-''i love u to bola na ab apna promise pura karo''

veer-''kya chahiye tumhe''she came nearer-''tum''he gazed her n pulled her closer-''bas or kuch nhi chahiye''she embraced him-''nhi''he pulled her face n kissed her lips...

after sometime
he looked at her face...-''mujhe jana h''she freed him-''bye''he went towards his car when she called him-''veer''he turned to saw her...she went nearer n kissed his lips again-''gdnt''he touched her rosy lips with his thumb...she blushed her cheek turn red..he kissed her shyness n kissed her smile curved on her beautiful lips...after few seconds she tore the kiss n said-''ab yehi rahoge jao''

he embraced her-''mera mann nhi h''she pulled him-''veer jao na koi dekh lega''he grasped her hand-''tum is dress me bhot acchi lag rhi ho ek dum princess meri princess''she put her palm on his chest-'''pta nhi ab sab ladkiyo ka kya hoga''he looked at her surprisingly-''kya''

she caressed his face with her hand-''kyunki world ka sabse handsome ladka to mera husband bnane wala h''he rest his forehead against her-''really''she nodded shyly...
he pulled her face-''kal hum dono ko mere ek frnd ki birthday party mein jana h so ready for tommorrow''

she was excited-''ok''but her smile faded-''lekin mom dad se permission leni padegi''

he hold her palm in his hand n kissed them-''mein puch lunga don't worry''she embraced him-''ok''then he leave with a sweet smile on his face



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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww..such a sweet update...loved it 😳

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