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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

you are beautiful writer.. you have brought in past horrible memories, passion, pain and love all so well together... excellent

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waterunder11

@waterunder11

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Oh damn! That was goood! ;)
Khushi couldnt have asked him in any other way about his parents. He wouldnt have answered other wise. Half truth is out..yay...was painful but..! :D
It wil be sad if she catches arnav in a midst of some job. That will come as a bigger blow to her than arnav telling her. There is also lavanya's story too. Oh god there is alot more to come huh?

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Hey!!!

Me has edited my comment, in case you didn't saw it; My comment is the first one!!!! 😆

Please check it out!??

Thanks for updating dear!

Edited by DarkDove - 13 years ago

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

loved it atleast arnav revealed something ...continue soon.

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nims6

@nims6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

wow...this chapter was so full of surprises...and i loved it...how you created that mood...well written...emoting their feelings and desires...we can feel the heat...and how he asked her to come to his house...and how she expressed her insecurities..how he disclosed his past...i just loved the move..it was so sensual...well written...totally loved it..

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smittap

@smittap

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Please write atleast 1 chapter if not 2-3 chapters about their love... you have a wonderful way with words. Ties the reader with the characters😊

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Saniya

@saniya.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

I just caught up with the last two updates and they were fab! I loved their intimate moment, glad for a fact that she stopped him! Finally half of the truth is out, can't wait to read!

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Mahnoor

@AngelMcQueen

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

that was incredible loved it and u r saying bbout boldness i dont think u were that bold i loved it waiting 4 he surenders and if u make the next part the most bold then give a mature content warningsjj