IPKKND FF:Perfection Th.3 (Chap 40 Pg 130)Upd:8/12

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#881

You've always paid equal importance to all the characters in your story, and that makes this story so unique... This update was no exception... Really like the compatibility b/w Payal and Akash, and the way they assessed the characters of their respective siblings so well... And last part about Khushi being the saviour, the knight and Payal being the witch ,to assist her, really intriguing...

And @ arisai, you understand general human behaviour so well... 😆

Edited by Happy-go-lucky - 13 years ago

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LilaUK

@LilaUK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#882

I cant wait to see what Payal has planned to help her lil sister. It's just about to get Interesting!!! I always loved your version of Payal but isn't it funny how it's always the younger siblings who end up being tougher. I always think the eldest in a family is mOre mature but the 2nd child has an ability to endure more. I find this with Khushi.

Fab update! Love love this Payal! Akash as always is a little meek for me. ;)

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zyanah

@zyanah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#883

wow payal is really incredible isnt she just like a true sister

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daljeet

@daljeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#884

well written dude.it was very refreshing to see akash n payal think n converse n communicate for their siblings.

loved the last line-wat kushi wud do to save her love n lover from the demons n wat role payal wud play in it.it was wonderful.loved tht last line.

i love payal in this.her thot of a reverse order payal-arnav,akash-kushi was a good thinking.but arnav-kushi cannot be changed or replaced.its a fact.feel sorry for arnav n kushi.i really want to see wat was in kushi's mind after all this

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daljeet

@daljeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#885

a bit busy dear.just read.well written.loved how akash n payal thot,analysed n communicated for their siblings.

also loved the last line wat kushi wud do to save her love n lover n wat role payal wud do in it.

loved payal in this

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 13 years ago

#886

oooh a hot update - i wish it was arnav and khushi - but payash tooo needs their due importance -

luved the update

thx for the pm

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Rachel

@FFFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#887

damn gud update..u analyzed arnav's charachter very well...knowing khushi ,she too must have got it all without any explanations..no matter wat i cant imagine payal and akash doing it.really cant

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Sarina2012

@Sarina2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#888

Have pity on some of us fasting souls. Such hot updates.. Will have to read that part later. However the quick scan that I gave that para told me immediately it's payash even if ur note wouldnt have. The Payal of your story is just amazing. I had mentioned in ur very early chapters that she was a chess warrior. Brilliant and articulate. She has the brains which I wish she had in the show.

Gosh the background of Arnav's past from aakash was scary. Dark love.. Not for the faint hearted is it? Wonder if many could have been able to handle it. Khushi has to be strong and am sure u would make her. And with Payal as the witch.. Bwahahaha!!

The previous chapter of arbav's realization that it's not arvin but him who hurt khushi was beautiful! Brilliant!

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jen_x

@jen_x

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Posted: 13 years ago

#889

lol the beginning surprise me haha.. It was sure hot... Akash and Payal hehe... Now we need one with arnav and khushi :)

Thank you

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aura9

@aura9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#890

Well love this Payal and Akash they share a solid bonding beyond words very unlikely to the show. I shouldn't compare.

I'm glad that Payal has decided to be Khushi's rock instead to taking her sister away from Arnav. She is finally empathizing with her baby sister as that is what she would have done if she was in Khushi's place.