IPKKND FF:Perfection Th.3 (Chap 40 Pg 130)Upd:8/12

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manjha

@manjha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#901

I absoultely loved this chapter! Amazing job Navin, you seriously out do yourself every single chapter! Akash, omg can I have him? Please? Like why is he so amazing! Like seriously, hes the best brother and best husband and best everything! I love the relationship between Payal and Akash, like theres that understanding between them and expecially Akash is so understanding towards Payal and takes it up on himself to make sure that all her qualms and worries are taken care of. Payal is an amazing sister, & like many, I loved the part where she said she wishes Khushi had someone like Akash, I mean she just wants Khushi to be happy and get all the happiness in the world and theres only so much she can do about it! Fab update again Navin!

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arhifrvr

@arhifrvr

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#902

omg!!!!!!!!!!! i never realised that it was payal and akash till u said it... 😲

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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#903

Just in love with ur writing.
Love akash n payels analyzing of their siblings

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#904

I am hooked to Perfection. That goes without saying. I read and read again and again the chapters. But this one is the best. The insight in the psyche of all four of them...superb.

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#905

Navin, fabulous chapter!!

What insight into the workings of Arnav's nature, what had caused it and how to work with it.

So glad Payal now knows what to do rather than running away...

Absolutely loved this line, "Well, now...every true knight needed a truly wicked witch, didn't they? A dirty fighter to even the odds, the witch with the answers and the spells and the potions... "

Can't wait to read how the two of them tackle the monster that is ASR!!!

Update soon 😃

Edited by pixiegirl - 13 years ago

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#906

Oh man...last 2 updates...were awesome!

Ch 39 -> Describing each of the 5 ppl's emotions...keeping it true to their character...Bravo, girl! 👏

Ch 40 -> Akash is the unspoken pillar of R family! No one should be fooled by his quiet demur...& they have found each other. Payal is such a sweetheart wishing her lil sis would have gentle lover like Akash & she would get that emotionally damaged soul; so her sis doesn't have to suffer! awww 🤗 for Payu!

-Sona