TUJKO JO PAYA:KRIYAANSH SS...FINAL JAM ON PG 18 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
amazinggg update😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plzz Update Next Part Soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
okh guys mi bck.. wid another update.. chalo toh not talkin much... i wil start...n srry fr being late...

"4"

Kria: Rey i think i m gud nw so.. i wil leave nw...
Rey:Kria wait i wil drop u at Neha's place..
Kria:its okh na.. i wil go u dnt wrry...
Rey:aare abhi bhi same ho tum such a baat-cutter...
Kria was happy lik hell...
Kria:okh...
As they were mvin suddenly lights chali gaye...
(harshita:ab akela hai toh itna toh banta hai na)
Kria hugs Rey immediately...(*tujhko jo paya*)
Kria:Rey mujh andara se daar lagta hai...
Rey:mujh yaad hai Kria ...mai huna kuch nae hoga tumhe...
Kria *to herself*: i knw Rey aap mujh kabhi kuch nae hona doga...isliye toh i luv u...!!!
Rey was hearin every single wrd n was happy to hear all this.. bt pretends...
Rey:kuch kaha Kria!!!???
Kria:hmm...Nae..!!!

In 5 mins lights cme bck n ...*SURPRISE*
The gang was standin there...
Kria was shocked... bt really happy... that her frnds had dne all dis fr her...!!
Kria:guys... !!
Sharon:surprise kaisa laga..!!
Kria had tears in her eyes.. she hugs Sharon..
Sharon:hey Kria y r u cryin..??!!
Kria:i m srry guys i hav hurt u guys alot n thanks... i m really glad i hav frnds lik u...
Everyne was smilin nw...
Nil: give me the beat guys...
Vicky:boom...boom tak..boom..tak..
Nil:hai ek zindagi do usko ek chance...
Vicky:dekh ...dekho...ek chance...
Swayam:life is fun its full on masti...
Rey:dil se karta hai hum sab se dosti...
Sharon:its one thing which is our life...
Simmi:salsa ..bhangda... hip-hop n jive...!!!
Rinni:dil se karo dosti ...dil se karo dance...
Vishaka:lif is all abt dil dosti dance...
Neha:hey dil dosti dance...!!
Kria:hey..its a dil dosti dance...
dil dosti dance...
All:its dil dosti dance...
its dil dosti dance..
Everyne had a group hug.. everyne was havin fun..masti...
Kria:hey guys mujh na Swayam aur Sharon ka couple dance dekh na hai...
(harshita:Swaron couple hai meri SS mei... )]
Everyne:ooh...oohooo...
Sharon was blushin... n Swayam was smilin..
Rey:sng hoga pehla nasha...
Kria gives him a thumps up...
Rey smiles... Sng starts..
Pehla nasha..pehla khumar.. naya pyaar hai.. naya itezaar..
Swayam n Sharon lst in each other's eyes... njyin the time..the romantic movement wid each other...
Nw dancin in each other's arms..hayee so romantic...<3😳
Kria was bsy lukin at Rey n rememberin her best time wid Rey..Rey was smilin lukin at Swaron..<3
he didnt knew tht Kria was lukin at him... suddenly his eyes stick on Kria who was still lost in Rey's dreamworld.. nt knwin tht Rey is nw watchin her..
Swaron dance was over nw..everyne clapped... Kria cme bck to senses...n she too clapped... n she nw got that she was caught by Rey lukin at her..
Kria:SWARON... luv u guys...
Swayam:SWARON??
Kria:haa...Swayam+Sharon = SWARON<3
Sharon was blushin...☺️
Sharon:aacha bachu...jab tumahara saath hogana i wil pull ur leg... everyne was laughin...Kria eyes again stick on Rey...
Rey again notice this...he was sure she wanted to say smethin..
Rey*to himself*: baat-cutter ho kya gaya hai..??
mujh lagta hai she wants to say smethin...
Suddenly...
Swayam:okh nw Kria n Rey wil dance...
Sharon:yes...!! n the sng wuld be...😕
ALL: confused..
Rinni:tujhko jo paya...😃
ALL:LUKIN TOWARDS Rinni...n shocked...
Simmi:wah Rinni nic dne ...
Kria remembered there last dance.. she had tears in her eyes... she ran inside...😭😭
Rey:guys wait i wil bring her bck...
Rey:Kria...Kria..!!!
Kria was sittin in her room silently... cryin her heart loud...
Rey went inside n cupped her face... 😳
Rey:hey baat-cutter roe kyu rahi ho..?kya hua...??
Kria hugged Rey immediately... 😳
Kria:i m srry Rey ..mujh aapko hurt nae karna tha mera paas koi option nae tha..i was helpless...
Rey:par Kria?!
Kria:nae Rey aaj mujh bolna do...!!! i love u ..i always was..n will... par maa... ki wajah se...mai aap se durr hogaye mai aapka bigar nae rah sakti..😭😃
Rey was happy hearin all dis after such a long time he always wanted to.. n finally she had aacepted...
Rey:i luv u too Kria..!! n i promise mai sab thik kar duga.. ab chalo sab bhar wait kar raha hai...
They bth went out hldin each others hands...😳
Outside smene was waitin it was none other dan..MS.SMRITI GHAI...😡 She was really angry at Kria...
Smirti saw Kriyaansh 2gether...
Kria saw her mother... Smirti ..snatched Kria's hand n drag her wid her... Kria had enough for nw...
Kria:enough maa..!!!😡 Adi reached there...
bahut hoga ..nt anymre...

Pre-cap: Kria ka gussa... ek truth... n Kya hoga
Kriyaansh ka Reunion..?? fr all this
stay tunned...!!😃😊
Okh guys important thing...nxt part wuld be the lst part of tujhko jo paya... so pls do cmment n like as much as u cn... n happy readin... njy..
* loveharshita*

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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
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unres

So soo soo sorry for unresing it late!

Awsm update!

Kriyaansh dance! i soo wanted it!

And ye JKR phir apni taang beech mein le aayi!

Kabhi apni beti ko khush nahi dekh sakti kya ye?

Dekha nahi last time depression mein chali gayi thi!

Aur ab phir aa gayi waapis dono ke beech!

Anyways!

Thanx for pm and update soon

And main apni bak-2 mein toh bhul hi gayi!

Yippie first 1 to comment!
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
nice...kriyaansh ki dance :(

chalo next update mei dedo...

awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Awesome updt harshita...
waiting for nxt one
Jaldi updt karna
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
awesome part...loved it very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
it was awesome loved it
the way kria pour out her feeling to rey
was amazing
it was just fabulous
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
awesome
nice
please update fast
kriyansh look look is so nice
finally confession
wooow...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Awesome updt harshita...
waiting for nxt one

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