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@PersieV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Wow!! Loved it!!!

At last Arnav told her everythinggg

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Amna.

@Wrappedinblue

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

superb update hamesha ki trha :-)
Arnav cnt cntrol himself! :D
He brought her home! :o
And he was to do... Ahemm.. Well so i thnk half truth is infrnt of khushi and she is the same bt the other part will surely break her n she may nt b the same.. But i really hope k she remains the same :(

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Good That She Stopped Him :) 🤗 I Loved That Scene, I Can Imagine Khushi Like That & Omfggg, He Told Some Parts Of The Truth . 😳

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Crinklez.

@Crinklez.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

OMG amazing.

Shocked that she was almost willing to 'do it'.

but it was so ...hmmm... whats the word... sexy the way Arnav asked her to come to his house😳

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Pr1yanka

@Pr1yanka

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

wow…this was like sooo soo good..u should totally write in detail...

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Arati

@RTlicious

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Gurl this was fab!!! I loved the intensity...and please be bold..the characters are sooo well written that the chemistry is leaping off my screen! Love it! :)

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

wowww...it was a greattt update...
im happy that he told her atleast half the truth...n u r an amazing writer dear,,

n about future track its up to u n the story if it demands to be descriptive or not...
n about the readers u can always mark ur update as 18+ and shooo away the kids...:)

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tata_tata

@tata_tata

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Ok i dont know about Khushi, but i am blushing right now!! intense!! but well written again..

you should know that i am reading about 5 FFs these days.. 3 of them have updated today.. and i came first to read yours :):) my fav!!

totally worth it.. but tell me.. why stop there... why didnt Arnav just rip the bandage and tell her everything about his life.. about his criminal being.. ofcourse i know why.. because this is not how she will find out.. she will find out in the worst possible way..and will be hurt and that will ruin everything!! damn!!

keep writing :)

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: tata_tata
Ok i dont know about Khushi, but i am blushing right now!! intense!! but well written again..

you should know that i am reading about 5 FFs these days.. 3 of them have updated today.. and i came first to read yours :):) my fav!!

totally worth it.. but tell me.. why stop there... why didnt Arnav just rip the bandage and tell her everything about his life.. about his criminal being.. ofcourse i know why.. because this is not how she will find out.. she will find out in the worst possible way..and will be hurt and that will ruin everything!! damn!!

keep writing :)

Because Arnav is scared of losing Khushi. Remember at the beginning, he had a nightmare about his childhood. That's the reason why he loses his control and tries to mark her as his own.

And well, what fun is there if everything gets revealed now?😉 I want to make it highly scandalous and shocking.😆