IPKKND FF:Perfection Th.3 (Chap 40 Pg 130)Upd:8/12 - Page 90

that was blazing hot!

Originally posted by: arisai

Again?

edit: I really don't understand how this keeps happening.

edit edit: Okay, so I will begin by saying what I assume a ridiculous number of the comments for this chapter will probably be along the lines of OMG THAT WAS SO HOT WISH IT WAS ARNAV AND KHUSHI PLZ 2 UPDATE SOON PLZ? (I also hope that some of the people who want to write that comment will see this and be embarrassed into trying to defy me and so put something more interesting for you 😆).

And now for the rest:

Every chapter of Perfection leaves me feeling like I've learnt something. Like I've had a conversation with a really wise friend who is imparting knowledge about the realities of life which makes my head spin. It makes it all the more satisfying to read. And can I just say, I think it's brilliant that it was all done through Payal and Aakash.

I loved the way you kind of lifted the veil on Payal's immaturity- the way you described her irrational and poorly thought-out plan to leave and helped her to grow as a woman through Aakash's understanding and explaining: Instead of making the two characters' calmness and serenity a weakness you've flipped it on its side and made it a quiet strength.

I think if I have to pick a favourite bit in this chapter, it would be how Payal and Aakash both came to the realisation that Khushi would fight for Arnav: that Arnav and Khushi share a love so different to their own but just as strong. Aakash once again helping Payal to grow in her understanding by explaining to her that Arnav does trust Khushi but can't show it. EEE I LOVE AAKASH OMG. He understands his brother and he understands that his wife DOESN'T understand his brother and he tries to fill in the gaps. He's perfect. He actually is. Is the title about him? Because it's fitting.

I actually want to thank you for using a chapter all the sex-fanatic fangirls will read to show Payal's adamant belief that she has the better husband. Payal wishing that Khushi could've gotten a husband who truly cherishes her like Aakash. I hope at least ONE la-la-land lunatic understands that a relationship doesn't have to be full of fights and pain and misunderstandings to be passionate and satisfying and truly loving.

Ooh and one final thing; the battle references, the preparation for "war", the warriors, the knights, the battle-lexicon etc. were genius. Seriously. Interspersed with the fact that it all took place in a bedroom with the people involved relaxing... While the last chapter felt like the calm before a storm, this one felt like people in the weather room looking at the charts and deciding "Ho shiz... We've got a hurricane approaching."

Another absolutely breathtaking chapter.

Hahaah I look forward to meeting Peanuts and/or Pookie Poo. And I don't know. Maybe you're secretly the Arnav to my Khushi and we have secret telepathic conversations which neither of us remember or discuss in the future?

wat the?????!!!! whoever wrote dis hats off to u!!! u sort of made it unnecessary for me to comment on dis chapter at all!! thnks for putting words to my emotions so perfectly n seamlessly!!! amazing update n amazing comment!!!👏

I knew they had it in them! 😉 The calm, meek exteriors had to harbour a deeper, more ferocious side to them. Akash is hotness personified because he gets it...all of it...mind and body.

good for u payal ... you go girl...

that was a mind blowing update! I wish the payal and akash in the show sshared such understanding! you make payash valuable for this story and i admire payal for the strength and sense of responsibility she possesses!
absolutely lovely update

Your payal is amazing. Just how a big sis should be.
Interesting insight in the Arhi relationship through the perspectives of postal and akash.
Payash are very realistic here and love how you've incorporated their story.

That was awesome. It is so nice to see that there is an actual functioning couple in your story in Payash, other than the constipated twins we have on screen. This is what I love about your work. Each character has a point of view, a mind and each one has his significance and role to play within the relationship equation of Arnav and Khushi, whether it be as a conscience, translator or moral support.

great update. have always loved the connection n understanding between payash here ryt frm the beginning! payal's understanding of her sister's psyche is remarkable.

It was a nice rendition of PayAsh relationship...A depth was given to them,which is not there in the show👏