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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Sorry for commenting late harshu
Awesumm...shivam ka plan barbaad...
wanna know wat wil happen nxt
plzz plzz updt sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
u didn't pm me dis time also?;(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Nirju99

u didn't pm me dis time also?;(

hey i m sorry bt i thought i m added in ur buddy list or u r added... no wrries i wil pm u this time fr sure...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
wen u planning to update/...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
srry guys late hogaya ... updte is here.. voh bhi... 😉



"3"
Adi(Doc):pls kriya ko safe jagah par le jayae...nw..
Rey:Mera ghar paas mai hi hai..so lets mve...
Everyne mved fast...Rey drived fast..

(Rey's room)
Adi:Kriya ko kaha tha maine dnt go... u guys dnt knw the truth n above... she is nt well... uska treatment chal raha hai...

Rey:kis cheez kya??
Adi:Rey woh depression ka last stage se fite kar rahi hai... its difficult stage jaha... par bahut himmat dekha ni padti hai...
(harshita: esa kuch nae hota depression mai...jst fr the ss..)
Neha:depression???😕
Vishaka:Kria??!!!!🤢
Swayam was nw silent no reaction... Sharon was scared abt him...
Sharon:Swayam pls say smethin...she needs u... she needs her best frnd wid her..
Adi:u r rite Sharon..guys c'mon... cheer up.. usse tumlogo ki saath ki jarurat hai c'mon..
Vicky:bt hw do u knw all of us...
Adi:smiles😊 let me tell u the truth..Kria ghai ek chulbuli..pyaari..fighter.. ek baar mai hi...shant kaise hogaye... apni dosti bachna ka liye..usne uska dil..aur dance... dono ko chod diya...!!!
Rey:u mean...??!! Kriya ne jhooth kaha...😲
Adi:haa..Rey she luvs u mre than her life... Smirti aunty ne shart rakhi thi..that agar she wants that weaklin part le toh usse Rey aur Dance ko chodna hoga hamesha ka liye... jst fr her dosti...
Rey:was nw feelin gulity very guilty...he was cryin..😭
Swayam was shocked he culdnt believe wat he jst heard...😲
Sharon:bt hw do u knw us...
Adi:Sharon.. pura din toh tum logo ki baat karti hai woh...
Nil:bt still...???
Adi:mai uska doctor hu..n her bestfrnd...
Adi sees Swayam ...
Adi:rather one of his bestfrnd...

After smetime Kria woke up...Adi had warned everyne nt to tel her that he tld them everyne abt the truth...
Kria:Adi hum kaha hai...??
Adi:madam i tld u na..tak rest.. its Rey's house.. par the problem is u hav to rest one whole day here nly...
Kria:Rey??? Rest..??? one day..??
Adi:haa kaha tha na maine...
Neha:Kria as u r ill u cn tell ur mom that u r stayin wid me...
Kria:thanks Neha...😊 par mai Rey ka ghar ...no i cnt..
Rey:u cn... i dnt mind...
Kria was shocked at everyne's behaviour... n she had doubt on Adi...😆
Neha n Vishaka cme n hugged Kria woh bhi warm hug..even... Simmi n Rinni.. gave her a hug...
Nw it was Sharon chance she was cryin she hugged her n said...
Sharon:Ms.Kripa...tum fighter hona toh fight this cmon win it understood... n smiles..
Kria:ab tum kah rahi ho toh.. lets fight...

Swayam was standin .. little away..!!!
Kria:Swayam tum nae aauga..???
Swayam cme runnin n hugged her...
Swayam:i m srry Kria mai tumhara best frnd aacha se nae ban saka..i m srry...!!!
Kria:oye..!!! no comments abt my besties...😃
Swayam n Everyne was happy nw to see Kria bck..😃
Kria:adi ka baacha..ruk tu toh gaya..!!!
Kria runs behind Adi..Adi warns her nt to Run bt Kria is Kria...
Kria:tune kyu btaya sab ko u promised me...
Kria was abt to fall frm bed..Par Rey hai toh y to fear..😉
Rey catches her... l2h2...
(*bg ohhoh..lala..*)
Rey:ab tum sirf meri baat manoge.. sirf aram karoge samjhi...😡(same pose mai bol raha tha..😉)
Kria:okh Rey lik a child...

(Kria tld Smirti she wil be wid Neha...gang left..Rey n Kria were alne in Rey's house..!!!
Rey:Kria medicines le na ka tim hogaya hai...cmon..!!!!
Kria:Rey abhi..??!! nae... mai nae lu gi..!!😒
Rey:Kria..cmon lik a good girl lo...!!
Kria:Rey bahut kharab hai ...yeh wali...🤢
Rey:aacha ... ice-cream kahna jayega... bs..😃
Kria:saachi... dance ki kasam..😃
Rey:dance ki kasam...😊
Kriyaansh ka h2l2..
(*bg tujhko jo paya *)
Rey:ab lo..!!
Kria:Rey i m sorry...!!!
Rey he knew y she was sayin that:i m sorry too..!!
Kria:ice-cream khae pls...????
Rey:haa..isliye mai ne ghar par hi maga de... lo chocolate flavour..
Kria was shocked😲: aapko abhi bhi yaad hai...
she was so happy...😃
Rey:"fortunately..tumse judi hui har baat mujh yaad hai...!!!😊" Kria blushes a bit...☺️

PRE-CAP: Gang givin.. a wel-cum party...
kya smriti accept karage Rey ko..??
kya Kria karage fite...??
to knw mre stay tunned...😃 nxt update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Woo nice update,finally kriyansh r together..krisha hug n kriyam were adorable.n update next part ASAP...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Amazing part:):)
Luvd it:):)
Hope smriti accepts rey...
Waiting for d next part:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Amazing Update harshita.
Thanks for pm.
Kriyaansh part was so cute,.
Finally gang came to know abt truth.
Waiting for the wonderful precap to happen.
Update next part soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
awesum update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: harshitagangwan




"3"
Adi(Doc):pls kriya ko safe jagah par le jayae...nw..
Rey:Mera ghar paas mai hi hai..so lets mve...
Everyne mved fast...Rey drived fast..

