TUJKO JO PAYA:KRIYAANSH SS...FINAL JAM ON PG 18 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow . . . . 😃
kriya is ready to accept her feelings . . . . .
swaron dancing . . . & kriya lukin at rey so lovingly 😍
& finally she said dat all to rey 🥳
& he's on cloud 9 . . . 🤗
but kriya ki mom aa gyi 😔 . . . . I guess adi samjha dega . . . . . Tabhi to happy ending hogi 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Wow harshita.This was an amazing Part.
Loved it a lot.
Finally hame Kriyaansh mil gaye.
This was superb.

Thanks for pm.

Update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
gud one
waitng fr kriyaansh reunion...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woww awsummm update,,,,,,,,,,,kriyansh prt was nyc,,,,,,,,,
thnkx 4pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
awesome👏

kriyaansh part was amazing😃

luvd it😃

waiting for d next part😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow i loved the update love u for writing this
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
awesome update...
waiting to see what's going to happen next... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
owesome update
please update the next update asappp
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey awesome update..plz soon n plz pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys mi bck ...i knw bahut time hogaya..i m too much bsy wid 12th i smetimes watch d3..nt happy wid swaron track... so anyways i m really srry guys fr nt updatin n i cnt also give pms nw b'coz i dnt hav that much time.. I M SOOO MUCH WALA SRRY...here i m givin this ss the final touch..thank u..i hpe u wil understand...


FINAL JAM...:)⭐️😃

Kria:mom enough i cnt live Rey ..i luv him..i cnt live him... u made me left dance u made me left Rey my life n u want me too live hw cn it be possible..??? Nw Kriya was screamin at her mom... everyne was shock adi knew it was nt rite fr her to get so angry dis wil worsen her health...Kria continued..
Kria:aapna toh mujh kabhi apna papa ka barama mai bhi nae bataya... bcoz u had sme reasons behind it bt dance n luv why..?? why nt me i m also a normal girl who has sme dreams wishes i also want smene hw luvs me mre than u do takcre fr me ..is crazy abt me...she was sobbin n sayin al dis toh her mother..😭😡
Her mother smriti was shocked that Kria had soo much toh ask bt she never did..she was innocent..she was not to suffer fr her past...
Kria was nw losin her self she was abt to fall wen Rey hld her in his arms takes her to her room... Everyne follows them.. being in Rey's arms Kria smiles..
Kria:Rey aap mujh chodka maat jana ..pls.. pls..
She was beggin him to stay...Every wrd she spoke was abt Rey..
Rey: i wnt jst stop speakin mai yehi hu tumhara paas okh shh.. ekdum okh i m here nly Kria..
Adi gave her injection she was nw asleep fr some time... She was still holdin Rey's hand..he tried toh remove bt she had hld really tight..
Smirti saw all dis nd decided to tell Kria everything related toh her past...
Kria woke up after smetime n found Rey besides her fall asleep down ..because she was holdin him so tight...
Rey culd feel her presence...
Rey:Kria u need smething shuld i get u smethin..?
Kria:yes please..
Rey:ya say??
Kria:i need my chabilal bck ..i need my soul bck..i need my line- cutter bck..i need my life bck...😭
Rey:Kria stop cryin.. tum aaj kal bahut roti ho ..u see..😊
Smirti enters Rey was emptyin the place bt Kria holds him tight n pleaded nt to go everyne cme in..
Smriti:Kria i m srry ka i never told u that i myself was a dancer n i too luved a guy who was a dancer par tumhara dad ko kuch bana tha n he left me n u.. bt that doesnt mean ka i wil stop u.. fr al dis na... Wen i saw Rey so much carin fr u .. i thought history would repeat bt he luvs u mre than i do.. mre than ur dad luved me..isliye..St.louis mai hi tum padhoge n mujh tumhara dance se aur Rey se koi problem nae hai...😊
Kria hugs her mom n cries n say srry to her fr being rude...😭😊
Everyne was happy nw.. the gang was all alne Kria's mom had to go fr sme wrk...WID ADI..
Sharon:ab toh Kriyaansh ka dance banta hai kyu guys..???😃
Swayam:ufcourse Sharon asusal u r always rite..😉
Kriyaansh were blushin nw...☺️
Sng was played nw..
TUJHO KO JO PAYA YA... AAHA TOH JINA AAYA...HERE KRIYAANSH BTH LOST IN EACH OTHER FEELIN THE WARMTH OF THEIR RELATIONSHP... TRUE LUV ALWAYS WINS...😊

Thank u guys fr ur support n time pls do cmment thank u n miss u guys keep smilin 😊 its dil dosti dance...
*harshita/harshi*<3

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