(Rey's room)
Adi:Kriya ko kaha tha maine dnt go... u guys dnt knw the truth n above... she is nt well... uska treatment chal raha hai...

Rey:kis cheez kya??
Adi:Rey woh depression ka last stage se fite kar rahi hai... its difficult stage jaha... par bahut himmat dekha ni padti hai...
(harshita: esa kuch nae hota depression mai...jst fr the ss..)
Neha:depression???😕
Vishaka:Kria??!!!!🤢
Swayam was nw silent no reaction... Sharon was scared abt him...
Sharon:Swayam pls say smethin...she needs u... she needs her best frnd wid her..
Adi:u r rite Sharon..guys c'mon... cheer up.. usse tumlogo ki saath ki jarurat hai c'mon..
Vicky:bt hw do u knw all of us...
Adi:smiles😊 let me tell u the truth..Kria ghai ek chulbuli..pyaari..fighter.. ek baar mai hi...shant kaise hogaye... apni dosti bachna ka liye..usne uska dil..aur dance... dono ko chod diya...!!!
Rey:u mean...??!! Kriya ne jhooth kaha...😲
Adi:haa..Rey she luvs u mre than her life... Smirti aunty ne shart rakhi thi..that agar she wants that weaklin part le toh usse Rey aur Dance ko chodna hoga hamesha ka liye... jst fr her dosti...
Rey:was nw feelin gulity very guilty...he was cryin..😭
Swayam was shocked he culdnt believe wat he jst heard...😲
Sharon:bt hw do u knw us...
Adi:Sharon.. pura din toh tum logo ki baat karti hai woh...
Nil:bt still...???
Adi:mai uska doctor hu..n her bestfrnd...
Adi sees Swayam ...
Adi:rather one of his bestfrnd...

After smetime Kria woke up...Adi had warned everyne nt to tel her that he tld them everyne abt the truth...
Kria:Adi hum kaha hai...??
Adi:madam i tld u na..tak rest.. its Rey's house.. par the problem is u hav to rest one whole day here nly...
Kria:Rey??? Rest..??? one day..??
Adi:haa kaha tha na maine...
Neha:Kria as u r ill u cn tell ur mom that u r stayin wid me...
Kria:thanks Neha...😊 par mai Rey ka ghar ...no i cnt..
Rey:u cn... i dnt mind...
Kria was shocked at everyne's behaviour... n she had doubt on Adi...😆
Neha n Vishaka cme n hugged Kria woh bhi warm hug..even... Simmi n Rinni.. gave her a hug...
Nw it was Sharon chance she was cryin she hugged her n said...
Sharon:Ms.Kripa...tum fighter hona toh fight this cmon win it understood... n smiles..
Kria:ab tum kah rahi ho toh.. lets fight...

Swayam was standin .. little away..!!!
Kria:Swayam tum nae aauga..???
Swayam cme runnin n hugged her...
Swayam:i m srry Kria mai tumhara best frnd aacha se nae ban saka..i m srry...!!!
Kria:oye..!!! no comments abt my besties...😃
Swayam n Everyne was happy nw to see Kria bck..😃
Kria:adi ka baacha..ruk tu toh gaya..!!!
Kria runs behind Adi..Adi warns her nt to Run bt Kria is Kria...
Kria:tune kyu btaya sab ko u promised me...
Kria was abt to fall frm bed..Par Rey hai toh y to fear..😉
Rey catches her... l2h2...
(*bg ohhoh..lala..*)
Rey:ab tum sirf meri baat manoge.. sirf aram karoge samjhi...😡(same pose mai bol raha tha..😉)
Kria:okh Rey lik a child...

(Kria tld Smirti she wil be wid Neha...gang left..Rey n Kria were alne in Rey's house..!!!
Rey:Kria medicines le na ka tim hogaya hai...cmon..!!!!
Kria:Rey abhi..??!! nae... mai nae lu gi..!!😒
Rey:Kria..cmon lik a good girl lo...!!
Kria:Rey bahut kharab hai ...yeh wali...🤢
Rey:aacha ... ice-cream kahna jayega... bs..😃
Kria:saachi... dance ki kasam..😃
Rey:dance ki kasam...😊
Kriyaansh ka h2l2..
(*bg tujhko jo paya *)
Rey:ab lo..!!
Kria:Rey i m sorry...!!!
Rey he knew y she was sayin that:i m sorry too..!!
Kria:ice-cream khae pls...????
Rey:haa..isliye mai ne ghar par hi maga de... lo chocolate flavour..
Kria was shocked😲: aapko abhi bhi yaad hai...
she was so happy...😃
Rey:"fortunately..tumse judi hui har baat mujh yaad hai...!!!😊" Kria blushes a bit...☺️



One word for ur update AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
Actually to copy ur full update is only one reason
that each and every word of ur update ids amazing i loved it
waiting eagerly for nxt update

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